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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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This story is a sequel to Nopony Interrupts My FRIENDSHIP SPEECH, Starlight Glimmer!!


After a failed rescue mission to save Princess Twilight Sparkle, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Spike, Flurry Heart, and the other Princesses, Starlight Glimmer found herself helpless against the might of Queen Chrysalis and the Changelings. It looked to be all over for them and Equestria.

That is, until Starlight started acting odd when Chrysalis teasingly said "friendship speech" and Thorax informs Chrysalis why Starlight was acting the way she did. Afterwards, things got nuts.

Will Twilight and the others be saved from their cocoon prisons, and will Chrysalis be able to help(?!) Starlight?

This story takes place during the events of the season 6 finale. But the season 5 finale did not happen in the continuity of this story, but Starlight is reformed and is still Twilight's student. This story's predecessor would explain why, and it took place during the season 5 premiere.

However, it's not mandatory to read it first to enjoy this story (and laugh) since enough will be explained to understand what's going on.

Last but definitely not least, special thanks to TheHardie-Boy For proofreading this story.

EDIT: Made the featured list on 09/19/19!!

EDIT on 09/20/19: After thinking about it, I added the "Dark" tag to this story. It should fit what will happen in it.

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But seriously, I'm going to have a Draconequus-to-Alicorn talk with Twilight later, because she's getting out of control with her punishments!

:ajbemused: Oh, really? I didn't notice.

Twilight looked to the unconscious Changelings, chuckled, and commented, “And if they think ‘The Works’ is bad, they really don’t want to know what ‘The Ultima’ is.”

Do I even wanna know?

The Ultima? As in, End of all magic ragnaroc Ultima? EEP.

Twilight looked to the unconscious Changelings, chuckled, and commented, “And if they think ‘The Works’ is bad, they really don’t want to know what ‘The Ultima’ is.”

Yes, I do want to know

First impression of The Works(without knowing what it is): Oh please, I could handle that just as easily as The Treatment!!! How bad could it be??

After this:
But, because they literally asked for it, she explained, “‘The Works’ is hearing the voice of Pinkie Pie screaming my friendship speeches, 24/7, and it's in twice the volume of her loudest scream. And Chrysalis can’t even cover her ears to try to muffle it.”

*nervously sweating and looking terrified*

Oh god. I think I'm gonna die. That's horrible...

Twilight looked to the unconscious Changelings, chuckled, and commented, “And if they think ‘The Works’ is bad, they really don’t want to know what ‘The Ultima’ is.”

As terrified as I am to know...I'm actually really curious as to what The Ultima is.

*prepares for the horror*
Alright. Lets hear it.

Seriously though, I would love to see a third installment. This is a brilliant piece of writing. Very brilliant.

Part 3. Part 3! PART 3!!!

..... This story proves what i always assumed....
That you are %100 insane.


I like that.

Well, you've officially dig yourself a hole to the bottom of the earth. I'll probably be joining you when I finish one of my stories, don't know which one

Discord initially had little interest in assisting, until Starlight pointed out that Fluttershy was one of the ponies taken. He then became VERY interested in helping.

Yes. Fluttercord. Yes.

Also I know it's canon but how could you not ship them this episode? I've never seen him rage before. And his motives are for her specifically. It's just - EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

But, because they literally asked for it, she explained, “‘The Works’ is hearing the voice of Pinkie Pie screaming my friendship speeches, 24/7, and it's in twice the volume of her loudest scream. And Chrysalis can’t even cover her ears to try to muffle it.”

SHE CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH IT!!!

I can think two things Twilight couldn't torture with friendship species. The dead and the grim reaper.

But, because they literally asked for it, she explained, “‘The Works’ is hearing the voice of Pinkie Pie screaming my friendship speeches, 24/7, and it's in twice the volume of her loudest scream. And Chrysalis can’t even cover her ears to try to muffle it.”

I HAVE NEVER KNOWN TRUE HORROR BEFORE NOW.

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Probably not, just it will be revealed in part 3.

9841248

Nope, it'll be worse! EEEEEEP!!

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Well, you're been warned. You might not be able to get the visions of "The Ultima" out of your head when what it's revealed though...

9841303

Thanks! And a third installment will be written. Not sure when it be out, but probably sometime next month.

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It will be coming. But you SURE you can handle the terror of "The Ultima"?

9841402

Well, if it isn't "The Goat" himself! You still trying to defeat Twilight?

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Well, I always did want to travel :rainbowlaugh:

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No kidding. Discord went from literally yawning to "I'll kill them!" in mere seconds!

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Maybe, but do you want to get in Twilight's way? I can't even stop her, or she'll break the 4th wall to give me "The Treatment/Works/Ultima"!

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I don't know. Twilight just might find a way to do it, if they get her mad enough.

9841954
Now I'm wondering what would happen if a deaf person interrupted one of Twilight's friendship speeches

But Queen Chrysalis’s throne, made from the writers' way to nerf Discord an ancient dark stone

This is a funny line, but it brings up something the show has always struggled with. The show often presents conflict without ever explaining it. The only exception I can think of here is Starlight herself. Every other villain, we get little to no motive or backstory other than plot drive

9841974

I would say that Twilight would first use her magic to fix their deafness, then give "The Treatment".

9841986

We got it with Luna and Stygian too, even if it was truly another entity that became the "villain" (NMM and the Pony of Shadows)

Unless we count Tempest, or Discord in the season 4 finale, I think Starlight's the only major villain (unless the season 9 finale change it) that both had reasons shown for why she became a villain and didn't have a darker entity take over.

9842002
I honestly forgot about Stygian, but I don't really think Luna counts as an actual backstory

I wasn’t that far off on the works I see, different voice and different method of cacophony than I stated but otherwise close. So The Ultima must be multiple works with an (intentionally) annoying voice?

9841994
but what if their 'deafness' is incurable

9842002
well there is also Tirek… sorta, all we get about him was in the season 4 finale where he appeared, and all that was said about him was that he was a power hungry lunatic whos brother betrayed him for friendship
but you also have to remember, this is all based on what the show has told us, not what the comics have told

“Yeah! If she grits her teeth any tighter, she’ll break them! And then she’ll break every bone in our bodies!”

"We have exoskeletons! We don't have any bones in our bodies to break!"

Thorax walked to the unconscious Chrysalis.

Hey, who unstuck him?

But Queen Chrysalis’s throne, made from the writers' way to nerf Discord an ancient dark stone and lay deep in the Changeling Hive, negated the brave rescue team’s magic, except Thorax’s.

What's the difference?:derpytongue2:

Twilight’s horn, which was still glowing from holding Chrysalis in place, glowed brighter. A narrow beam hit Chrysalis in her chest and she fell to the floor with a thud, yet there was no scream. Her pupils paled from green to a gray color, though her cerulean mane covered one of them.

Starlight, looking to Chrysalis with a sympathetic frown, said, “Oh, poor Chrysalis. I feel bad for her now.”

“I don’t,” Twilight declared.

Thorax walked to the unconscious Chrysalis. “Uh, can somepony fill me in on what just happened? Why is Chrysalis not moving?”

In a normal tone of voice, Twilight explained, “She’s getting ‘The Works’.”

“Huh?”

“You see, as we speak, Chrysalis’s consciousness is in a lightless void where she can’t move or speak. In that void, she’s experiencing the most agonizing, torturing thing possible in Equestria, and it's far worse than ‘The Treatment’.”

“How long will you make it last?” Starlight asked.

“A year, and then I’ll reverse the spell to bring her back, but she will return a mental wreck. This will teach her to leave my niece alone!”

The quote Ronald Weasley, "You're a little scary sometimes, you know that? Brilliant... but scary."

But, because they literally asked for it, she explained, “‘The Works’ is hearing the voice of Pinkie Pie screaming my friendship speeches, 24/7, and it's in twice the volume of her loudest scream. And Chrysalis can’t even cover her ears to try to muffle it.”

I thought you were supposed to put her in the furnace for a time, then the deep freeze for a time and then in that state. Then kill her.

this is genuinely horrifying

Twilight is becoming a monster

Fluttersy should kill Chrysalis, its the kind thing to do

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That's the point

There isn't one:pinkiecrazy:

Whats "The Ultima"?

9841954
Of course.
And thank you for calling me the Greatest Of All Time.

You ruined it. I was having fun until halfway in and you ruined it. Plus it got real dark near the end.

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(Total non-sequitr) Awesome avatar, btw.

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Hey, who unstuck him?

I take the lessons I've learned from Applejack and won't lie: I forgot about getting him unstuck. Fixing it now!

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My point is, almost all the show's villains have rushed or cliched backstories or motivations, save for Starlight and Stygian (and yes, power hungry is a cliche)

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I means that another sequel is in the works...somehow I get the feeling that a certain pink pegasus filly with a turquoise mane styled like Shirley Temple is going to find out what "The Ultima" is...her or Sombra...maybe even the whole League of Villains.

Sequel! I want to see Cozy Glow get "The Ultima"!

9841402
Your getting the ultima, calling it now Grogar

Ooooo! :pinkiegasp: Interesting! Loved it! :pinkiehappy:

9843089

A sequel will be coming! Will Cozy Glow get "The Ultima? The answer will be in the sequel!


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Thanks, and glad you liked it so much!

Pharynx pointed up to the ceiling, which still held the cocoons of Twilight’s friends, Flurry Heart, and the other Princesses.

Twilight and Starlight proceed to only rescue Flurry Heart and the rest of the Mane 6, because the others are bucking useless and Equestria and the Crystal Empire are better off with Twilight in charge.

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That'll be fun and it'll be more interesting if you use the idea that Cozy might actually Canonically be an adult mare with a stunted growth as part of her backstory as Big Jim himself actually heavily hinted to that on Twitter, saying Babydoll from Batman was one of her inspirations when asked about her. That explains a lot about Tartarus being her first punishment and why it isn't extreme anymore. Plus blunts the backlash of the finale punishment when it airs officially in a few months.

nice work.:twilightsmile:

The Ultima:
Teleporting Grogar into an empty, featureless room, deprived of magic. There is only one thing there--a single portrait, hanging on the wall.

But the picture frame is crooked.
And no matter how much you try to put it back into place, he can never fix it.

I am now terrified of what "The Ultima" may be. The Treatment was bad enough, the Works a work to be absolutely terrified of. If the Ultima is worse than that, then I think no mind will not break from it, even a mind as twisted as Discord's own would not be safe.

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When you're a Final Fantasy fan and you hear the word "Ultima". :rainbowderp:

9843334
I'll be looking forward to it!

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