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3884373 WISH GRANTED
Queue epic fight music.
KILL THE FALSE PRINCESS!
GLORY TO THE TRUE CELESTIA! NEVER WAVER FOR SHE IS WITH US!
Argh, cliffhangers!
I can tell this fight will be badass. Can't wait.
Shit just got real? That my good editor is the understatement of the Century.
Cover Art source ?
It's possible I would like to have this cover art as a phone wallpaper~
4004113 check earlier in the commentw, I got it from one of the guys, but its somewhere on the web.
4004099 You have my fluffy honor that I will do my best to make the next battle TOTALLY BADASS, AND DEFINITELY NOT JUST REGULAR ASS!
Welp, this was a pain. For eyes hurt. Not for the story though, I mean the extre-sprinted ours that came from doing that damned ending description. Hope it's evil-littered enough for readers.
SO FUCKING AWESOME,MOOOOORRRRREEEEE!!!!
4004143 Seems evil enough
So I understand just why you did this, but...
What. The. Fuck. Do you know the stopping power of a .50 BMG? Because I do; ten to fifteen thousand foot pounds of impact force, enough to rip a man in body armor in half. Multiplying that by ten? That's enough force to turn said man into paste, then said paste into mist, let alone the potential 30,440 feet per second bullet velocity. Congratulations, you've turned your DSR-50 into a Battleship mounted COIL GUN. Seriously though, that bullet is moving at Mach 27, it'd most likely melt before it even hit the target.
I'd be fucking terrified of a weapon that could punch a hole in Fort Knox from three miles away, too.
Holy shit, how far in the future is this? The most powerful revolver at this current moment in time is the S&W .500 Magnum, being a 12.7X16mm handgun bullet. A 13mm bullet is completely overkill, considering the damage a .500 does.
I would prefer a D20RS, but I guess the 417 is still a good choice. German weapons engineering is ridiculously good.
Firing that monstrosity you call a DSR-50 would be the scariest shit I would ever do.
Nope. Nope nope nope. You are so wrong on this. Finding a 40mm incendiary grenade would be absurdly hard, considering they're a very, very specialized explosive in usage. More likely he'd be carrying a normal or HE 40mm, because those are much easier to find.
Honestly I would prefer a set of T-51B, but this isn't Fallout so...
God forbid you put this absurd Runic Magic on that.
4004212 jeeze, maybe two fold then, I didnt write that piece, you should have seen the first iterations
as for the revolver, that fires shotgun rounds.
for the incendiary rounds, I doubt people would care if you are using them on zombie like ponies that rush head first into fire. If it works, just keep making said item that works. I doubt something like Geneva Conventions is going to stop people.
Save the Humans.
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For some weird-ass immortal being, triple – maybe quadruple – would be perfect, but safety in overkill-so-large-it-could-kill-a-city. Also, your story.
Revolver firing shotgun shells? .44 Magnum's do that; 28 gauge shells. A 13mm would fire something like maybe 24 gauge. Not worth it IMO.
It's not the Geneva Convention that's the problem, it's finding – then making – the incendiaries. A normal grenade is so much easier, and a HE is almost as easy too. That, and an underbarrel grenade uses fire just as much as kinetic force and shrapnel. Hence, why an incendiary is a highly specialized version. Mainly for getting rid of materiel.
On that point, why not just take Tear Gas grenades and fill it with an aerosol version of a neurotoxin?
4004212 Yeah, the 13mm revolver was my fault. It was based on an old Taurus project to make a 28-gauge revolver, but that never got off the ground. And I'm also sorry about saying incendiary-Honestly, I didn't know, and I'm sorry for that.
4004282 it said in the story, people are using more overkill means. I believe they made a gun to use said shotgun rounds
plus tear gas would be less effective if all unicorns or pegasi can get rid of it with a wave of a horn or sweep of the wings.
I believe incendiary weapons would be the first to be made in large bulk or used by specialized squads, like Stephan's group.
4004309 eh, it gives the runes more creditability to make unsafe weapons more usable.
4004321 So we're using them as quasi-handwavium?
4004336 Yes
4004344 WORKS FOR ME
4004313 No no no, not tear gas. Filling them with neurotoxin, preferably fast-acting.
After all; no Geneva Convention, fuck their day up hard.
4004360 meh, I dont want to look up neurotoxin and their effects. Lazy in that regards
4004336 I like this description.
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Also, the Runes I'm used to don't work like this. I'm so used to the reality warping Patryn and Sartan runes from a book series I read, so I guess they could've just messed up.
4004390 runes are different everytime I see them in various medias
i just go with a few basics and work off from there
Proudtobe made a mistake here:
That's exactly the kind of tension I was expecting from their first contact, but I didn't think they would be that prepared, wow. I was surprised that even the TCB!Main Six was here as well, I really, really hope they just watch in this fight.
4004437 actually that was Drawdex in his editing rush.
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The D20RS is nothing else as the HK416 in 5.56. The HK417 in 7.62 got way much more firepower but the technology behind it is the same like in the HK416. And yes, German weapons are ridiculously good, I know from experience.
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Oh, you mean when he was making his fixes to Proud's writing.
4004754 yup
We're getting closer to the big dramatic moment. Closer... and closer...
Time to bring out the big guns!
The tension in the air must be high. Right before them might as well be the lord of all evil.
....Yup, Luna and Discord is doomed. The Tyrant distracts, the elements snap.
Game ova.
Great chapter, the tenison is edible.
Oooh snap. Time to wait for another chapter ^^
It's good to see they've come up with possible countermeasures for the Tyrant and her tricks, after all it's too easy to put all their eggs in one basket...but it's kind of a shame Luna and Discord (please stop trying to backtrack on him and making him look like anything other than chaos and disharmony personified and turned less evil and more neutral/good because that's what he is in the show and you keep trying to insist he was unfairly persecuted when all the evidence has shown otherwise) didn't get to talk more to Steven and his buddies. Just when t looked like things were looking up...NOPE! Surprise Sun Tyrant visit!
Hopefully the next chapter will have great action but I feel the need to ask...why did she come here? I mean to that point. She couldn't have known ahead of time they'd be there at that specific place and time! And if she can just teleport anywhere she wants, why not just teleport all over the world to every major city the resistance is in and BAM, everything would be over in a week.
4004554 When you're using runes to increase the power of a weapon, even double the impact of a 5.56 is better than a 7.62NATO.
There is the fact that the D20RS is almost as accurate as the HK417 with the accurized sniper barrel (20" on both) and that the lower grain of the 5.56 would allow you to carry more ammunition. When you're dealing with hundreds of cannon fodder all at once, using something like the NATO standard for almost every automatic weapon out there would be a smart idea.
4005601 Then the war would be over too quick and this story would be too short. Perhaps Tirek's Bag has made her a little dumb and lazy? She thinks she is going to win.
So why not let her mind controlled subjects do most of the work for her?
However, her non TCB counterpart, while not as strong, I think is far smarter due to being not gone insane from Tirek's Bag.
But yeah, a little more Discord acting chaotic good or chaotic neutral. I think Discord has been chaotic neutral in this story, like he is in the show. So I don't have much issue in how he behaves in this story.
4004212 Never mind that just imagine what it would be like if they put runic magic on forerunner tech, now that's fucking up the wrong tree.
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No, he is a German. Read my sidestory, there is everything you need to know about him and how he end up there.
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I just love Hellsing Ultimate Abridged. Also know the original series.
Brace yourself folks, a shitstorm is coming.
4006099 What if we used it on guns from Borderlands 2?
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Shortform YouTube links don't work here. Let me:
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Reread the bold and underlined portions of Queen Celestia's mental monolog. I would say that there is more Tirek in that grey matter than Celestia anymore. I am not entirely sure Sun Butt can be saved from this demonic possession.
In regards to the authors...When you reach the final battle sequence of this story, I suggest using the song, 'It Has to Be This Way' from Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance.
The atmosphere in that song, Absolutely perfect!
4007120 Finally, someone has taken notice. Built around something like this.
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4007403 I take it you'll think about it? Because in my opinion, that is the greatest song for a final boss ever made.