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I regret nothing.
3395574Of course you don't
*Sees update*
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*sees word count*
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11:00 PM
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The editing and text coding for editing of this chapter was like Gandi.
The Civ series Gandi.
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3395611 Not anti-human, nor is it anti-pony!
3395715 ....wut?
Missing a "care" there. Still reading, and thought you'd like to know.
EDIT: and forgot to mention that the tense was wrong too
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The last part about discord time traveling made no sense to me.
Hope it is not importent to the plot later.
I soon as I read special locket, I knew his mother had to be megan.
3395847 Time travelling?
No, time dilation and various points of time for different worlds. Will be better explained later
Simply way of putting
one world can be in the middle ages, another in 50's, another in the year 2343. Each world has their own time.
Hello everypony!
3395920 you not in the editor list anymore. That was a mistake, but I should thank you for your help
sry
3395960 Cause you love me.
3395769 No, it can't be...I missed something? I failed in my duties? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Celestia's eyes are finally open
Nice.
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3395963 3395800
Found another:
I don't think the "the" should be there.
3396057 I'll make a list of Pre Readers in the next one.
Awww, I was hoping he'd bring Serious Black along to fight the Tyrant Queen. {Big multiverse army would be nice.}
And even though I can kind of see where Discord's coming from, I can't help but want to punch his face in. Give Celestia a break. She did what she thought was right and has been leading her ponies in an era of peace and prosperity. She had to banish her sister and has witnessed herself and her precious ponies committing atrocities. GIVE HER A BUCKING BREAK, YOU SELF-CONCEITED PIECE OF TROLLIP! {And if chaos is so great, then how do you explain the Four chaos gods? Hmm.}
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So, for what you're saying is all those things she had to go through wasn't because she made those decitions.
And I would be grumpy too being set in stone for as long as he did. Contious. Each second of it.
Alright, that was a pretty awesome read.
Discord puttin the truth down on Celestia was fun to watch, as well as a more in depth look into the 'conflict' between Discord and the sisters.
However.....
I find it hard to believe that even with three editors, the chapter is still filled with tense errors.
Do you need another editor, perhaps one who could just focus on issues like grammar and tense?
I could do it.
Other than that, Discord ripping Gandalf off was cheesey beyond comprehension, and the line you used doesn't really mesh with his character.
And quite honestly, I felt the Harry potter part was completely unnecessary to add, for this chapter at least. You would have been better off putting it up as a bonus chapter, or start a side story where each chapter is one of Discord's romps through the multi-verse, Mass Effect and LotR included. I saw that mention of giant cuttle-fish!
3396320 Eh. I just saying to ease up on her. We already have one universe ripping her a new one. {Imagine watching yourself torment your loved ones and do such horrible things.}
But to add insult to injury, the author is saying all of Equestria problems and her even being there, are her fault....Okay. That's a bit much, don't you think? (Not saying it's bad, it's just...jeeze! Way to make a nice, caring character cry her eyes out and break down.}
And now that I think about it, TCB universe is a rip off of Resistance.
1: Alien race from outer space arrives on earth.
2: Alien race assimilates the native race and pits the assimilates against the natives in order to conquer the world.
3: Has a means to terraform the planet to suit their needs.
4: Has mystery surrounding their motives and such. {Though the Chimera more so, since sadly it seems the Resistance series is done.}
5: Badass main characters going all gun ho. {Though Nathan Hale could show the humans a things or two.}
Just saying.
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The rip off resistence. My sides that's true.
But the thing is. I know things. Red likes to rant about the story.
3396376 Who's Red?
*Challenge finished*
*Results?*
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I love you Redskin...
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Redskin122004.
It's hard name to type you know.
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I need to understand what does this mean.
3396382 Oh....Though I'm surprised no one saw the similarities to Resistance...{Though i'll chalk that up to a lot of people not knowing about the series. You do not want to know how many people I had to explain to them the plot and such.}
3395963 Going to make that avatar of yours a reality?
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Wait, what? When you mean people didn't understand it you mean that people that played the game didn't know what was going on?
Because that's the only reason I can see about explaining the plot. Because anything else you would say, "Play the game." or "Look it up."
3396407 No. I was writing a FIM crossover {you can see it here} and people didn't know what I was cross-overring with. It was only a few people, but still. {It was even worse for my FIM/Dinosaur Wars crossover. Dinosaur Wars is one of the greatest book series's I've ever read.}(Though sadly, I've had to put my fic on hold...I don't know exactly how to put it back together, and so far, no one's been wanting to help.)
3396321 really, you can avoid the Discord side story if you want, its just a large plot bunny that bother me.
As for the last words for Discord, just a little something to end it...cause I didn't know how.
For the tense...
Fuck it, I don't care anymore.
3396365 Nah, I don't hate Celestia, this Discord just like ripping into her because in the end, its sort of true. She made them the way they are, and now its coming back to bite her when something like this comes up.
For this world at least.
In the end, its a conflict of plans laid into motion long before Celestia was born, and she is destroying it. Someone, like Discord, who knew of the old ponies, aka alicorns of the past, finds ponies lacking a lot.
And Celestia destroyed thoses plans in the end.
Its like that project you been working on for the longest time, only for your little brother literally come in and destroy it. But on a.much worse scale compare to this point.
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It would probably make sense to make a separate fic for the Discord side-story. Call it Trollin' The Omniverse or something.
On that note, will Discord be going to other Equestria's? Perhaps have a run-in with a certain universe-hopping Sweetie Belle? A certain sociopathic version of himself? A certain time-looping prince?
Oh, the possibilities are endless!
That said, surprised Marcus didn't recognize the description of the Mass Effect universe, though by 2020 the series may be a bit too obscure for a jarhead like him.
3396481 nah, just do what most others do....
It doesn't exist in this world!
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Sorry, but you just eliminated that option by dropping Discord into the Potterverse, which has already been confirmed to be a fictional franchise on TCB!Earth.
Well, not eliminated the option persay, just made it a bit too arbitrary to swallow.
Now, about those other Equestria's?
3396500 planning on it. Look at my blogs to find a list of what worlds he is heading. Potterversr is one, there is a few more to go!
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I'd suggest throwing in a few more Equestria's into that list, then we be golden.
Lets just hope to all things holy Discord does NOT discover Lewis S. Carol's dimension.
He may never want to leave. XD
3396537 Sweetie Belle Chronicles: Discord Version.
3396481 Sociopathic Discord from what?
And I see that suggestion has already been made.
3396109 I'll try harder next time, I swear!
3396397 IT IS A REALITY.
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Pony POV series Discord.
That, or .MOV Discord... Trololo!
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!
I LOVE YOU! This is absolutely awesome! Discord and Celestia's dynamic is a very nice touch, and very interesting. The history with them is very deep and well done, and I especially love the backstory of the Changelings.
Man, poor Marcus, having to kill his only surviving family member. I hope TCB Twilight gets her horn shoved up her ass for what she did to Jacob.
And the beatdown on Blueblood was awesome! Nice touch!
Looking forward to the next one friend!!
3396743 just to let you know, chapter 8 or 9 might be boring to you.
I had a rough time with those chapters and it shows.
3396741 thank you! Glad I got back on the ball on this chapter.
i am so fucking befuddled right now. i love it. also, i can't be the only one thinking this is going to be a fucking bloodbath? A, the ponies of equis A are a bunch of soft gits who use spears and will probably go mad the second they have to kill smiling ponies and normal but insane ponies. B, the griffins and minos and such will help but does that potion effect just humans? cause if not theyre going to be in the same mess as them. and C, surely the changlings would just be overwhelmed in every fight by the sick love the walking corpses will be pouring at them? but, we'll see how it goes. though, word of caution author. one of my favorite writters, christopher paolini, made a rather fatal mistake in his book series i wouldnt want you to repeat. he basicaly spent all 4 books hyping up the main villian more and more until he was basicaly a god whos power level was over 90000000, and as a result, when it came to the final fight, it was an ex machina that saved the day because he was so powerfull the main heroes entire journey of power and experience gaining was pointless and it felt cheap as fuck. just try not to do the same thing, yeah? looking forward to the rest, keep up the good work.
i loved that celestia finally yelled at blueblood he deserved it and i love his punishment being a statue for centuries