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Bloody love an update in the Evening.
For a second I thought that this 'chapter' was this stories obituary note… (There really need to be a pony face for 'relieved')
Also, a possible mook horror show from the ponies eyes... Cool
What's this!? A short chapter!?
Miracles do happen, it seems.
So basically the next side story is the Team dealing with superpowered Tigers? Like ... King Tigers?
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5486220 Lol. no, just... just have to wait and see. Its going to be a side story, but still connected to the main story.
I like this. Doesn't have much meat on it per-say, but damn is it fulfilling.
Oh the feels in this chapter.
A chapter that DIDN'T take me more than half an hour to read?!
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I like that.
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You're not the only one with that worry. Seeing that this was just a segue to a sidestory was a relief (though I had a hunch things were gonna be okay with the story still marked "Incomplete").
Alas Megan, if only you had pulled Marky-Marcus and Jacob aside if you knew what the ponies were up to, you could have given them a lot more to work with. :(
Then again, I don't see that preventing Jacob's ponification.
I wonder how you could make things more surreal than Marcus' possession nightmare or Scootaloo's surgery dream with The Scribe. Those are reasonably high bars to clear. :P
Great chapter, but I don't like how it started with present tense, like "he feels", then goes to past tense. Reads weirdly to me.
I did wonder what had happened to Megan. Poor poor Megan. I wonder if the CanonEquestrians under Catseye are trying to throw monsters at the army to, in their eyes, "cleanse Equestria of the horrific and unclean cancer that has infected it and taken our beloved Celestia from us!"
I can't wait until Canon Celestia gets back and (at least tries) to set everyone straight. Wonder how Catseye would react to that, as someone else mentioned, it would be a rare bit of irony if she were in life threatening peril, the type where no one normally can save her, but Marcus ends up saving her. I have no idea if that would shake her up enough to make her reconsider things. My basic ticked off human nature says no, but then again, you never know. Catseye seems just swayable enough that there might be some redemption chance, but I don't know, I literally have no idea what direction this is going to go.
I wonder if Scorpan is going to show up in any way shape or form beyond Spykoran's memories. He is one of, if not my favorite character from the original special. Though I probably would be better off wishing for the seaponies to come back, at least their a species and not what looks like a demon who turns back into a . . . human prince. . . . wait a second! How does Scorpan fit into all this if he's human!!!
lol, I don't know if this occurred to anyone else, but it makes me wonder. Perhaps the scene in which Scorpan became a human again is just ignored in this timeline. If it is, or even if it's been overlooked and is never answered, I'm totally fine with that. This series is already awesome and I don't think this small mystery does anything to that status,
When I saw the title for this chapter, for about a quarter of a second I thought that this series was getting abandoned. Thankfully, this was not the case.
Good work as always, you leave us hungry for more.
Manticores?! (or at least tiger-esque equivalents...)
This'll be one helluva fight.
all (not capitalized)
Do you mean "copse"?
Kennedy
What if he had been there that day at home; could he have been able to use CPR to save her?
delete comma
Though either "of, of, of" or "of, or, or" would sound fine, switching back as in "of, or, of" seems extremely bizarre. Also, delete the comma after "Screams".
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I had thought this was being written as one word, "newfoals"? If I'm being momentarily stupid please forgive and ignore me.
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Edit: Damn.
How could we have missed all these?
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... That was intentional, right?
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No...
Dammit! XD
5518593 he didn't haul it, he created it. He was part of the assassin order for...
awhile.
Plus he had to learn something there, its on Multiverse.
What is this Crossover-ed with?
5522424 Possibly every franchise under the sun.
Mainly G1 MLP, but that's just the one playing a major role in it.
Everything else is pretty much a passing reference, really.
5522988 Thanks.
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Agreed
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Maybe the Didact instead of the God-Emperor? He's been at it for 100,000+ years, so he may have a bit more experience with wreaking destruction and desolation than the God-Emporor has had in his 10k.
5547629 Funny thing is, heh, I pictured Keith Szarabajka (The Didact) as the voice of Tirek here.
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I find it strange you like this story, considering your comment.
This story is what most would describe as an ATCB (Anti Conversion Bureau Story) that promptly is against ponification. The newfoals in this story are pretty much mindless smiling zombies, one of the things that sets this apart from many other ATCB is that there is a group called the 'Ponies For Human Life' which are against the assimilation of humanity.
5624902 he does explain later that he only haves so much power over them.
but he still does punish her.
5548393 Trust us, it isn't.
Someone played 5nights At freddys, by the way could you put in the Freddy fazbear crew con your story
5637200 wat?
What you heard, Im sorry if its a big deal dude, just a suggestion
5637231 No i don't know what you mean actually. You lost me. Seriously what do you mean?
If you could ad five nights At freddys to tour story, i know its a bad idea, but have a go, you aded GTA5 in it
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No. Don't add it... it would be rather unnecessary.
He or she is talking about game called Five Night At Freddy's.
I just love these lines from chapter 'Second Month'.
As I am re-reading this story, and have now gotten to the last chapter I read before starting to re-read it, I feel it's only fair to let a couple of my thought loose, at least about this chapter.
Marcus is a good character in my opinion and this chapter builds on it. I felt his pain as he remembered the string of things that hinted at his mother's connection to Equestria that he could only see with the benefit of hindsight. Megan came across as a loving mother who was caught between her knowledge of the worlds. It was truly heartbreaking to find that the bright girl from that cartoon so long ago, who was willing to fight Tirek to help some ponies she barely knew, died in this story while those ponies turned against humanity. As a side note, what happened to the other two humans who were said to know of Equestria (Uncle Danny I believe was one of their names?) I'm guessing that they appeared in other cartoons later on in the Gen1 timeline (I only ever watched the original special at this point in time, sort of to respect where the series all started.) I assume that they just died of old age or something else, or maybe I've just got my facts wrong.
I can only wonder what the next chapter holds and what Celestia will do now that she is back. I wonder if Faust's appearance where she altered Scribe's process was her way of trying to give the good guys an advantage over Tirek (as I assume that what she did allowed Celestia's soul to heal a month early?)
One last thought, I wonder if TCB Elsa and her two reindeer companions are going to ever meet Canon Sint Erklass. I get the feeling it would do them all some good. Elsa might get some comfort along with her two charges, and Erklass might get some comfort as well be knowing that his people weren't completely destroyed (I believe he angsted over TCB Elsa's death, or maybe just his entire people's deaths, in an earlier chapter.)
Who knows what the next chapter will bring. I can only see by reading it, which I intend to do. See you around.
Awawawesomeness! :D
This is epic, just epic... so much epic.
Keep it up!