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Because a Geas is something as old as Celtic and didn't originate with that Anime...
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Geis
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrr!
Already want the next!
Ps. Yes, some fun in the multiverse with Discord would be great!
A simple error here
Catachans
Also very good chapter
It's time to fight back and finish the fight, good chapter looking towards the next
Don't know why I felt a bit of lotr from that meeting.
Great chapter. So we know how thing's got so bad in the first place now. All the Leader's have been briefed.
Any chnace of seeing more Discord's adventures in the multiverse, whether in this story or in a sidestory?
3636387 ah, i will get on it.
3636394 Oh, it will be filled with fighting.
3636279>>3636419 That will take time, I am working out several crossovers within it, including ALT MLP worlds made by authors here on FIMFiction. Still, I got the 40k Warhammer out of the way and seems to be solid for my adviser on it who helped me create it.
3636407 I may have used some reference to it.
I love how you explored G1 MLP and mixed it with TCB.
I can't wait to see the massive asskicking that will ensue.
And the Newfoals, horrifying. They'll attack Humans and Ponies for seemingly no reason at all. And they'll go as far as maiming and killing their targets.
Well, to the next one then, my good friend. We have readers to satisfy.
3636504 wow. I put a warning sign and everything and you just walked right by it without regard.
3636640 so out of this entire chapter.
That's the only thing you take away from this?
3636687 wait three brothers?
Wut?
Spykoran was barely 50 years old. (In my head) when he took a nap. He didnt even have kids yet.
As for Destiny for Marcus, well, that's up to debate.
As for the other response.
So I have noticed.
3636709 k
3636787 wow... You way off.
The original MLP had Megan, her little bro Danny, and baby sister Molly. Megan went to Dream Valley to stop Tirek due to Firefly recruiting her. They stopped Tirek from enslaving the world and everlasting darkness. Later on Megam 's bro and sis started going. Spykoran is the original Spike in the show, but I believe Spykoran is his true name. Time went on, they had adventures before the portal closed to Earth. Thus leaving the Rainbow of Light away from Dream Valley, and in my head, the bag of Tirek aka Rainbow/Stormbow of Darkness was locked up for safe keeping. But it began to poison the mind of everyone.
Spike woke up, saw them worshiping the bag and praising it, even the princesses of the land. Thus he killed them all free them its control.
As for the bros...
I have no idea where you got them
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Did you not see the reaction of the other leaders? They did were angry Spykoran, impying they would have dealt with the problem a different way.
Spykoran did what he thought was best, like killing an undead zombie, which were basically followers of Tirek. Yes, he could have done something better.
Also Discord is Chaotic Nature (I think), he severs both good and evil. But he's also crazy, so he might just help out the good guys if he likes them. But if he's your friend, he'll make mock you.
3636901 because people are tired of flashbacks.
I'M TIRED OF FLASHBACKS.
Are you happy now?
3636908 trust me.
The first episode of MLP G1 was fucking hardcore compared to G4. Sure, there was the seaponies, but damn good to watch.
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Shown as in a flashback? I don't think we need much more flashbacks in this story.
As for the whole God thing, I think the reference to Futurama sorta lessens the God bashing.
You know, with all the multi-verse stuff I would have thought the Combine might have come snooping. Eh, they're probably to busy dealing Freeman to worry about a tyrannical centaur.
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What? What do you think happens during war time? That we just take a nap?
Jeeze man.
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Killing people adds drama.
Even the killing of children (Newfoal children) has happened in this story, and will likely happen again in the next chapter, in the form of New Foal children holding potion bombs and being ordered to charge at Humans, only to be ripped apart by machine guns.
Psychologicall warfare, using your enemy own children against them will give some of them posttraumatic stress disorde.
3637062 that's it your done commenting. No more from you.
If its not one thing, its another from you.
And its not because I am trying to shut you up whatever you pointed out in the story.
I'm just tried of seeing you bitch.
For those wondering. Its about Ngrey and his claim that I needed to do it a certain way of OUR story. I have plenty of people helping me in this regard. I don't need someone who isn't even on my list of helpers.
Who I also don't want his help either. I banned others but like...two others. Maybe three.
For this one. I am doing as personal pleasure.
Can we have happy Celestia? Please. Just let her be happy. Cause this story has just been beating her to death. I mean she's crying, going through such turmoil, being mind raped, and Discord is being an insensitive jerk.
Oh yeah, he keeps saying he's 'good', but we all know the truth about chaos. It twists you, turns you inside out, destroys everything you love. I'd rather die then become a heretical chaos woshipper. THE EMPEROR PROTECTS! {The Imperials know how to deal with chaos.}
And you know what. Discord hasn't made me smile once. He's been so serious and jerkish. I mean, in the show, he made me laugh. Even when he was being himself, he was lovable. Here...He's just hating Celestia and thinking himself better then everyone else. And no, he would never leave the mortals. Who else is he going to prank and distort their very reality. Accursed Greater Daemon that he is. If only Captain Titus was here to give him a wallop. That would be awesome.
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He's also quite an insensitive jerk in the show itself as well.
As for Celestia's being happy, maybe after the war she will be a little more happy. She'll be less shocked now and battle hardened, she has seen what Humanity has suffered at the
handshoofs of her TCB counterpart.And hey, Discord had Celestia talk to her sister, so that would make her a little happy. And make Discord a little less of a jerk.
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Listen, you're making a big deal out of nothing. This story isn't perfect, it's a fan fiction. People make mistakes, we all have different view points.
Just a suggestion, try calming criticizing a story in a way you don't come off as complaining. Say something like I didn't like that part, I think it should of went like this etcetera.
And always remember parallel universe, meaning things would have gone the way you want in another universe or fan fiction.
Honestly, I want to read this story: I've managed multiple chapters in, and I liked what I read so far. However, past certain chapters, constant nonstop grammatical errors kept popping up, making it nigh impossible for me to continue on. I'm hoping that at some point all these will be cleaned up: However, till then, I have to downvote for sheer unreadability.
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Well, I like to read stories as long as the grammar isn't really bad. And I personally find this story's grammar not very bad, and for the most part very good grammar I see in this story. And quite honestly I don't really care about grammar much, as long as it's a good story and the grammar isn't really bad.
3637196 yeah. Probably have Waypoint go through if he is willing to clean up the last few chapters.
If he wants to.
Some chapters are so out of touch. I'll get back to you on it.
Where is the warhammer 40k I was promised. I want to see khàrn the betrayer hack shit to pieces, and be totally magic resistant.
Awesome just awesome, please keep up the good work.
Love this chapter, it was a pretty awesome read! However, I would like to point out that it's not the P-52 Mustang, it's the P-51 Mustang.
3637375 All that may be in a side story, or in a chapter you don't have to read, as it doesn't really continue the story.
So many idiots
But really I do love the MLP G1 continuation feels in this story, and how Tirek's Bag actually gives a good reason why the TCB Universe ponies would engage in xenocide.
The God-bashing doesn't bother me honestly. Given Marcus' situation and the fact that he's acquired more than a lifetime's worth of horrific memories, he has every right IMO to feel his faith be shattered. And the Futurama reference I think does lessen it.
3636787 He got the name Spykoran from The Elements of Harmony and Savor of Worlds, another G1 MLP/FiM crossover.
god dammit discord. you find the 40k verse and you dont think to bring back something usefull? like a baneblade? or a titan? or maybe a few dozen space marine chapters? the reasonable kind like the ultramarines who'll fight beside aliens in the face of greater threats? i mean it's not like anyone would miss them. things die/explode in that verse every few seconds. (or an avatar of khain, that would be pretty sick.)
It would be interesting to see some Warhammer 40k. Or its mirror counterpart Brighthammer. Both would be pretty amusing.
Very well done, this was much improved than the previous chapter.
Have a mustache:
Also, that ngrey guy is a bit of a prick. I've tried having civil discourse with him, and explaining why he's wrong, but all he tends to do is repeat the same thing over and over again. He should try to argue my contentions, not restate his opinions repeatedly.
This one.
I liked this one, especially the connections to the previous mlp generations.
Nanomachines, son.
you fucker... you glorious mother fucker why do you write so god danm good and why is this story not over 1000 likes yet? aside from me going crazy there i do have to say this universe is very expansive to what ive seen not a single thing just popped up with no reason (except for that gag chapter though i have to say it made me laugh hard) i am very, VERY eager to see the reactions to the "cannon" (and i use the term loosely because of new developments) celstia will they attack on sight or gtfo from her or will discord explain it fully but a little thing is nagging in my mind is mainly what is the elements/cadence doing right now. i do realize how you are doing things with the world leaders im just putting a curiosity there. and what else.... um i think im done sorry for my rant but i am in love with this fic i started when the pic was only the guy wearing the american flag with a single chapter ahh good times but my closing statement do you thing you will have the next chapter before 2014 or will it be later if you cant give an accurate schedule i am ok with that
Thank you,
Genteck
(p.s. sorry for the length
also i am courius about the sex tag i have seen no explicit details to warrant such a tag so far so if you can please explain it to me
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DAMNIT! I have to agree with you even a measly lasgun would have been useful (a lasgun that can punch through 3 meters or more of WH40K concrete)
lets not talk about all the things the Imperial guard have ... and lets not talk about anythign EVERYBODY ELSE have