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All I want to say his her parents must have HATED her to name their little mare "BITTERSWEET HARSHWHINNY". I mean...wow. That is literally one of the worst things you could name a child in that culture. Just sayin.
5663112 Could be worse.
Gluesticks Paste is one name.
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Okay. THAT'S the worst, hands down. But Bittersweet Harshwhinny is up there.
Well, this was one of the best chapters I've read that nobody on the Team told me to expect.
5663219 Only a few people was allowed to be on this chapter. Tried to keep it in-house so to speak with the original 5, Me, TB3, Fluffy, Rush, and Kizuna.
We did let in one or two, but its mostlty those five that worked on it.
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Not that I'm complaining. Though I've got my usual niggles about purple prose and expospeak, I still like to see something come out every now and then that reminds me of original-flavour Spectrum.
Best chapter full of filler I ever read!
In a phrase I would describe the discussion between them as, beautiful contrast.
And all the plans are coming together. To high on power, dark equestria will be hit hard.
But I beg of you not to use the old and worn plot twist of it all going to shit and them somehow pulling a win against unreal odds.
I see it time and again and while it is better in a less built story, I have seen to much go into there plans for it to simply fall apart.
I'm simply asking for the long, hot, bullet, and body ridden slog that they are expecting. Let there be twists, snap decisions in the face of surprises, let little stories be told on all levels of the battle and campaign.
But please don't make them win the impossible odds, make them win the improbable.
Either way it seems we are nearing the end, I can't wait for more.
5663365 Here is a preview list of fights.
Battle of Boston 2- Tyrant vs Celestia, Luna, and Discord.
Battle of Boston 2- Tyrant vs Marcus and Elsa
Battle of Boston 2- Solar Empire vs United Armies
Invasion of Canterlot- Equestrian Resistance vs Newfoals
Invasion of Canterlot- infiltration- Trixie, Micheal, Franklin, Khan, (*&$, &(^*$ getting into Canterlot
Invasion of Canterlot- Going Loud- Stephan, Trevor, Kraber, Dragons getting into Canterlot
Invasion of Canterlot- Elements- Canon Elements vs NotElements
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Long enough?
Anyone else thing of this when they read that?
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No? Just me?
Has Mauds betrayl been touched up in depth in any of the side stories? I feel like it has and I missed it. Beyond that it was cool seeing the Resistance and PHL finally come together wholeheartedly. Can't wait to see more!
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And it shall be glorious. The epic Final battle to this Fantasy.
5664053 It'll happen in Last Train. Well.... it's already happened, but you'll get more details on it later.
5664171 ah okay, I may need to re read through Last Train again come to think of it
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Oh hey, you can link my story to your Author's note now.
Anyway, wow that was a whole lot of planning and discussion. I mean I know Equestria is not going to be the same anymore but was Harshwhinny and her Resistance actually want to bring Equestria back exactly how it was? Is that how everyone thought they would do? I thought they would actually just try to make a better Equestria in there, not bring it back as exactly as it was before this whole mess started. Though I'm pretty sure Celestia and Luna will let the other Equestria pick out their leader and they'll just try to help out as any other country leader as they could when this is over. Also that's a very harsh, yet justified, opinion on that museum piece idea there that Cheerliee brought up about the alicorns. It's probably better as how things fell and got replaced like most things in history.
5663437 This is going to be glorious.
A love interest right before the shit goes down? Don't let them die!!!
I thought that a previous chapter mentioned that all major airports (including JFK) were closed?
Hmm. Shame this kind of plot prompt would be rather difficult to implement for a human version movie.
Because two alien nations banding together to fight off a mad god with multiversal shenanigans on the side is just awesome.
So many damn movies taking the easy route and make every damn alien, for all intents and purposes, humans who look weird. aargh. This includes sci fi, and fantasy. Weird hair, pointy ears, strange colored eyes, different skin, differing heights, an abundance of beard, Extra muscles, every tool basically usable by the other guy with enough training, etc.
Hell, a country of dragon traders would be something new enough to interest me immediately, because the size disparity is going to cause some major conflicts.
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The military own it, I think.
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I'd hardly refer to this as filler but I suppose it is in only the most technical sense.
5663365 Little stories told on all levels?
Well, sir, I can tell ya that some of us are planning a lower-deck subplot, regarding those seemingly faceless Equus soldiers.
Stick around for Third Month!
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And thanks to inspiration from certain sources such as the Indonesian action flick The Raid, there will still be lots of violence in these characters' future.
and now I need to go watch Osmosis Jones again....
This is going to get nasty real fast, I am going to love seeing the plan come together.
*Whistles*...I must say, that was quite a meeting of minds, but when Harshwhinny went on that infodump...I had the most glorious mental image of a glorious montage of Equestrian Resistance spies walking around suspiciously and spying on their intended targets. Man oh man I'm reminded of the first half of "The Longest Day."
I would love to see these plans go into motion before the main event. Countdown to H-Hour begins...now!
Sheesh, you could at least [url=imgur.com/gallery/VnYRB]put up [url=imgur.com/gallery/h9E46]links to [url=imgur.com/gallery/2LODs]Erma.
Aw, little Erma's found some new friends! Are the Newfoals ready for a haunting?
5665136 wat?
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She was out-logiced
5667549 Exactly.
Ok. If discord ever fights the tyrant again he should summon the following things to aid him.
1. Metal gear Rex.
2. A dire miralis (it's a fucking fatalis with magma flowing trough its body!)
3. Metal face/mumkhar. (HEY, HEY, ITS TIME TO DIE!!
4. Loader bot.
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I totally forgot Seabreeze so I wasn't expecting to see him pop up in this story and I can't helps but reading all of his lines in his voice. So the Deers from the MLP: FIM comics is gonna an make appearance in this story?:
King Aspen:
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Bramble:
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Blackthorn:
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5667951 Pretty much every character from TCB Equestria is OoC, its a given.
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Oh god yes.
Metal Face, Jade Face, Face Nemesis, and Yaldabaoth please!
5667641 A loader? Seriously? I destroy those things by the dozen!
5668087 I... (Reads again) Huh... I didn't notice that. TB3 wrote this part of the scene, I thought it was odd during the rough draft, but I figure he fix it up. Guess I skipped over it. Maybe we will update it later with something more.
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5663119 Are not we forgetting one faction in this story?
I can just picture it now, violence in the streets, burning cities, scorched earth... I imagine it set to Free Bird. Slow Motion in the beginning, but as the solo hits everything gets violent and gritty! It's gonna be great.
5668077 but. It's loader bot from tales from the borderlands!
5668037 MIGHT AS WELL BRING THE FUCKING MECHONIS!!!
I’m really looking forward to seeing the free ponies from the ‘true’ Equestria and the fallen one ‘interact’… though 'clash' may be a better word.
5673621 It's been done in Calm Before the Storm.
5675090 Ah that explains it. thanks. I tend to up vote the side stories when they come out to counteract the automatic downvotes, but I haven't gotten around to reading them yet. Think I'll do that now.
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At least it's not Dick Budkis.
you know what? Best chapter in forever, even if I am somehow unsatisfied.
I was probably unsatisfied because the conflict came out of almost nowhere and was resolved on the grounds that it wasn't a conflict that was necessary. Instead, it turned out to be a clever ploy by a pony we never met to get to know cheerily for reasons we have never heard of. It is almost like saying "we were really just kidding about that couple thousand words of political posturing, it was a ruse." Then again, I guess it was better than someone offhandedly mentioning that harshwinnie's organization was basically collapsing and handing over power to cheirilly, but was the improvement worth the time and effort I took reading this and you took writing it when compared to the time and effort of just dropping an informative paragraph?
I say yes, it was worth it. Good chapter, many yayness having.
5677263 Yeah, I stopped reading after a few chapters. A story where the only conflict is preconceptions and stupidity kind of suck.
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I can wait to see the final battles like Twilight Vs. her evil counterpart and brainwash Shining Armor with Twilight defeating her evil counterpart with her using her smarts to win similar to Morel in this video the fight ends at 11:53:
Or seeing this music playing with the Tyrant vs Celestia fight scene:
Or seeing the Equestrian Resistance vs Newfoals like seeing Chieftain Minos, Sint Erklass, Pack Alpha Canis, Queen Hedwig and her son Prince Tobias,Queen Chrysalis, Shaman Quagga, and Chief Thunderhooves competing against each other to see can kills the most Newfoals but seeing Sint Erklass pulling off something like this:
Minos, Pack Alpha Canis, Queen Hedwig, Queen Chrysalis, Shaman Quagga, Chief Thunderhoove:
Minos: That still only counts as one!
Queen Chrysalis: Adviser please stop me if I ever get the idea to invade the Reindeers.
The royal Changeling Adviser: Yes my Queen.
And are we gonna see some version of Scorpan in this story that maybe looks something like this?:
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