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Oh damn, there was a lot in there.
I don't know what to say "first"
That was one hell of a Chapter and it all makes me more excited for what may happen next.
Til then,
Holy crap. Second longest chapter I've had to read so far. No I just have to find the time to read it.
New chapter!
Keep up the good work!
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a question, whats the current human population in this story?
4141711 anwhere between 3 to 4 billion.
im leaning to hover over 3.8
Holy shit!
30k words of pure testicle rending awesome.
Just...wow.
The scenes where Queen Celestia brainwashed the Elements? Creepy.
And now that Spike's healed and the Army of Equestria's ready to roll...pain will ensue for the Tyrant.
4141735 that's nice, its nice to see a story where humanity hasn't been reduced to mere thousands.
4141810 I think common sense would dictate a majority of the populations actions.
Its like seeing the sea pull back until you see nothing left, you know what is happening once that starts happening. Best beat would be to start running for higher ground. A barrier is like a tsunami, you see it coming, you going to start moving.
4141799 glad you liked it. Like what we did with the Tyrant?
Goood looord that was a long chapter! Would have prefered if it was split in 3...
But sooo goood....
dat halo reference, great game, debatable ending, or i might just be making connections that aren't there. I also find it going a bit to the side of Marry Sue, mainly with the runic weapons and armor, not op but leaning slightly towards it, especially with the now easier accessible materials to make them, that and the ease at which the other races signed treaties without asking for anything, the ponies are understandable but the changelings and possible the griffons, not so believable. Cant wait to see how Queen Celestia will combat four 'gods/goddesses' that is if your counting Cadance as a alicorn instead of a pegacorn, on that note, what will Queen Chryalis be classed as? a changeling alicorn or a more powerful changeling?
4141861 I may have skipped over some of the scenes for Marcus meeting with various races. I wanted to, but then you guys would be complaining that it is taking to long, its boring, wheres the action, blah blah blah.
I usually answer what I can and this is one I can field with out concern.
they were shown what happen to their races, dragons, reindeers, and minotaurs killed off, as you can see by this memory in this chapter. Griffons, dogs, zebras, and buffaloes going going the same route. It will be like a race of aliens come crashing down ln earth and show us what is happening with a race going around enslaving every race they find and burning their worlds, most of us would be scared out of minds, but if given the option to try and help, most of us would tale it.
I felt this would be same if they were shown the same. As for weapons, that will be a future chapter, but some of it was answered in this chapter.
I do love the insight of the HLF.
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TCB Queen Celestia is very powerful, it's going to take a lot to take that monster down
Also the TCB at this point in the war are winning. Humans have lost billions, give them some slight OP to strike back at the Ponies. And without the help of the canon Ponies, all of Humanity would die. It was a mere accident that the Humans are even getting help.
The other races signed the treaties and didn't ask for anything, because they know the TCB Ponies will kill them all.
This chapter was Xbox Huge. I guess I didn't need that much sleep anyway...
Looking forward to the next one.
Would it break the plot to attempt to enlist aid from more new universes?
Oh, gods, this chapter kicked my ass....
The RAGE for the Queen BITCH
The feels...
The G1 bit with Discord going into Megan's house... and TJ...
The testicle rending awesome....
Human/Pony Romance, squeeee!
And Celestia's Avatar....
"FUCK YOU TIREK-LESTIA! AND FUCK YOUR MIRROR POOL!"
4141933 that will be Spike's tale to unfold for the group. As for the Avatar, its more like a Player character for online gaming, you can only control one unless you have more computers to play for you.
4141934 fuck that, im already having trouble with Multiverse Journey, I bring in anymore and im asking for more trouble than its worth.
that sounds allot like halo
also i have read stories that are shorter than this holly shit
4142019 that was Doctor Fluffy... he likes his references....a lot.
plus, if I get rid of them, if feels a lot less complete for some reason
4142024 i just got a good look at your avatar and it looks like flutershy has two noses
its kinda creepy
4141890 yes, we are lead to believe that she is obscenely powerful and if she is as powerful as indicated and all the 'super powers' of the worlds gather to fight her as one some literal planet shattering force will be in play, think second impact from Evangelion, and with Queen Celestia being insane, or the puppet master, will likely prefer to destroy everything with all her power rather than lose, thus some serious tactics will be needed to prevent this, maybe Queen Celestia will lose the connection to the bag, maybe something op. And from what I interpreted from the story it was never Queen Celestia's goal to kill, it was to covert. it will be interesting if stone Luna will be freed.and the results, maybe she will reclaim the 'evil' Equestria, or at least whats left.
see now i feel silly cause as soon as i heard the bitch was on the human side of the barrier if i was there, i'd probably make use of some kind of either extreemly dark (like some sort of necromancy stuff like using the souls of everyone who died in the conflict, regardless of species, to bolster my own soul) or something really unstable (like taping directly into earth's lay lines) magic that results in being ungodly powerfull for a short period of time but at the expence of your body/soul not being able to handle it and eventualy burning out. and boy would my face have been red if i went and did something like that for just an avatar.
Xenolestia's trolling level:
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Megan...
Seriously am I the only one who got this?
4142028 Heh, I do love my references
was that robotic truck that stomped on Discord in one of the other universes Optimus Prime because that is awesome
4142466 More like Bern trolling levels. Beato is too soft for Xeno---- (I WON'T call THAT Thing -lestia, she ISN'T!!!), and she didn't like killing that much.
4143298 True that
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What a bunch of boobs...
She has seen knos how the structure works:
---...what? Do you mean "She has seen how the....."
Also have couple more personnel:
---Also have a couple
That was a big dose of asskicking. I like it.
The positive first. And there's a lot of positives. Great action as Luna unleashes her powers as Nightmare Moon, the humans and the "true" MLP dimension have united officially and they see that the Elements are victims as well, we get to see how Rarity tried to fight back along with Spike in a touching bit of backstory that's well done and gripping, and I can't believe I'm saying this but...Discord has a quiet moment. And it is AMAZING. It's simple, effective, solemn and sweet. It's a small thing to just pick up something when the others are fighting and brawling, but the moment is tender and actually makes him look...well...NICE! Not like a colossal jerk which he's been for so many chapters. It's a very welcome change.
There's really only ONE negative. And it's that it seems this story is advocating...*cringes*...the Hypertime approach to time and space. All of time and space as a gigantic river, with little tributaries spinning off into their own rivers and streams, each timeline, little river, only lasting as long as they're likely. Like, say, there's a timeline where I stopped writing and went to put cantaloupes onto my head. That's a timeline. But it wouldn't last long because I'd never put a FRUIT on my skull. But there's an infinite number of these timelines because there's so many changes and choices you can make, creating infinite upon infinite possibilities for timelines-
Hypertime is the anti-life equation. It DESTROYS free will. Because...what's the point? If there's infinite dimensions than it doesn't matter if you made a decision that saved the world or doomed it. There's eighteen bamillion worlds in eighteen bamillion dimensions, who gives a crap? And perhaps you'll say "Well, it matters in THIS realm". But DOES it? Because not only is every choice YOU make already being made in some other dimension, in INFINITE dimensions, so is everybody ELSE'S choices. All of THEIR choices are already being made too. So your life has no real meaning, nothing you do really matters, every decision is already being made, you just THINK you're making it. It's why I hated Bioshock Infinite. It basically destroyed free will. And I REALLY hope you're not going that same kind of route.
Ye lawds, this chapter was a pain in the butt to do, but it was so worth it.
I love the stuff with the HLF. Can help out with parts for my story.
Can't wait to get started on our next project together, friends!
4143831 I agree with every word that you just said! I was getting so tired of waiting for this to come out...
But on the plus side totally worth it Heh, it'll be fun to work on that other project. I can already feel the joy...
4143419 Had to be done, I'm afraid
4143800. Wow, the whole time river thing was just a simplistic verison of describing the whole time issue between world.
It has little to no bearing on the story... in fact, i didnt even think of it further than one point and that was just an example
He's back on Earth, bitches! Also, I now have an exact image on what Queen Celestia looks like: The evil Celestia from the comics that are talking about Star Swirl the Bearded. Here's a picture, she's the one on the left. Also, I'm fairly certain that's what the battle between the two Celestia's will look like, only with more blood.
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So, TCB has returned the reference Project Sunflower made to it, I see.
Having just recently finished that story, all I have to say is that this is awesome.
Huh. I wonder what the psycho-version of the HLF will think once they find out there's
a second Equestriamultiple Equestrias.Also what exactly stopped Discord from trying his hardest to recruit the other universes to help out? Would that just end the story too quickly, so you made it so he never thought about that option?
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>mrw when this chapter was released.
besides the celebration I'm gonna wait for a while for the next one. Hopefully before I fly off for BT.
Long time reader, first time commenter here.
Ye gods, this was so gut-bustingly awesome! I am so glad Marcus is back. However, I am a bit curious as to what Discord took from the house. He seems to be up to something, but that candle was sweet. I am glad that he and Marcus get along so well. I also like that you are bringing in the Side Stories too. Man, the Tyrant won't stand a chance. Also, President Davis sounds like a cool guy, and so do most of the other leaders. I hope they all, along with Shephan and Marcus, have a drink together.
I wonder what they'll all do once this is over? Reclaim evil Equestrian as the new earth? Rebuild somehow? Humanity will find a way. They always do.
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What is the name of this comic?
This was a nice chapter and all, but please ... don't write any chapters this long again.
It's a lot to sort through in one sitting, for me at least.
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It's actually ongoing in the official IDW comics, and it's called Reflections. That one is going to be #20's.
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Hahahahaha.....No.
They have suffered enough and the most merciful way for them is to die. Heck, they want to die too as well.
Unless Discord being 'kind' enough to take away their soul and have them rebirth as new Elements in the future when they were killed
The idea of Too Many Sun Tyrants is terrifying. The Mirror Pool needs to have a thirsty parasprite thrown in it.
This was incredibly badass. I'm so glad I was wrong in my guess about the Bag of Tirek last chapter--this was so much more epic, emotional, intimidating, and plot-driving.
So... "could be Celestia and the Elements of Harmony themselves". You think a president would know better than to tempt fate like that. It would be a good test of their self-control, though. I now look forwards to the happenings in Equestria and the outstandingly uncomfortable meetings and conversations that must surely follow. Can Pinkie Pie hold back her urge to throw an immediate party for the visitors? That probably wouldn't be appreciated.
The Elements and a whole lotta people with awful memories of the war... I look forwards to seeing what would happen.
wut ees
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Too much messing around the multiverse can be dangerous. Don't invite too many universes, chaos tends to happen.
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You realize this is Discord we're talking about, right?
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Yeah, but it is still good to keep the story balanced. It be over way to quick in a Deus Ex Machina ending if there's no struggle to defeat the TCB Ponies. So I think keeping it Canon Equestria/Humans/Ponies for Human Life Vs TCB Ponies is best. Also others could always write a spin off story, where the things you suggest happen.
Inviting Warhammer 40k would be a Deus Ex Machina ending and also would be a recipe for disaster. Both canon Ponies and Humans will die. (Humans either being killed by xenos or even the Imperium of Man, due to Humans allied with Ponies, eg Ponies for Human Life/Canon Ponies.)
Discord likes chaos, but I doubt he would like exterminatus being glared on both Earth and Equus. Plus writing too many universes bumping into each other at once is one of hell of a clusterfuck and that is best left to comedy stories.
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Nobody said it had to be 40K. What about the aforementioned Mass Effect universe? Or TTGL (Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann)? I for one would pay money to see a drill piercing Xenolestia, instead of the heavens.