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beautiful chapter. very nice!
Okay I must admit here. whilst it would have completely ruined the Mood of the scene, I was half expecting Fluttershy to tip over like one of those Scared frozen goats. you know, lock up, completely frozen and just tip over.
6121860 I think I've got a similar event planned at some point down the road. Just need to remember what it involved.
6121891 Hmm. Well, still I thought it would have been hilarious. even if it would have completely ruined the mood of the moment.
YYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!! MORE PLZ!
6122224 Trust me dude. If you've read as much TVTropes as I have, you'd be counting down the chapters til the whole charade comes back to bite them in the ass.
I can only say one thing for about the baby and the married...Eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
well now I need to go get mu sugar checked this chapter is just so sweet and tender.
Harts Fire
Either Pinkie was so worried, she was slipping, or she wanted to be seen. After all, you dont know from behind which sapling or 4 leaf clover she can appear from nbext.
How long will they have to wait to tell him, or will there be a slip up or collection of occurances.
After all, there was those Plunder Seeds.
6124004 Plunder Seeds?
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Did you see him when he was going through it? And before? Logic takes a backseat to inexplicably strong emotions with James. They're smart to keep this from him. Even though it'll probably backfire in the end, at the moment it is a sound tactical decision.
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And look at all the military victories throughout history, since before the calendar ticked over to A.D. up until the present day. All those were won with tactical decisions. Plbbt.
I swear, this generation seems to hate wisdom and logic. D:
6124124 Pretty much every military movement runs on tactics. Just because you have a tactical retreat doesn't mean the enemy won't pull off a tactical intercept.
I pray James does not find out... the crumb trail has been placed. Let's all hope he does not grow too curious.
Anyway, nice job, Humanity. I'm not seeing anything out of the ordinary. Everything is shipshape as far as I can see. Fine job!
Awesome job! Keep it up!
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Because I am, you blasted whippersnapper.
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That's enough, guys. I don't want this argument taking up too much space here. And I especially don't want to get a notification with every reply you post to each other.
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No one's having an argument, Humanity. Just some jokes back and forth. You should relax.
6128292 Sorry about that. Carry on.
Over 1 million words..... I don't know if I could start this....
6142932 There is a bookmark function for the site if it'll help you manage your time better.
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I know.... I was just saying that I never started and there is a freaking lot of chapters to read....
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I can't remember reading this tbh.
None of the chapters are marked as read, the story is neither liked nor disliked, it's not in any of my bookshelves. Dafuq happened?
6188305 I don't fault you for thinking this way. I had not even been in the fandom for a full year at the time I started writing this story. And while I do still stand by some of the reasoning behind how I wrote this, if I started writing this story as I am now, I would have surely done a better job. But as it is now, I cannot possibly go back and rewrite the first volume while keeping it in line with the following arcs.
6191341 Hope to hear for more soon!!!! Best Wishes!
Well that's a shame I was hoping for Discord to live and become reformed. Ah well this whole they get married and them having a baby is awesome though. Excited for next chapter!!!
I'm only at the GGG and wow I love this story man! Please tell me you will finish this story! Also I have been showing it off in my High school English class and I may or may not have made a few extra bronies and pegesisters out of it xD!
6208976 Seriously? You're presenting this to your high school classmates? That's quite flattering...
6208976 If I may ask though... With so many people being exposed to it, what sort of specific feedback have your classmates been commenting on the story?
This sounded interesting... so I decided to download it so I can read it while I have no internet in the next week, cus camping.
This will definitively something I'll keep following if it can keep me interested enough, will comment opinion on actual story later.
6219910 You took that completely the wrong way. It was getting her muzzled caught under a stitch and pinning her jaw to the fabric, not having stitches put through her flesh. I would show the Pinky and the Brain skit that inspired that moment, but it doesn't seem to be on Youtube.
As for the lack of leg holes, that was brought on by my ex during the role play that spawned this story. No idea why she came up with that.
6220172 That's not what it says in the official MLP wiki. And it's not what Lauren Faust decided on.
Don't like it? Take it up with her. Also, I don't recall there being milk in cupcakes or even water. The eggs provide the moisture. And seriously? Since when is something alluding to death not something Equestria has been exposed to? Something killed Applejack's parents at some point. Of course it would be in their vocabulary. And if you need proof, rewatch A Friend Indeed and Owl's Well that Ends Well and see what happens. When owl's eat mice, they KILL mice. And when Pinkie Pie was stomping on a "big hairy spider", she wasn't trying to play with it. She was trying to KILL it.
I'm starting to notice a trend in your comments being needlessly confrontational and reminds me of a frustratingly immature little twit I had to put up with offsite. I don't want to come across as rude, but his actions have caused me to develop lower tolerance for needless nitpicking. The fish in the pie was a random Pinkie Pie moment suggested by my ex, stop taking it too seriously. And one aspect you do not harass a writer over is how to spell a character's name. Names like Owlowiscious in particular are a nightmare to spell correctly, so any writer worth his or her salt will make sure they get it right the first time. This goes for all names. And unless you have genuine criticism for the chapters, please keep your nitpicking to a minimum. I don't want to deal with this twice.
6219869 Men can be used interchangeably with stallions just as "girls" have often been used instead of "mare".
Have and had depend entirely on whether or not the state of what is being described was brief or is constant with future happens. It also depends on whether the writing is actually taking place at that moment. Not everyone writes a journal in just one swoop.
Rarity describing that scene as darling is exactly something she would say.
Three dots may be the most common, though I have seen five dots used at times. Depends on the length of the pause.
6220600 You do know that's just fan art, right? They're zombies, even if not quite the typical shambling mindless ones that follow the usual stereotype. That only serves to make them all the more exceptional and dangerous.
6220784 Sapient is also a term that largely applies to just humans. Hence the term Homo Sapiens. Sentience has a broader spectrum, which is why I prefer it. Besides, it's the more widely used term to identify a being as having human level intelligence and consciousness.
6224025 I'm not even going to waste my breath on this. I've already explained this more than once already and I'm tired of repeating myself. Before you even comment on something like this in a chapter that's more than three years old, check the comments under the chapter first to see if your criticism hasn't already been made by someone else and has been addressed by the author. I can't be bothered to keep an FAQ around for new readers.
6229198 Watch A Canterlot Wedding or Slice of Life again. Monogamy is the norm in Equestria. And I go for realism in my stories.
*edit* Man, I love how people downvote this just because I'm not really in favor of polygamy in MLP stories solely for lots of hot sex scenes to appeal to their fetishes and boners.
I like reading comments on how some one wants the story to go when its clearly not up to them. Then see the next chapter do something completely different and watch the chaos.
But that's just me
6236172 Well, since I personally did not find out who Doctor Who is until after the fandom popularized Doctor Whooves as a parody of him, that says a lot. My interests do not include sci-fi series. You need to keep that possibility in mind before you judge. I know you've got some mental issues as stated on your account, but knock it off. Now you're the one who's starting to make me angry. Keep being this aggressive and I just may block you to shut you up.
6230242 i love your story man. Youre style is so refreshing and long as fuck! Which i love to death. The detail is so damn real i can picture it most of the time. I hope you continue on and don't let dumbasses get in the way of what you love to do. I'm still reading through the last handful of chapters you have up, but it's been a roller coaster. Keep up the amazing work my friend.
Dang, so many feels!
needs to be we
is that line meant to read as
or was it meant to be DAY by day?
Shouldn't this be day by day?
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It’s a first draft typo. I’ll fix it eventually.
It's a good thing Shining Armour came up with that lie.
And I love them too as a teenage boy.
Azaleas are one hell of a drug
No 'teeth' is the correct term.
You could use an ultrasound, when the baby is old enough to see what it looks like.
A song comes to mind from the movie "TOPGUN"
" Highway to the Danger Zone " "We're going on The Highway to the Danger Zone "We're heading right into the Danger Zone "We're flying right into the Danger ZONE The Danger ZONE !" "The Danger ZONE ! "