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*empty popcorn bucket*
TOO GOOD; MUST KNOW HOW IT CONTINUES!
Your editors did a horrible job and should be fired out of a cannon.
3512742 fine. You edit and send me the results. You're hired and can't back out of it.
Good to see more of this fic and I love every bit of it. {Except for the Celestia bashing moments. Why must you make her so sad? WHY?}
3509067 "You don’t want to use somebody else’s ideas. That is a noble sentiment. There is one problem with this however. Anything you think of, no matter how original it might seem, something similar has been done before."
--Larry Correia.
In other words, I have always thought that you can do anything that someone else has done in writing, as long as you do it your way.
It's good that it SHALL be action packed and it will be quite good to see our characters back in action again, actually taking a more frontlines assault against the Tyrant, because we've had chapter after chapter of setup and a bit of behind the scenes action, sure, but we're kind of hoping for some actual, y'know, scenes of our protagonists actually kicking butt like they should be on a united front against their distorted and distaff counterparts. It's okay to have a big buildup, but if you keep building up and up and then don't PERFECTLY deliver, you can crush people's hopes and trust in you. Like...Bleach. The main villain was built up and up, but the big battle with him basically BURIED the series and the "Fullbringer" arc danced on the corpse.
i.imgur.com/j4aEaKg.gif aww yea
So the other Equestria is finally going to fight the evil one
I looked through this chapter and still dint find the true divergence. Anyone else see it?
3512833 oh its there....
Trust me.
Awesomazing!
Is the point of divergence 9/11?
3512845
Wut?
3512833 AUDIBLE GASP!
I think I found it! You gotta go back way early in the story to find it, but... I HAVE FOUND IT! EUREKA!
Note to Redskin: Nope, I'm not telling everyone what it is. That puts me on the same level as the people who put the codes for ARGs in the comments sections!
3512880 email me your results and I will say yay or nay.
I am still waiting for the canon universe lololol
3513006 you got to wait lololololol
3513206 my dear boy, we are finally taking the steps into true terror. I have yet to begun to unravel the true sin and horrors this war has taken.
Think back on what was said on the elements and by discord.
3513024
What is this...? I think the beginning is wrong because I haven't touched this.
Sorry for having problems with entering to edit this last week.
3513234 MORE horror?! =D
Oh, JOY
DID YOU JUST!?!?!
WAS THAT!?!?
WHAT THE FLYING FUCK-STICK IS TREVOR DOING THERE!?!?!
Got to love the royal canterlot voice.
3513271 He's not the only one that showed up, and I am not talking about the rest of the gang.
3513330
THAT IS AMAZING!
AND STUPID! IT'S LIKE WATCHING PACIFIC RIM ALL OVER AGAIN!
3513346 okay. Thank you for your input. I like to say it gets better, but maybe this story isn't your cup of tea. It slows down after awhile.
See everyone. This is how you critique, you don't start cursing out the author, the story, insult the writer or any body that helps. a perfect critique.
God the multiverse is so confusing, than again we are the ones that created the damn thing. Anticipating the next chapter for sure.
3513386 I made this story before the timberwolf episode came out. So...yeah.
3513395 stupidly amazing?
And who else came out?
3513407 trust me, Discord Travels will be a lot more complicated
Ok, so this story is awesome, even if your decision to troll us a bit with the false future was... annoying. I honestly can't wait for more!!! However, i have to ask... Your fic gave me an idea and i want to know if its completely stupid before i try it... Basic thought is that the spreading barrier (using the verse you work in as a base) has the side affect of pushing magic into the Earth, reawakening our legends and myths... from there It could go several ways, from a being like Deathwing erupting and burning both worlds, to figures from humanities myths appearing and fighting ala Fate/Stay Night...
Totally dumb or possessed of potential?
3513459 well... It does count as an AU, so small differences are okay.
3513405 OMG U SUK AND SHUD DIE FROM ANUS CANCER ON UR FACE!
Like that?
3513502 wow that's different.
3513435
did he ended in warhammer 40k? or assassin's creed? or mass effect?
>>>When the barrier began to consumed most of Europe>>>
Oh... uhm... I thought I was joking...
Then I read several chapters... wow... There are so many grammatical errors many of the sentences are virtually incomprehensible.
And the scope and pace of the 'story' are so helter-skelter and random, it's agonizing to even try and keep track of what's going on.
3513531 yes. Lots of Hersey was thrown around but we managed to make it work. Still working it.
Tiny little grammatical errors (Bon Bob, Bom Bon stuck out the most) but nothing too significant.
And then Luna, Celestia and the "Army of Equis" stream out of the portal. Carnage ensues.
3513636 nope, not quite yet my friend, they are not even close to ready.
Still a good fight coming up.
3513395 ...The pacific rim references were totally intentional! At least on my part.
I know I already said something similar to this a few chapters ago, but...
Lyra leading a charge in any situation is the NEW greatest thing I have ever read.
You looking to break some records Redskin? You've already managed to write 2 of the greatest things ever.
Discord should have a cannonette that he wears like a hat, and instead of making explosion sounds, and yells phrases like
"YOU'RE NOT REAL BECAUSE HASBRO SAID SO!
It's got "Head-Cannon" scribbled on the side with a crayon.
YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!
CANON!EQUESTRIA AND EARTH BOOYAH!!! Prepare your anus Xenolestia.
3513738 PREPARE ALL PLOTS FOR VICIOUS ENTRY! =D
3513395 uh...still no clue what you are talking about now that I read it a second time.
3512901
PM sent.
And something I tacked onto the end of that PM that I can actually mention here: What number is The Doctor up to now? Is this #13, aka his twelfth regeneration? And what of The Doctor's Granddaughter "Susan"? After all, what are the chances that Doctor Whooves came from this Earth's Universe? Or that Susan died in this Universe's Time War? ...heck, find me proof that Susan died in the Time War at all. Just throwing an idea at the wall to see if it sticks.
this is the second time I've seen this story on the front page.
3513810 sent a pm, actually embarrassed by responding to this publicly.
3513819 oh wow?! Then it comes up to....
6 times now!
3513573
Can't wait
and LOL at the doctor, feel bad for Bon Bon
3513834
Right right. You referred to him as basically 11.5, personality wise. Lets round it up and call him an alternate take on the still unaired #12, as he regenerated on Equestria, rather than where ever the show ends up having it happen.
(\/) *Shrug*
You did not, however, touch on the subject of Susan. Even if you have no plans for her, I was hoping to spark a conversation with my fellow readers over the possibility. The possibility of having a third Gallifreyan (Doctor, Dinkie, Susan) on Earth might be enough to spark another spinoff, if the idea reaches the right reader.
...
Oh. My. Faust! Fridge Logic! The Doctor is half human, which makes Dinkie a quarter human! Susan was born on Gallifrey, so for her lets say 1/8th. So far, they have been bypassing the Barrier with the TARDIS, but how much of an effect would the Barrier have on them directly?