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Puddles, bubbles, muffins, momma and poppa... these are some of the things that make little Ditzy Doo one of the happiest fillies in the world. Even on a rainy day, momma and Ditzy find a way to have fun. Because when Ditzy is happy, the whole world is happy.

Inspired by, though not directly related to, the song by Blind Melon.

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Lovely little story about the past of Derpy/Ditzy and her present life. :pinkiehappy:

Hnngh, my heart. This is so sweet and well written, though I do have a question on why you chose poppa instead of papa?

D'aaaaw.

So adorable, I loved it!

#5 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

That was beautiful. I loved your use of simple, child-like language to describe the scene from Ditzy's point of view.

Very sweet story. This was great, and set the mood perfectly. I crown thee Muffin King.

D'awwwwwww. That was such a sweet story. And well written, too. I just :heart: :derpyderp1:, she's so sweet.

Very image rich story, and a quick read. Just one suggestion. When using 'Momma' or 'Poppa' as a name, be sure to capitalize them, unless you were going for a stylistic approach.

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