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Well there that goes, here's hoping no one else has to go to Medical... for full time.
Oh what is planned in the Gulag, oh what is planned...
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*Raises beer* Here's too another epic long chapter.
Hope you enjoy it.
Cheers! It's finally up!
[Reads the whole last Twilight POV section...]
(TCB) Twilight Sparkle... you fucking monster...
5219362 its not actually Spike, so don't worry.
The subplot with conspirators in prime timeline Equestria is completely unnecessary and detracting. You already gave Sauron a deathstar, you don't need to give him the illuminati as well. Too many odds from too many angles takes away from the story and crashes the suspension of disbelief. They already have more than enough evidence to disappear the conspirators, and plenty of reason to have never let them form to begin with.
5219387 And so we have a boring plot. Straight forward. Unimaginative. Quick race into the finish.
What a blah...
I pefer some meat to my stories thanks. You may like quick pace, but we don't.
Quite a lot has happened. We learn just how Celestia got the bag, learn more about Tirek, learn how Marcus was connected to Equus, got to see Catseye go full traitor and strawman, saw Evil Twilight going through horrific experiments...so much in just one chapter! My cup runneth over.
I can sympathize a lot with Marcus fearing predestination and fate. With the idea that he doesn't have a choice and that he was MEANT to come here. There's a real issue to examine: just how much free will plays a role in the universe and how much a role destiny does.
5219387 Don't worry. They won't last long.
Cats eye must die, that's an order. KILL HER.
Icy will get socked nice and hard in the jaw, I promise ya'll that much.
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"Weaver" is going to have a part in that, won't she?
5219482 probably. Vox is the man to ask about that, though-I was writing Kraber's defection from the HLF.
...
And, if Discord was Jerry... I wouldn't be surprised. Insane Inmortals, anyone?
I figure you good folks can figure out which scene and just who this belongs to.
Quick question, is Dark!Twilight in the ruined Equestria or the good Equestria?
Damn Twilight Sparkle! You scary!
So, a lot of in-universe exposition of things we already knew. I feel Marcus, having great power without control would suck, especially if you were as powerful as Marcus, same for outliving everyone you love while you change not at all. What did Faust just do? So, Catseye is working for Queen Celestia? What is it that she's so ashamed of, does she have non-pony blood? Who is this "Weaver"? Not Berry Punch! So, subtle brainwashing through the pendants? What is this Weaver planning? Wow, Lyra has quite the perverted streak, doesn't she? Oh, I'm familiar with that fic, nice reference. So, that explains the Cake Twins, but what is the factor keeping more alicorns from being born and/or ascending? Yeah, human genetic understanding doesn't account for magic. Yikes, the entity controlling Twilight is just evil. I do not want to know what she's planning!
Catseye, you, your followers, and TCB Twilight can JUST...F***ING...DIE!!!
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I'm guessing that you're a fan of Douglas Adams...
Interesting chapter; we see Queen Xenolestia corrupting the ponies of the real Equestria with false tales of what she's doing, and then you show just how horrific the truth is.
If they plan a D-Day of Equestria, and Twilight is basically the Mengele of the TCB universe... I can only imagine the reactions of the soldier's as they liberate the camps, that is if there are any camps to liberate...
5219898 Yes, I _do_ like A Brief History Of Equestria. It's pretty funny.... and Imma be honest, Equestria's history is sorta murky, so it seems as good as any history book to use here. Ah, I do love the parts where Twilight keeps insisting that Sullamander wasn't a deranged lesbian.
The first chapter is done and I don't have a lot of time left. I really like the fact that the chapter had the Mane 6 and Lyra be the focus again, and it seems like everyone just finished discussing everything that was found in TV Tropes. Though I think the TCB 6 can still be saved with the elements, just they either have to be captured first or be brought together as a group for a finishing magical blow.
I like Luna's planned to wait for Catseye and her group of Loyalists to try and do something first rather than arrest them for being suspicious, as Captain America put it in the "Winter Soldier:" "I thought the punishment comes after the crime." Though if they really wanted to stop them from doing something I think the guards can still "ruin" the crime by messing up their end goals, if they wanted to.
I was kind worried about the Evil Twilight though, but I guess I still have to be because it seems like she's trying to make a potion that can brainwash ponies on contact. I hope she succeeds in making "very little" of those if she managed to finally make something like that.
5147277 Originally, TCB!Pinkie Pie ponifying his family was going to be a noodle incident I'd vaguely imply, but.... eh, that just didn't feel right.
ack. 30K
0_0
Edit: ok, now that I've finally finished..... can I get a ETA on when I/we get to club Catseye in?
Oh catseye. You would make a good human.
Only about halfway through this chapter, but I felt I needed to post this bit early, lest I forget it later:
I Googled "totem-proles", and came up with nothing. Totem-poles, however, did not give me the relevant information either. Would you mind posting a link as to why our child of Megan reacted the way he did?
Also, nice El Goonish Shiv reference. Any chance that the Grand Master of the Ban Hammer will make a cameo later on, or would that give Humanity too big an advantage?
Edit: Found something:
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Good chapter, very long though. I actually have to schedule time to read these now!
I only got two references in this one:
Bockscar street is named after the B-29 the dropped the bomb on Nagasaki (I'm sightly concerned about the foreshadowing aspect of that)
Revised Formula 626
5221074 well. That's a reference to one of the macguffins of Tb3's story, Last Train From oblivion. I admit they weren't originally in TCB!Equestria, and their existence is a bit of a retcon... But I like the idea so I don't care about canonicity here.
*shudders*
Redskin, you've got a good story here, but could you please fast-forward to taking down TCB!Equestria? I don't know how much more I can take of this before I put my fist through my computer screen.
this fight will be BLOODY.
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From what I recall, she's a hybrid, and dyes her coat to hide the color difference. Can't remember what, though.
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There is no free will. Only the word of Redskin122004
I made this comparison before but this also describes two villains from other works perfectly.
Yuri from Red Alert 2: Yuri's Revenge and Cyrus from Pokémon Pearl, Diamond and Platinum.
Hell here's a quote from Yuri:
And Cyrus wants a world without emotion or better described, "My world. My way. My will."
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Is that a reference to Chatoyance's spitefic, The Reasonably Adamant Down With Celestia Society?
That whole section is sick and wrong!
Also, Catseye and her group of Loyalists strike me as very interesting. In fact, their method of eschewing violence
Amusingly, Corporal Strategy's diatribe greatly reminds me of Chatoyance's blatant cherrypicking of Humanity's worst while totally ignoring Humanity's good side.
yea new chapter! lets read all 30k woirds! Sleep is for other people!
(after)
....I think Other Twilight scaresme.
Two cooies says Catseye is a Thestral
Twenty cookies says shes an Alicorn variant.
A question, when exactly did the conference in Bern occur?
Also, I do hope the Doctor and his family have off-screen adventures during all of this. Related to the Spectrumverse, that is.
Speaking of which, here's an imaginary soundtrack to go with the story:
Disc One
The Human
Shattered Past
Celestia Regina
Long Live the King
Two Worlds, Two Stories
Lord of Chaos and Disharmony
Unyielding Barrier (Alternatively, Dust to Oblivion/
THE DESTRUCTION! OF HUMANITY! ITSELF!!!!)A Song for Lyra Heartstrings
The Mare in Blue
Bag of Tirek
Concordia Maxima
Spykoran's Tale
No More (The Doctor's Theme)
Alicorn Faust
The Fires of Boston
Equestria Rises (Dark Reprise, TCB Version: Equestria No More)
In the Shadow of the Tyrant
The Grandfather
Discordant Nightmare
Sic Semper Tyrannis
5221067 We've heard it all before, haven't we?
I must say, it almost felt like I was reading one of the Chatty One's posts when there was the Loyalist discussion. So much so that this little tidbit:
I actually said 'don't you fucking dare to call it semantics!' aloud, as I sometimes did when I dealt with some She-who-Shan't-be-Named's 'arguments'.
This buildup is getting to me however. The tension just growing to be too much to handle.
They would make good Daleks.
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She's based off of Catoyance, the most infamous of all TCB authors.
Huh ya know, Catseye and Icewind remind me of a rather infamous couple only with their roles reversed. Who were they again?
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Oh right.
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TB3 came up with the signature, but the "improved" Shakespeare quote was originally my idea.
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I just read the TVTropes listing for that thrice damned thing, and I have only one thing to say:
So how long until Celestia physically punches Cateye?
I'm talking a right hook for being a assclown
That last scene reminds me of something from Splatterhouse.
So... they liked these sessions?
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That scene remind me of the monsters from the Resident Evil series and the Mannequin Soldiers from Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood series and Evil!Twilight remind of this guy and I wonder will Evil!twilight as a last resort would she set the fail experiments newfoals loose like the Mannequin Soldiers.
And I'm still can't wait to see the final battle I hope it would be something like this:
626... why stitch?!
but seriously, this story is horrifying, and maybe thats just because one of my two greatest fears is to "loose my self"
and from ow sickening it is to read twilights POV and how her tormenter is so utterly unempathetic of life, and that twilights screaming to stop
i love this story, but it always leaves a sickening taste in my mouth
I wrote this using as base The Tale of The Tounges
no use it, I will for my TCB