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What is thy bidding, my master.
Whoo! Bad-arse Celestia scene!
Luna Vs Samsung....
Someone make that happen
Amazing....
I have no words for how enraptured this has me...
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I can't wait to see the shyte hit the fan!
I am delighted to see this fic updated! Please, do carry on.
... You shot this chapter immediately after watching those episodes, didn't you?
Well, at least you incorporated them in well enough. Must have been a saving grace, that Crystal Empire.
And a romance between Marcus and Cherille? Nice! ... I just hope my own can compared to at least a quarter of your story.... But that's a longshot...
Would you mind helping me in piecing their psyche together?
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Actually this chapter was done for a bit, but we held back for season 3, to see if we can incorporate anything from the opening season.
You saw the results for that. :D
Piecing whose psyche together?
The part when Celestia embraced Luna and Cadance when she had seen how they stuck to their belifs despite everything that had happend was just beautiful, and it's so good to see that you are still writing this fic.
I had my doubts when you started a rewrite but this is a definite improvement.
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I find your lack of faith disturbing....
I eagerly await the next update.
1609283 I see... Just as long as you don't force in canon to conform to the official sources, I think your story will be good from here on out.... Hopefully....
As for your question... Well, I am "attempting" my own take on the TCB universe, coming with an extra helping of OctaScratch shipping.... But I am in fear of it not being up to adequate standards. I need a hand in pushing in a strong foundation for the story, but I hold little experience in writing long stories. Every time I look at my own creations, something just doesn't feel right. Know what I am saying?
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Yup. I can understand.
I could take a look at it, but if it falls flat, i will let you know about it.
1609460 Wilco, here's the link.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/62292/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-Losing-Grip-on-Humanity
YAHOO! Go Celestia. Show her the might of a true ruler. Good shall always prevail against the wicked.
I'm usually not a big fan of fast paced action but you pulled that of quite well. Kudos!
Well Dayum.
Using Tirek's Anti-Rainbow?
Quick, somebody get Grogar!
Nothing like an undead horde to spruce things up!
Read this.
Looked around Derpibooru.
Found this.
cdn.derpiboo.ru/thumbs/1300/1400/2012/09/01/03_50_56_873_87461__UNOPT__safe_princess_celestia_princess_luna_artist_sixpathoffriendship
Here's also what I now consider her armor in this story.
cdn.derpiboo.ru/thumbs/1300/700/2012/09/26/14_36_52_721_107001__UNOPT__safe_princess_celestia_sketch_armor_pencil_artist_george5408
1609785 That last one is full of win
1610094 They say that the ones who are the best at killing enjoy it the least.
Those aren't the eyes of a happy pony...
I never like how FS has mindrape powers with the stare, but if we say that she got a power boost from the rainbow of darkness, maybe it will work.
I doubt most human would like to keep ponies in their world even if they were freed from mind control.
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST THIS STORY MAKES ME PISS RAINBOWS.
.........................WORDS CANT DESCRIBE HOW I FEEL ABOUT THIS AND I DON'T MEAN THAT IN THE CLICHE WAY I MEAN WORDS LITERALLY CANT DESCRIBE HOW I FEEL ALSO
P.S
ROYAL CANTERLOT VOCE
Holy fuck...
Give me a day to compose myself and actually write something out!
In all seriousness, wow. You did an excellent job spinning the memories to brutal effect, and forcing Celestia to essentially face the monster that she could become. Although I am not a fan of the Gore tag that is currently on this story and typically only read romance stories, this one has my full attention and I am looking forward to seeing what happens. And Discord as an ally, I am curious to see how well that goes over! Don't think I've ever seen him used successfully as an ally in any story yet, so I am looking forward to it even more.
most excellent chapter, and you've got my full attention!
Story of a million flashbacks... Most of this chapter was a recap for story left unwritten.
...Why can I not thumb up this again?
awww nigga hell naaawwwww
1610700 Calm brother.
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What you getting at?
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The Gore tag is more of implying that it is there, but not in great description (Until a certain point in the story)
The next chapter will surprise you.
Team One: Princess Celestia of the day, Princess Luna of the night, Princess Cadence of the Crystal Kingdom, Discord God of chaos, Elements of Harmony, Marcus of Earth!
Team Two: Queen Celestia of the day, Elements of
HarmonyTyranny, an army of brainwashed ponies!Team Three: Technology!
Show me your moves!
Fight!
DUN DUN DUN! Tirek eh? I wonder how Discord will react to the ponies NEEDING his HELP. Will he be sympathetic to the humans?
Epic
Oh shit is really starting to get real now.
shit is getting real. on a side note i don't normally like these types of fics, because they often end up with humans getting wiped out or something like that, i hope that it all turns out well in the end.
All Brits in this chapter get the Winston Churchill Seal of Approval
i.imgur.com/AO1mr.jpg
That scene where William tries to save a recently converted subject? This is how a truly good monarch behaves, ladies and gentlemen. If the real Prince William is half the man you make him out to be, the Commonwealth has a bright future ahead. I hope he and canon Celestia meet, I think they would get along well.
But if there was only one reason I love this chapter, it would be the Solar Tyrant confrontation. Just damn. It quite clearly demonstrates just how horribly out of character TCB has made Celestia. All I can say is kick her ass, canon Celestia!
HOLY SHIT! THIS IS AWESOME!
I especially love the confrontation between the Solar Tyrant and Celestia. You can feel the sheer power and hatred in the conversation.
And the "Dark Elements"...Creepy. Dark Fluttershy can only be described as utterly nightmarish.
And the newfoals. Uncanny Valley doesn't begin to describe them.
I'm happy to await more.
I do believe Celestia has discovered the secrets of Spiral Power.
ROW ROW FIGHT DA POWAH.
woohoo! glad to see this update.
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Based on what little we know of Discord, I would say the envoy of Chaos would certainly be agreeable to stopping the such a travesty.
If the only true independent thoughts are from the Queen herself, then Equestria would have only one true individual in it.
A colorful clockwork world with colorful clockwork ponies living colorful clockwork lives thinking colorful clockwork thoughts... Forever and ever.
Never able to step out of line of their own volition.
A sick twisted world of the purest form of order.
Wait, in the 2nd chapter, King William was ponified and they were still in London. Now this flashback happened, I don't know which one is real. But anyways keep up the good work buddy! Following this story intently
1611371 That this chapter was more flashback than what is currently happening, and most of the flash back was just fill that will likely not be expanded upon beyond it convinces Celestia to help the humans. I skipped most of the flash backs except the one involving Luna getting turned to stone. All these flash backs give this chapter a distinctly filler episode feel.
If you wanted to write about these scenes, you should've gone all the way and started the story before he crosses over, instead of jamming all this backstory into one or even a few little chapters. I wouldn't mind knowing all this stuff, just don't make it something that's already happened, but stuff that is happening. It makes it seem more relevant when it's in the present instead of some memory.
Overall, if you are teaching us about the the characters past, you start the story in the past and go from there. If it's the lore you are teaching us, that is done through background details with stuff that leaves implications for the reader to interpret. The less you point out the more the reader will pay attention in order to find out about the story. Show don't tell. I believe that's the term?
Does this clear up what I meant?
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You do realize that this is after the whole mind share event right? It kind of has to have memory flash backs.
If you skipped the entire flashback scene, then you are doing yourself no favors, since it holds a lot of potential to make the chapter great.
If you didn't like it, maybe it was cause you skipped a lot of the story to begin with, the flashbacks are the main point to the entire chapter.
1614112 I skipped over the flashbacks no worse for wear, I understand it all perfectly well what is going on still. That means you could've been less focused on them and added more actual content for the plot. I am also not upset because I skipped the flashbacks, I am upset that with out those flashbacks there is really no content in the chapter. What little content there is is mostly about her reaction to the flashbacks, with the exception for the conversation with the other celestia, and everything past that. I am not tring to insult you so you can stop acting so defensive. If I didn't like the plot, the story wouldn't be in my favs.
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You....you wonderful man you!
I was looking for something like this!
1611396 You can't forget every other species on canon Equestria is going to be helping.
Not gonna lie, Page loaded and was zoomed on the new picture. Scared shitless. Seriously though awesome picture. Fits the story well.
1614215>>1614454 Checks online.
Sees Redskin has replied.
Sees new cover image when I click.
...
Oh...
You just need to know what keywords to use for image sites like that. Like for the Evil Celestia pic I typed in (Princess Celestia, smirk). Didn't get anything besides a gif of the scene where Twilight smirked during the Canterlot Wedding. So I typed in (Princess Celestia, evil) got a few more as well as that.
1613011 Spiral Power?