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Dat pic at the top.
If you have to ask "Metro 2033?" the answer is yes.
Destroy the Tyrant
Elsa and Sint were so fun to write! Would Elsa!Cloak look like a fabulous blue dress?
Oh, please tell me the thestrals saw that, please...... The last thing Equestria needs is an insurrection from its Catseye, this needs to be pulled out of the ground before it even grows please...
It's so terrifying and so good at the same time. One of the best chapters of this story so far, by far!
Ps. great to see that Cateye has reasons to be coco, instead of a straw man to harp upon.
DO NOT DELAY ON THE CONTINUATION!
(Also will Discord's journey get some more chapters?)
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Damn Straight!
4950827 imma be honest. I LOVE how the games do ghosts.
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Can't forget about the down right terrifying Ghost Room from Last Light
4950872 the one in Regina with all those people that hung themselves?
I do hope this little rebellion gets squashed.
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I can't help but think that the upcoming battles are going to be Lord of the Rings levels of epic.
4950906 you presume correctly!
Its only the second chapter of this arc and I already want to see Catseye burn.
I eagerly await whatever misfortune you all have in store for her and her followers.
This looks like an uncompleted sentence - I think the only rotary-wing flyers we see in canon are Pinkie Pie and Tank, so maybe he's intending to refer to Pinkie?
"The ponies had created similar autogyros, but their experimental nature and sheer unwieldiness compared to natural fliers made them mostly a curiosity. On top of that, the one pony he’d heard of using one recently was
A strange sense of regret filled Spykoran’s heart, realizing that he still did not believe such a thing could fly, and yet here was the proof of concept before his eyes."
WoW, some Frozen reference
4951087 took care of it
Frankly?
As much as I like this story, I feel that the focus is a bit too much, villain-wise, on the bag and not enough on Xenolestia herself.
As corrupting and evil as the bag was, it was still Xenolestia's decision to start using the darn thing and I feel that making her a pawn of the bag actually diminish her as a villain and make the bag into a bit of a villain sue (since literally everything was a big coincidence that just happened to go the bag's way).
In short, I am OK with the bag being a corrupting influence + the cause of Xenolestia's ultimate madness. But I'd prefer Xenolestia still being the one who chose to take the plunge ; she could have chosen to purge the bag, to seal it away, or to ask for help. She deliberately chose to use its power, despite knowing the hatred and resentment it housed.
I feel that blaming the bag is like blaming the gun for someone murdering somebody. Even if the tool is evil and shouldn't have been in the murderer's hands, the murderer pulled the trigger and it is a fact that should not be forgotten.
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oh.... so.... Heh heh
Paraphrased Terminator quote FTW!
So called the whole cateyes and Icewind deal happening.
Well shit, this done gonna suck
Someone get Catseye a visual dictionary with those machines bookmarked. That should clear up most of her problems with us.
And is Icewind flirting with her?
If they end up together, how do you think he'll react when he finds out she's a hybrid?
How will she react to his response? Become more fanatical? Maybe she has an epiphany and realizes she's on the wrong side?
I'm looking forward to more!
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Agreed. Even if she's still despicable, I sort of feel bad for her.
Due to reasons beyond her control, she was mocked for what she was and came to hate herself and thus other 'impure' beings. She believes ponification is a good thing because it gives her the chance to be a full pony and resents the humans for turning down a chance she'd give anything for.
Also, she has the misfortune of not knowing what any of those machines are really for. We humans love making our tools look dangerous and violent so they are less boring to use.
As well as our historical records focusing so much on our crimes (though only because they are so unusual that they are worthy of noting). We must seem pure evil by what little knowledge of our history has survived.
Is she wrong? Definitely.
Do I hope she fails? Of course.
Are her feelings justified? No.
Do I feel bad for her? Yes.
Catseye has some serious Daddy issues.
Any hints to what her Fater is?
4952001 My money is he's a griffon, or Zebra
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Which would be even more epic should the coming battle, Discord teleport the entire alliance on a hill with the sun shine on their back. That would SUPER SUPREME MEGA EPIC look
Brain why ... why did you have New York, New York by Frank Sinatra on a loop during the horror scene.
My brain is playing tricks on me again.
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No, she's a half-pony.
Called it, Icewind is about to do something stupid, Luna did the right thing when she ordered Catseye to be put under surveillance.
Did you just Rickroll us with nightmare fuel?
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Oh, hell yeah, Terminator! For that and making an obscure reference to Dishonoured, you get my thumbs up.
... And it's nice to see you're putting some effort in making Canon!Catseye and her followers into something a bit more nuanced than strawmen.
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I doubt that'd work. If anything, I can imagine that once backed into a corner, Tireklestia would make a last stab at breaking her enemies' spirit, by revealing their 'saviour' was the one who caused this whole disaster.
And then we'd just have to see how far the power of trust and friendship can really go. However, the response should definitely be something other than "Lyra didn't know what she was doing".
Ok, who ordered the triple dosage of nightmare fuel?
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You know, you made us think we were clicking on one thing and instead, BAM, in your face sudden surprise! Okay, maybe a 'screamer' would be a better term, but you get what I mean, right? We expected a more winded-down chapter and a pleasant surprise and we got pure, undiluted horror. Not that this is necessarily a bad chapter, it ISN'T! It's VERY effective, it was just REALLY surprising too.
I can't flipping WAIT to see Catseye, Icewind, and their followers fall into the abyss of humiliation and defeat when their plans fail!
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Mood whiplash, mate. Story's chock full of it.
4952792 was the picture not enough?
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I was secretly hoping for a surprise that involved balloons. Not, well...potions and horrific transformations. I guess, though, Stephan decided to go the route of a father that teaches his kids to swim by throwing them into the deep end.
It seems Xenolestia is planning on doing this to every world one at a time until she has an army big enough army to invade the most powerful worlds that exist but no matter how powerful she becomes if she ever went to the Warhammer 40k universe she would be so screwed the Chaos Gods would chew her up and spit her out among many other horrible things that exist in that universe
4953143 Even the most powerful worlds hold some magic. And given that she absorbs and uses chaos magic she gained from Discord, who was able to resist one chaos god from 40k for several hours, how many Discords does she have to kill and steal magic before those groups are nothing but flies? Everything has a limit, even those gods can not take on a being who enslaved billions of worlds and steal all the magic they hold.
Millions of Celestias Lunas and Discord of varied power.
Billions of various magics of trillions of worlds.
Unlimited supply of bodies to fall on to overwhelm the vaunted defenses of Humanity, Eldars, and even Orks and any other beings out there.
Able to put a portal on any world without warning.
Exterminatus only helps her in cutting their numbers.
The ultimate nightmares that can give gods, Daleks, and any other being a headache in trying to defeat.
If that ever comes to that of course...
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You know how the Daleks started as a Planetary Power that the Doctor never heard of? How by NuWho they were a Temporal Superpower matched only by the now pseudo-extinct Time Lords?
Think that sort of progression tree.
Also, Tirek and Discord powers are apparently haxxor in this verse.
Now as for you Red, I have a question: Where are the armies of the Saddle Arabians or Donkeys? What about the other Pony nations?
4953551 at the time, I didn't realize of the donkey nor the horses.
Horses showed up after the introduction and I never seen the Cranky/pinkie episode. So I had no clue who they were.
By the time I realized this error, it was too late for me to make addition and the rough draft already drawn up for the others.
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Ah. You can just say the Arabians, Donkeys, and other Pony nations share a military with Equestria, sort of like Scottland and Ireland does with the rest of the UK. Make it a remnant of pre-Royal Sisters Equestrian imperialism. Hell, we could even have the Pony equivalent of the IRA!
4953617 you...
You I like.
Expect an email.
4953204 I actually couldn't believe that Discord could resist any of the Chaos gods for that long there just to powerful and there's almost nothing they can't do I mean these are the gods that turn entire planets in to Daemon infested hellholes in seconds create warp storms capable of destroying entire fleets and even entire star systems and lets not even get started on what they have done to the planets within the Eye of Terror i remember reading one where the planet had been turned into a giant humanoid creature curled up into a ball. And even if Xenolestia somehow defeats them there's still the races like the Necrons that are near impossible to kill and the Tyranid hive fleets that would outnumber all the newfoals many times over and just eat all of them
4953730 well whem you are trained by Q and seen evil first hand that can be comparable to the gods, well, anything is possible. He was still losing though and got off lucky.
As for the others, welp... let the burning begin. It depends on the Tyrant. She would no doubt see what they could bring, and spend a lot of time building herself up to face them...
And... well, given what she did to Luna and Discord of her world... can you imagine if she decides to go for the Emperor? Not in the chaos plains, but his body? After all, he is still residing in it in a way, and unleash entire worlds of portals to overwhelm the defenders of his body...
Now that... that is true horror.
Hersey it may be, but you don't take on the big guy where you may have a chance to lose... you go for the weak point and you hit it with everything you got.
4953760 Maybe but it sounds like her plans will never make it that far like Stephan said in this chapter the Empire is suffering food shortages, overpopulation, pollution, poverty and they haven't even converted a single planet yet only half of one. Bit hard for Xenolestia to conquer the multiverse when everypony but her ends up starving to death before they can even finish converting a single planet.
*Eagerly await the public mutilation and execution of this filthy Catseye individual and her followers*
4953816 of course.
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Yeah, that one.
The worst part is, all you got at the end of that nightmare of a room, is a Valve..... a sniper rifle...... with very rare ammo..... lol wut