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it's the beginning of the end.
Tonight, we dine IN HELL!!!
That should be keel over and die, not kneel over and die. But otherwise....yeah, I liked it.
Here... we... go...
Did Luna just become Nightmare Moon again?
Kamina is the ultimate badass.
Nice use of BlazBlue and Guilty Gear.
Oh man this is getting intense! Keep it up everyone!
fucking hell, Celestias about to get absolutely smashed into the fucking ground. at least i hope the author makes it that way.
Discord is a major badass. Yeah, he's funny and a prankster but piss him off enough and he'll rip you several dozen new assholes.
And the battle, damn!
Queen Celestia is perhaps the most terrifying version of Xenocidestia ever created. It takes the traits that Chat sees as good in her Chatlestia and amplifies them.
And now, Nightmare Moon's getting involved!?
I eagerly await the testicle shattering awesomeness that will be the upcoming battle.
I forgot to add something.
There Is a reason why Discord doesn't just snap his fingers and be done with it.
That will be explained in the next chapter.
Wow, have we pretty much reached the final battle?
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4032913 before you write it off as another lyra loves humans trope, there is a reason for it, and it doesnt have ancient humans civilization or what not.
it deals with MLP gen 1
Loved all the references by the way.
so did Luna kill the evil elements or just evil Twilight or did she somehow survive after Luna ripped her mind apart
You just quoted Gurren Lagann at the beginning and I was so hyped.
Then Discord fought her with OBJECTION!
I freaking love this fic.
This is such a well done chapter. The deep emotions running through, the mixture of hope and despair, the clash of human AND Tyrant. We actually see humans outright fighting her and it is GLORIOUS, from the shattering of the shield to hand to hand badassery, though good old Cheerilee takes the cake for the most badass moment in the story. Her passionate rage and fervent attacks really drive home her despair and purpose. I don't even care that you threw in more backtracking on the evil Discord did to try and make it seem like he isn't the selfish and dangerous jerkass he was in the past, this chapter is that good.
4007120 wrote : "Reread the bold and underlined portions of Queen Celestia's mental monolog. I would say that there is more Tirek in that grey matter than Celestia anymore. I am not entirely sure Sun Butt can be saved from this demonic possession."
There's nothing of Celestia left. It's Tirek in a Celestia suit now. The old Celestia is dead.
You know, its kinda funny. The entire time I was reading this, I just thought to myself, "If Discord really did want to finish this quickly, he would summon this girl from her universe. One tiny scratch from her blade and batta-bing, batta-boom, Celestia is dead."
Then again, I suppose it would mean the end of the story as well :>
Nightmare Moon? Damn!
I assume TCB Celestia at some point is going to retreat, by teleporying away right before a final killing blow, to heal herself and gather her strength?
And then the canon Ponies and their friends come to kick ass?
Also canon mane six vs TCB mane six would be awesome.
PLEASE tell me we get to read every detail of what happens to the evil mane 6 and what Luna did to Nega-Twi. We need it after the BS they've done
I don't have words to explain how awesome this was
...More. Pls more.
What? first few lines in the fic and it's nearly incomprehensible.
It would be so good, if only that were true?
If only it was actually true?
It would be good, if it was true?
I don't know. I just know that that line up there is a real mess.
Honestly, there are some worlds out there that TCB!Celestia just could not handle.
Halo, the Death Gate Earth at almost any time post-Sundering, Fire Emblem (They pretty much killed a god in two of them!), among others.
Might want to check your translations, there are errors. For instance, "mist" doesn't translate to "shoot".
I think the problem is that luna hasn't gone nightmare moon, but more where she has focus over her powers instead of berzerk fury as she did with nightmare moon.
Unless the tree of Harmony doesn't exist, I doubt the bag is the only problem facing both conquestria and Equestria.
4033397 Or Borderlands world! Too many humans to ponify (Well in excess of 68 billion people... or at least that's how many people have been killed with Dahl guns) and SO! MUCH! GUN!
So ...
Phoenix Wright, Felicia, and Deadpool?
Awesome.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
OH FUCK YES! LAY DOWN SOME GODLY WRATH UPON THE SOLAR TYRANT! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD AS WE KNOW IT!
You know, it's funny. When I usually read Discord in fanfictions, he makes me laugh even when he's a villain...But this Discord just makes me want to punch something.
I mean, what's his game? He claims to be the good guy, that he did what he was supposed to do and that Celestia is wrong. He preaches and preaches....but canon Discord never did that.
He took over, enslaved pony kind, all for the lulz. He never preached he was right, he just had fun. He's the living encarnate of chaos and Disharmony. {He even gloats about it.} He turned the world upside down and screwed over physics because he felt like it.
Canon Discord would mock you because it's funny and he doesn't understand other people enough to when to stop.
This Discord would do it every other which way because he's a jackass.
So I ask, who is this guy parading around as the cool antagonist we know and love? {You know, I'd love to see canon Discord meet this guy. He's laugh right in his face at how serious he is and then probably grab an icecream cone with Fluttershy, that created out of nothing.}
I'm sorry I harp on this too much, but it's right there in the open. {That and Celestia would never be as stupid as you portray her. She's lead the country into prosperity for a thousand years, after Discord took over and her sister gave into her own petty jealousy.}
And Discord claims it is Celestia that is holding Equestria back, when it isn't. It's magic. Why develop some machinery that's going to take a couple centuries to perfect, when I have a spell for that? If Discord wanted them to advance like humans, he would have to literally rip the magic out of every single pony.
That's just my two cents.
It was good otherwise.
For all the flaws in this story (such as Discord's presentation), I really love the underlying premise of this story: a giant cathartic rage-fest. Once you get your head around that, the little things don't bother you. Much. However I do agree that Discord really seems overly fixated (or maybe even obsessed) about proving Celestia wrong, though.
4033632 because in this world, it was a mask he fell into.
its simple like that.
4033692 because as I stated before hand, my Discord is different than the canon, plus he mergedwith another discord whose final moments was being tortured for years and then killed.
As I said so many times before, my iteration of him his different thsn Canon, something I did to make it fit because if I tried to stay true to the canon verison, he would become more or a liability than an asset. Something Marcus, or anyone with leading military experience would see and have that issue dealt with immediately.
Trust me, I thought about it for over month before.
Really hoping we get the Luna Vs. Elements battle next chapter.
In the grimdark "harmonius" era of The Conversion Bureau, There is only war....
Loved the chapter by the by, and can't wait for the next one. Let's see how Xenolestia(My name for Canon Conversion Bureau Celestia as that's what she's acting like) handles Discord, a pissed off Runicly Enhanced School Teacher, and a supremely Pissed off Nightmare Moon.
Ashes to ashes, Dust to dust. The sun shall set, and the moon shall rise.
4033460 Oh God. Everyone would have at least some form of gun. Not to mention all the combat robots and such...
Man, you got one over thousand favorites!
4033852 Discord's already been there :P
I already wrote that he didn't like Hyperion guns that much. Torgue shotguns, on the other hand...
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I think Luna turned into Nightmare Moon not to make eternal night, but to kick xenolestia's ass.
Maybe Nightmare Moon is her rage/super saiyan mode. This is probably her face after exploring Twilight's mind.
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Yeah, I think pretty much any setting with an actual space navy would stomp her shit flat, like for example, Star League Era Battletech. Because it's hard to get a lot of pontification done when the Star League has evacuated the entire planet and now has a full fleet parked in orbit blasting everything that pokes its head out of the barrier. Or for a more magical flavor, Creation in the First Age. The Celestial Host slew entire Universal Concepts in the Primoridal war, The Tyrant is like a third circle demon at BEST in comparison. Plus you'd literally have to wipe out every last human before the Exalted stop trying to shove a daiklave in your chest. Plus theres another Sun God who's just hilariously OP.
So Discord utterly devastated Xenolestia Looney Tunes style, shot a bullet bill at her, summoned three champions to fight, and crashed a satellite on her after she received an extended beat down from Cheerillee, and now Nightmare Moon is back.
Badass.
Celestia is going to die now and the Elements are dead I assume. This song fits the battle scenes well
4033157 If he truly wanted to finish her off he would have summoned these two.
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So yeah, he was and still is screwing with her. Personally I would have gotten Young Xehanort, Kefka and Dio Brando.
NEXTONENEXTONENEXTONENEXTONENEXTONE
Die already. Jeez, this is worse than Sephiroth from Kingdom Hearts.