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But the story is amazing! Did you piss 'em off or something?

1170643 Now I'm only more confused.

1170643 Did Poultron take care of that hacker for you. I remember seeing your conversation with him. Also, when ever I went back to try to read this story, it was gone, and I know I wasn't crazy. Glad it's back, and it will be one of my number one priorities once I am free.

I'm confused...what is happening?

so your re-uploading them?
content rating... 'everyone'....
until chapter 6 XD

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I am enjoying it very much.
Why would they delete this amazing story.

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Hate... that is all really.

1170837 Aww, okay. Just as long as you don't have to deal with the hacker and all.

Even among the bronies there is hate...
I thought bronies all loved and tolerated...I was wrong...
Why must there be bate in this wonderful pony filled land of ours? Aren't we all the same...why hate each other? Anti-bronies cause enough hate...
That was my little speech there, hope y'all liked it.

I wonder why I didn't read this when it was up the first time... it's awesome!!

1171058 Agreed, I don't understand why bronies are flaming, and causing hate, between one another. Lucky, for me, I just brush it off, and I forgive and forget. I don't care about insults enough to start an argument about them. By the way do you have any stories I can read? Recommendations or personal stories? I'm going to go to your profile to see if you have any stories of your own, so you don't have to tell me those. Unless you have a few and there is a certain one of your bunch that you want to recommend to me.

I don't have any stories written by me...I almost start then I either get pulled away from it from something or I am just too lazy.
Displacement is a good story, I can't remember the names of the others.

I have a good idea...But my computer cord is not working so I am forced to operate from my kindle...the pony creator is hard to do on a mobile.

Look at my fave's, I am sure you can find a good story.

good story so far I like it

I like all of it it's awesome!!!!!!!

I can't believe someone would take this down, Hacker be gone I say! Lol but was there ever a real reason they took it down other than they thought you were a pedophile? I mean the story I like, But I have a question about it, how old is the guy? He carries a DS around with him (Not gonna say anything bad about it, I to have sometimes play a DS at times for no reason) and he cries, but so do I sometimes, well forget what I said but his age I would like to know, because alot of things don't add up to me and I can't put him in a certain age group in my mind to get a clear image of him, like is he 12 or 13 or is he older but likes nintendo stuff and is sensitive to critiscism? Or did I readto fast and it explained that?

“Rarity, have you seen my clothes?” Really? Is he naked?

This story is mother-bucking amazing.

1175251 he was using underwears in that moment

yes i myself am confused of james age o.0 he would be at least 16 tho im guessing

u know rarity has a sister that live with her occassionally

“I….. I’ll kill you…..”

She have some issues

So it's two chapters in and he's already moved in with Rarity, proposed they sleep together, creepily taken pictures of Fluttershy sleeping and then slept with her without even waking her up, assaulted a filly and touched her flanks, somehow made Rainbow Dash think he's a cool guy by crying, which apparently turned her on and made her blurt out that she would totally date him. Lol what is pacing. It's not like, bad or anything, but there's too many damn cliches and stuff is just happening really fast for no reason, and the characters are acting weird. Like "Oh hey what are you? Oh a human. Want a job? Wanna move into my place? Wanna go on a date? Wanna cuddle by the lake?" Some fics take a long time for the protagonist to even get acquainted with the mane 6, this feels really rushed and forced. I can only assume you're trying to get to some big thing that happens in a few chapters or something I spose I'll read on.

How in the world did a big burly guy like him get the name ‘Macintosh’?

The company gets their name from a type of apple...

The pegasus began to slowly approach me as I started to feel a sinking feeling in my gut. “You know what that is, right? Bestiality?” I nodded silently. Rainbow Dash then got right up in my face as she growled, “So, does that mean we ponies are just animals to you? Mindless beasts that hang out in stables all day and graze on grass and nothing else?! Whatcha gonna do next? Throw a bit in my mouth and ride me home?!”

Where did she get this particular piece of knowledge?

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They have non-evolved non-sapient horses in Equestria my friend.

Even if your body is somewhat unappealing

Damn. Shots fired, people.

I don’t want to be arrested for bestiality

Holy shit. We are going to DEFCON 1, people!

I faced palmed(and managed to put my eye) when he said that to dash and shy I was like you dumbass(him not me)but he so redeemed himself when dealing with them bullies.

He says something totally unwitty<<
Rarity says, "you are as witty as you are charming," to it<<y

4011016 Not everyone has the same personal viewing of wit. You're the first person to not find that line witty, from what I have seen.

Does Sweetie not live with Rarity? They are sisters and the show hardly mentions their parents so where is sweetie sleeping in this world?

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Cue air horns

Cliche count:

-Human "just suddenly appears"
-Human appears in Everfree Forest
-Human instantly accepted by ponies
-Overblown "OMG Carnivore" reaction
-Instant friends with Mane Six
-Romance with Mane Six
-7th Element of Harmony
-Human works at Sweet Apple Acres
-Human accepts life in Equestria
-Instant rivalry with antagonists.

...And I'm only on chapter 2. I'll keep reading, but 10 major cliches in 2 chapters does not bode well. I sincerely hope you manage to improve this story with experience.

He seems to get everything he wants when he wants it
WHERES THE DEPTH AND .... STUFF
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5046640 honestly cliche's are what make stories good for me. also the element thing isn't hinted at yet you could only get that from the title. and if you think overblown carnivore reaction was in this story, get a new dictionary cus this was no overreaction.... if anything apple jack's reaction was kinda lacking. plus the appearing in everfree cliche is better then twilight or random magic user brings him on accident on a messed up spell.

James finding the situation of Rarity accidentaly stitching her muzzle into fabric with a sewing machine amusing is like finding the situation of someone having their upper lip under the needle of the sewing machine and then beginning to sew amusing.

That's a situation that leads almost directly to a trip to the hospital since you have multiple stabwounds in your upper lip, probably ripped a giant gap in the upper lip as you instinctively pulled your face back from the pain whilst the needle was still going up and down, pulling inevitably germ covered threads through your upper lip, which will most likely lead to severe infection unless treated almost immediately.

...And now I read the two paragraphs under that one...

Ok... Imagine someone taking your face, forcing your mouth open and then force your jaw under a sewing machine's needle and then beginning to sew... Multiple arteries will without a doubt be punctured and will be at the very least, lethal.

It is a seriously brutal and gory scene to behold.

For James to find such a scene amusing is really out of character in my opinion.
The fact that Rarity thinks so too despite being the one to end up experiencing such a thing is even more out of character in my opinion.

So I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and say that you probably meant to use different words there so that the meaning of the paragraphs aren't so grimdark.

Also, how could rarity forget to make the leg holes, seeing as during winter wrap-up and in Canterlot, ponies wear jackets/vests.

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Have to say, only one i dont agree with is the carnivore one, I feel like this is actually a realistic reaction, since they have NO idea what his meatly diet consists of,

I don't see why people are being so cynical this is fan-fiction it really doesn't have a quality yes it's somewhat force but come on there's only so much a writer can do without help

Diamond Tiara began to look absolutely furious at my denying returning her cutie mark. “I….. I’ll kill you…..”

Wow, that's something you don't hear from fillies!

6740080 Well if they are anything like most children I know then they have a massive amount of 'colourful' language to use.

I can't believe that most ponies are stronger than James when he's twice the size of them.

6803939 You have to remember they're magical horses while he's a chubby human.

Yeah, I certainly am getting into the story a bit more now. But I will admit it is very slow paced and not really a lot happened in this chapter other than him trying to find a job and yet it was 12,000 words long. You certainly do write at a very slow pace. I'm sure it appeals to some people but I find it quite painfully slow at times. I feel like this chapter needed to be about 5,000 words max and have all the events that happen in it. I guess this is why it's so long.....

I will also say there are stuff I enjoyed though. The attraction he feels towards Fluttershy is actually less cringeworthy then I thought it would be, I wouldn't say I enjoyed it, but I can tolerate it. The thing I genuinely am enjoying though is the relationship between James and Rarity, I think it is quite nice to see their relationship evolve and the way they interact with each other. I am a little interested in how this guy will manage to get by in Equestria, so I suppose you could say I'm invested to some degree. In the main, at the moment I would still say this is your average H.I.E fiction.

I'm going to go to chapter 8 now, see if things pick up there.

I snickered at the name of her brother. “Wait a sec….. Big… Macintosh? Really?” I expected her brother to be a frail geeky type of pony obsessed with computers and the like.

First, m(M)acintosh is a variety of a(A)pple. Second anyone who is obsessed with computers probably either has a desktop with Windows (for games), or a PC with Linux (for programming and such).

Jesus Christ, this fic came out in the time of the DSi? I pretty much forgot that thing existed.

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Actually, the DSI came out in 2009. So, almost.

I have finally found it. I read this story several years ago when I hadn't made an account yet, then I lost it. But now by random luck, I HAVE FINALLY FOUND IT!!!!

7664008 Yeah I still have mine from all those ages ago... still works. o.o

I'm ambivalent towards this story. I can't (and won't) down vote, because it is reasonably well written. I have noticed continuity errors, though. For example, wouldn't Rarity have noticed a random electronic device in James' pants pocket while she was using his clothes as a template? Wouldn't she have then asked him about it? He just randomly has it in his pocket in this chapter...

The ponies don't have computers here, so how would only 'most' shops not take debit cards? I'm sure they wouldn't even know what an EFT machine actually is...

Also, the 'relationships' here are progressing stupidly quickly. Unless Flutters and Dash are whorses (which they most certainly aren't in this particular story), it's hard to believe that either of them would be behaving the way they are in this chapter...

The story is still fun to read, even if it's progressing extremely quickly at this point. Zero to friendship in a single day?