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Due to a clerical error, everyone's favorite Cutie Mark Crusadering Pegasus Filly accidentally dies and goes to Heck. It kind of sucks for her, but there is some hope for her to return to the world of the living, and she doesn't have to turn into a zombie to do it, either! With the help of a mysterious and badly-designed Alicorn OC, can she make her way to meet the King of Heck and plead her case to return to life?

This is just a dumb idea I got from a combination of Mario Romhacks and too much chocolate milk. Labeled as "Dark" due to a death, but it's more of a silly comedy.

Vector in the Cover Image by starwarsmike1 ( http://starwarsmike1.deviantart.com/#/d4g7mlx )

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 286 )

It takes major guts to kill off a character in less than half a screen.

This has potential. And it has a pony named Dave, which for some reason I find hilarious.

the music is so fitting...:pinkiehappy:,yaeah it will be an epic adventure that will be remembered in the assholes of time

This is by far the most original thing I have read here. You made proud with this one. :pinkiehappy:

Please continue it because so far everything has been flawless.

Favoriting so I get updates for each new chapter. This looks like it'll have just the right balance of stupid and awesome to be massively entertaining.

I would love to see this in the feature box. It's just... :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::derpytongue2::twilightsmile::yay::trollestia:.

Tracked and upvoted.

I am stupidly excited for this. You'd better make this good! :pinkiesmile:

So random I love it! And its about Scoots! Two of my favorite things!:pinkiehappy:

I just love the use of Heck! :rainbowlaugh:

Oh god what

This is awesome

This can really go places :pinkiehappy:

I can smell this fic already.

:unsuresweetie: Scoots is going to the good half? :scootangel: Seems so very very legit.

Looks like a fun read :rainbowwild: Tracked.

HAY! I am NOT a screw-up, take that back!


I just got a weird sense of deja-vu here...

Lookin good. Lookin real good. :moustache:

Is this the same Heck as in a certain book I read [strike]once[/strike]twice?


Well, I'll still read it.

why not just call it hell

>Reads description
Sheesh, sounds like something out of a bad fanfic...

Wait a minute...

Joking aside, this has me intrigued. By all means, continue.
Yes, I read it.

There are a couple spelling errors in here... Hard to put my finger on.... Oh here it is. Hell* or Pony Hell*

Too bad you are still getting a like fave and a track! Mwahahahahaha-oh wait.


I think it's a reference to Powerpuff Girls.

HIM ruled Heck.

After such beginning, all I want now is grab popcorn and see how will the plot develop through next chapters... IF THERE WERE ANY! :raritycry:

Fix this issue ASAP, pretty please :scootangel:

This is fun... scary, butt fun.

Also... This Scootaloo emticon is pretty bad joke... It was unintentional, really.

Oh, and I hate spoilers. If I were Scootaloo, I would've kicked this Dave in face so hard that he'd remember it till our next meeting, that in 87 years.

1037925 This joke is too old. Butt I still laugh at them.

The music made this fic. Also, I finished reading this before the song ended.

Bureaucratic afterlife. Huh. Well, this looks interesting so far. Wonder what madness the 7 trials will be. Tracking.

Well played, sir, well played. I'm keeping an eye on this one. :scootangel:

1038003 Likewise, I'm glad I didn't get a collective "what are you talking about."

I don't know why, but the title alone was enough to make me laugh my ass off.

I have high expectations for this fic, it looks really funny so far.

1037764 Who ever said that? :trixieshiftleft:

*reads the description*
Too much chocolate milk?
Since when is there such a thing as too much chocolate milk? :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

*puts on read later since he is busy right now* :twilightblush:

Remember kids, if you ever think about clopping, YOU WILL EXPERIENCE AN ETERNITY OF PAIN AND SUFFERING IN HELL!!!:flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::trollestia: So be good, ok?:scootangel:

This was lighthearted enough to be entertaining while not absurd enough to be super OOC. Good job. :rainbowlaugh:

Scootaloo is dead fic...
Alicorn OCs...
Why am I faving this...

Before reading: Reminds me of Futurama. "I DARN YOU TO HECK!"

After Reading: Huh, this looks interesting. Wonder if we'll get cooked scootachicken... of divine flavor! :scootangel:

Am I the only ones who drew parallels to Yu Yu Hakusho? Anyone else?

...just me then. Nevermind!

Normally wouldn't read this kind of story,but this is just too good :pinkiehappy:

Meanwhile Back in the world of the living Ponies...

EXPLICIT CONTENT*Black sensorship screen*

:unsuresweetie:: Oh my Celestia, Scootaloo's dead!
:applecry:: Sc-Scootaloo, NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
:rainbowdetermined2:: Hey girls What's up, :rainbowhuh:... Girls, Sweete Belle?, Apple Bloom?:rainbowhuh: *Looks to where the girls are watching*:rainbowderp:.....Sweet Mother OF CELESTIA WHAT THE HECK HAPPEND!
:pinkiehappy:: HEY GIRLS, I was just coming to see you to ask you if any of you can help me to make som cupcakes but suddenly I got this werid pinkie sense thath I've never had before... exept when mom and dad said that Granny pie went to ethernal pastures.... Girls?, Girls?!, GIRLS!!!
*all of them points at the wreckage* :pinkiegasp:.....:pinkiesick:*pukes inmediatly without caring if somepony watch her doing it* :pinkiesad2:Scooty, why!, why did you had to try that stunt with the flaming ring, the cage of manticores, the pool of sharks, and a mime doing tricks with multiple invisible chainsaws!, WHY!!!:pinkiesad2:

Looking from affar Twilights checks a little note book that's entitled as a "Death Note"

:twilightsmile:: Scootaloo, death by epic scooter stunt with cage of hungry manticores, sharks, and an invisible chainsaw weilding mime... Spike!, write this and send it to Princess Celestia
:moustache:: Ready whenever you are Twi
:twilightsmile:: Dear Princess Celestia... everything is going acording to the plan, Your Faithful student: Twilight Sparkle

Wish I had something more insightful to say, other than love it. Favorited.

Seeing/Reading this reminds me of 'Fluttershy goes to Hell'.
I can't wait for the next chapter.

Dave, Terry, Trevor, Jason, Bluey...Delores. Those have to be the above all best pony names ever.

I love the ending of the phone conversation.

"...Ha ha, okay. See you at the reunion...love you too, bye."

I love how you use Heck.

"...Wait, mister-"

"Just call me Dave."

"...Dave, don't dead ponies go to Tartarus? Why is there Heck?"

"Nah, that's just a front. Tartarus is actually just a large cave system underneath the Everfree Forest...I could tell you more, but then I'd have to kill you."

"But I'm already dead!"

"You catch on quick, kid. Well, you see, legend says that the late and great warrior, Danny, hid his sword in the tunnels of Tartarus. Now, a lot of adventurers have gone in search of his great weapon, but no..."

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