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ooohhhhh shitd goint to hit the fan
Yes! Another Chapter for the win!
“Twilight Sparkle...” Lyra said at last, tone firm and commanding as she crossed to the library’s front door. “I leave things here in the capable hooves of thyself and the Elements of Harmony. Guard our guest well until we return.”
“But, Princess, where are you going?” you mean luna right?
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All of Twilight's protests make me worry that maybe time travel *does* work that way. What with her always being wrong about what's scientifically possible.
A lot of what happened in this chapter was... a bit too over-the-top for my taste. Marcus seems like a mad dog, and Celestia is... pretty aggressive too. Having said that, I'm glad to see the story progressing. There's a lot of fascinating ideas in this one, and clever little details. Keep it coming!
BTW... I'm surprised Tyrant Celestia even has a sister. She seems like the sort who would have rubbed out Nightmare Moon rather than banish her.
I always wanted to know what happened during their little exchange, thanks for elaborating on it
Damn, nice chapter.
Okay, good.
Now moar!
if thats okay with you...
1311021 You say that, and yet you haven't corrected it yet...
1311210 At least in TCB: Not Alone, Luna fully supports Celestia and her actions. Dunno if the author pulled lore from that fanfic, though.
Long chapter and plot advancement, I like!
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I can see Marcus as a mad dog. He's on the verge of having his entire species wiped from existence, by a brutal, genocidal group of aliens. For the last however many years, he's known little else but war and bloodshed. At that point, I can see him being prepared to do literally anything. No matter how long of a shot it is.
Especially to a dead ringer of the greatest monsters he's ever known.
“Twilight Sparkle...” Lyra said at last, tone firm and commanding as she crossed to the library’s front door. “I leave things here in the capable hooves of thyself and the Elements of Harmony. Guard our guest well until we return.”
I think you meant LUNA in that passage...
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made the change. thank you for pointing it out.
Huzzah! Huzzah! This Equestria is going to help Earth
*Claps slowly.*
this is freakin a great story.
So that explains Marcus's supernatural strength, speed and agility. He's got magic tattoos. Unfortunately, it seems to come at a cost - heightened aggression.
Still, nice to see what's going on Earth and "Dark Equestria". And Vinyl with a minigun, do want!
All I can is...rape time for TCB Equestria!
Yay! The rewrite is finally up to the point where the original left off. I cannot wait to see where you take us from here!
This is good it shows perfictly what would happen if someone from TCB Earth arrived at cannon Equestria
Interesting, Equestria is declaring war on... Equestria... Mind boggling, and I love it! This is better than changelings, and heck Discord should love it! (ponders a moment) He may even be the perfect guy to help in a war of this caliber... who knows?
Enjoying the story immensely, keep up the great work!
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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG.
Best chapter so far! :D
I think that's Luna speaking, not Lyra.
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Damnit....seriously? Fuck alright, i got it.
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Shhh.....
Be quiet....You will ruin the fun for everyone!
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There is some things that Marcus did in the past that made him who he is in the story. It nearly destroyed him.
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hehehehe I can't wait to see your faces later on....or at least your responses.
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Can't wait to see whatcha got in store for us!
Lungs..... breath... can't!
1315151 You lost me after "Earth Megan."
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Sorry, it's complicated, just look up RK_Striker and read his fics. It might make more sense after that.
Epic, this was truley epic!!!
Kinda curious, have you ever read TCB: A Kinder World? I can see some similarities... but this one is FAR better written.
This requires fixxing, I don't know who said this, but Lyra hardly interrupted herself to speak for his destruction.
.........................................*clap*
*clap, clap, clap*
*thunderous applause*
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This chapter, this chapter was just plain epic. The tension, the surprise of the magic runes, Celestia and Luna fighting Marcus, the segment involving memories...I can hear them, the soft, slow beat, as the drums of war begin to sound off, and as the beat fills the land, a howl of fury shall rise up from all of Equus.
Beware, Dark Equestria, for the Four Ponies of the Apocalypse are about to pay you a visit, buwhahahahahahah
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I actually have a rather weird theory now on the TCB universe Equestria that's got Tyrantestia at the helm: Its an alternate universe, where Celestia and Luna usurped Discord from position as the top god of the realm (it was the only title he possessed, as he had no interest in 'ruling' over others, just making sure that there was enough chaos to keep the balance between order and chaos, with the occasional random crazy event to keep things lively.) After imprisoning Discord, she and Luna began placing a forced Harmony on Equestria and the world, creating the first cutie marks and working to stamp out all negative viewpoints towards them. This lead to a war with neighboring species as they rebelled against Celestia and Luna, seeking to maintain the freedom that they had had under Discords rule. They lose, horribly, to the point that the few remnants left have submitted to the sisters rule (if in word only) Then cue Nightmare Moons attempted coup, perhaps Luna realized that what they were doing was wrong. Celestia fights her and sends her to the moon, hoping that a timeout will teach her sister the error of her ways. When she returns, the mane six use the elements and 'reharmonize' her, cleansing her of her darkness AND her viewpoints against her sister. With the change in bearers, Discord manages to break free of his prison, and he is none too happy about what he's been forced to endure, so angry that he forgets for a moment what his real purpose is and actually causes disharmony as he sets the world upside down. He's beaten, and then the events of the TCB universe happens. Discord remembers his real purpose, and decides to bring in some help to keep Earth from falling to Tyrantestia's enforced harmony.
but that's just my theory. If it is an alternate Equestria, it certainly makes sense for Discord to be different as well.
EDIT: Oh yeah...and...um...MOAR PLEASE!!!
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Hmm....very good try. Close....but not close enough. All i can say is that Discord does have a hand in it, but that is as far as I can explain without giving too much away.
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I already fixed it.
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Yeah, I actually made the story before him, but the first draft was kind of shitty. Apparently I was so bad that me and him butted heads for a couple of minutes before we both backed off and apologized for being douches to each other. Altogether, we both have very different ideas, but are similar in concept.
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Either way, we needs moar as soon as possible man! I want to see Equestria Prime kick Dark Equestria's flanks so hard that their ancestors will feel it!
I'm curious how they're going to get to Earth though, as well as how they're going to keep the humans from shooting them on sight. Something tells me that before the army moves into Earths realm, they'll need to have Marcus cross over first with the Sisters, the Mane six, and several of the human supporting ponies counterparts, as proof that they are definitively a different Equestria.
This story dear kids is friggin brilliant! Rewrite is amazing! I cannot wait for more....
I've been waiting for a story where Celestia remains the broken one.
Well done sir. I look forward to seeing the reactions of an angry sun goddness upon Nova Equestria, their "own" Celestia at that!
For a moment there my entire being needed to just murder millions. And then proceed to [REDACTED DUE TO BEING WORSE THAN CUPCAKES] TCB!Twilight, revive her, and repeat it over a hundred times. Do you know how that feels?
But then... I saw how Celestia cracked... And now I have a grin that could put the Cheshire Cat to shame on my face.
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I can hear them, the soft, slow beat, as the drums of war begin to sound off...
HERE COME THE DRUMS!
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That was rather hilarious, I will admit
1324333 That's the Master for you.
Ninja'd by the author. Nothing to see here.
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She was laying down for awhile. A broken ankle would of healed within moments.
HAH! LOGIC'D
1333123 Oh wow...
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1333178 To me it is. It won't show even if I try to cut-and-paste the URL.
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Ah well, screw it.
Thank you for making my day.
1333191 YW
yay this story kicks ass
Great story. It has a lot of potential. This rewrite is much better. Toning him down a bit helps make the idea that he can get help from Canon Celestia more believable. The next chapter should be interesting to see how it plays out. Hopefully Celestia can convince the rest of Equestria to fight with the humans.
Any idea for the next update?
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At the moment, TB3 is working on the chapter and I am finishing up chapter 5. Right now, TB3 is working his magic so it should be out soon.
Maybe