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One story down another two to go.
Seven words.
TEH DOCTAH IS IN DA HOUSE!
And yes.
I know what I said.
Thunder Child
Heh, that's a name I've been seeing a lot of lately.
And because you just named your ship that, I know exactly what's going to happen without seeing anything more than that.
May those men rest peacefully in the night skies...
Great chapter.
lol I like to see the non CB equestrian again but I won't push you
i should stop reading these kinds of fics, they make me irrationally angry
>Adarian Shepard
>Queen Hedwig
>King Tobias
I see what you did there.
Can you show us more Dinky and Pipsqueak moments?
appart from that, well
this IS the BEST TCB fic I had read (after TCB: Not Alone) still very good
3196602 Named the Tobias reference then?
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God its been ages since I read this series.
3196689 you win this round...
But you failed to mention one! Haha!
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Well either i missed it entirely due to not having watched/read/played the series it's based on, or im just tired.
Ok, I'm ALMOST tempted to say that "Five Blades Fancy" is an Exalted reference, because thats basically the exact same naming style that Threshold names are based off of.
3196718 score one for an unintended reference!
Huh, could the Yellowstone Super Volcano really be set off with a bunch of nukes? And here I was thinking that humanity would just try to blow the Moon up and hope the pieces would crash into the planet and kill everything. Also, I am happy we live here in our own special little dimension where nothing ever happens.
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Well if Parallel!Cadence was a full scale alicorn, or if they somehow were able to rescue Luna, I'd just say "Fuck it, lets do a Majora's Mask LARP, grab one of the New Foals and tell them to send this message to the Tyrant. 'Dawn of the Final Day, 24 hours remain.'"
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Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Keep up the good work!!!!
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Good chapter. I have to nitpick over the whole Yellowstone thing, though. It's a clever idea, but in practice there aren't enough H-bombs in the world to set it off. It would be like a mosquito bite on an elephant.
Also I'm puzzled by what the Doctor said about the great pyramid in Egypt. How could the barrier be there? Are there multiple barriers expanding in different parts of the world?
3196791 Boring! I wish something would happen....Well, not something like this, but meeting the real Equestria or nice aliens would be good.
319697p well... Given that the barrier started in Switzerland and is now reaching the US, it has to be pretty big to reach Egypt now...
Or not :p
This would be the blast radius of the Yellowstone volcano with out the nukes.
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The extra nukes would be the ultimate way of saying f**k you! to celestia and wiping all of her new foals and rendering the planet completely ruined for many many years. The barren wasteland would be a monument to all of the tyrant's sins, leaving her with nothing but ash, left to rot all alone with no one to bear the elements to carry out her evil conquest.
Blowing up the world. Talk about the ultimate final act of defiance.
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Well, I do remember this at the beginning of the chapter.
And I thought it was one epicly huge barrier that was expanding, already consuming europe in a half sphere area meaning that while it consumed europe it was devoaring all those in the other side as well. And he said it before you ask... I think.3196995
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I think you need to hold off this types of stories for a while. The type of stories that make you angry for reasons you don't understand.
I saw a Harry Potter and a Mass Effect reference.
And using the Yellowstone Supervolcano as a superweapon...Holy shit. It seems that Humanity is really going for MAD.
So the Doctor is calling out Time Lord Victorious, the Dream Lord, and the Valeyard. Also, I noticed the reference to Rose.
Well, crap. Canon!Equestria, we need a Big Damn Heroes moment yesterday, because the good guys are about to hit the Godzilla Threshold. That's never a good thing.
first chapter...i...i came in my pants it's amazing so far....MOOOAR, MUST READ MOOOOAR good thing theres more
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although you probably won't tell me...
red, will this end in one last great middle finger to the tyrant?
3197783 you need to read the side story by Proudtobe to understand. The link is in the story.
3197800 I will never say anything.
Haven't started reading this yet, but from the discription, it has the same basic premise as This Fic (Originally created by SilverTie -Whom I cannot find a FiMFic account for anymore- ), who handed it off to Gentleman Clam.
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Keep in mind though Tsar Bomba was 8.1 on the Richter scale at half yield, but it was detonated 2 miles in the air not on the ground. Now take 20+ tsar bombas at their full 100 mt yield and put them a mile underground that's 20 8.4 earthquakes going off at once. It wouldn't be that hard to believe that that much seismic activity could weaken the magma chamber which is only a couple miles below the surface and cause an eruption.
I dunno what happened last chapter, but this one's fine. It really does look like it was written by a completely different person.
I'd say you need to take a serious proofread to Chapter 9, but its problems went so far beyond just a few typos that you really would have to rewrite the whole thing, and so little relevant action happened compared to how long it was that I'm not sure it'd be worth that much effort. Most of what came after after Discord's expository dump would've been pointless ramble even if it were coherent (which, again, is really weird -- your pacing and coherency are fine in literally every other chapter). Since nothing in this chapter depended on that one in any way, you might actually be better off just axing 9 altogether and taking a clean whack at the relevant bits of it next time.
i like the humans last plan use nukes to set off enough volcano's that it destroys the world leaving tyrantlestia as the only living thing on a dead planet of smoke and fire that's a huge middle finger to tyrantlestia she'd probably rage for the rest of eternity
To be honest, I'm diving in to this story just because of that epic coverart of best Princess.
3196701 Only problem is that you forgot to mention Gilda's brother, Prince Jake.
3197987 ....Wut?
3197902 I was having a crisis on my hands in the last chapter.
Things happening at home screwed with my work and my writing. Lots of other things too, so I was really....
Narrow sighted writing that chapter. Plus I don't really want to write out again...I don't even know how to begin on that cluster fuck.
I got back on the ball on this chapter... I think.
So we know what's happening on earth, and that The Doctor is apparently a real ladies man when it comes to Derpy
This reminds me of the Doomsday scenario when Martha, Sarah Jane, Captain Jack and all of the Doctors allies at that point had different ideas to basically say '''F*** YOU!'' to Davros and the Daleks.
Hopefully however it wont come to that, although the appearance of another Celestia and Elements of Harmony is going to cause no amount of confusion.
If you have ever been to the SCP Foundation you know exactly how I felt when I read the Author's Note.
well, as a brit, i'd be down with that plan. portal all the remaining humans, decent ponies, minos, gryphons etc to this new britania (they havent named it yet, bite me) and THEN detonate that earth killer yellowstone plan. think theyre such hot shit for killing MY country? fine, they can have it, tell the waves big enough to submerge it forever on their way to wreck the french coast i said "hi". let little miss sunshine choke on that.
Someone needs to shove this magic object in Tyrant Celestia's face.
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The Mirror of Truth. It stripped away lies, illusions, delusions, and all manner of problems. Looking into it, one saw oneself. One was confronted with all the harm one had committed through one's actions. All the harm committed by one's inactions. One saw oneself in full glorious detail without any masks or tricks or denials and knew exactly what the mirror was revealing.
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Confronted with that she'd either :
A. Go mad and hopefully fly off into space forever
B. Shut down in catatonia there
C. Kill herself off
Now if the good guys can just find that object too...^_^
3196995 I did some basic calculations, and the barrier is big enough to reach the equator in central Africa, and the western border of India and China. I didn't see how far North it goes, but it goes up enough that it will affect certain types of satellites. That's assuming its a perfect sphere centered on the surface of Switzerland
In the event even if the Humans don't go MAD (may still flee Earth perhaps with the Doctor's help.) I'd bet the Ponies on the Human side will still contuine to fight on, even with no Humans left. Luckily they'll get reinforcements from canon Equestria soon.
So in other words if the heroes from the other word can't save this Earth then we're looking at another "Ten Minutes" fic ending.
And I'm betting that this is when the tragedy of this fic will reach its climax in which Marcus will end up killing himself over.
3198734 you do realize that they have just started this plan right?
Here's a treat for those of you worried about the whole Ten minute thing.
This entire story takes place within a two week period.
Yellowstone is about.... 5 to 7 months away from the barrierm
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Yeah I do, but from the way this has been happening, and from the cynical side of the state of things, I'm led to believe that the leaders will most likely not trust the helpful Celestia and will continue on with this plan unless Celestia push the barrier back somehow.
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He's going for an Animorphs joke, because you named another very prominent bird Tobias.
And yeah you did get back on the ball here. I mean you still comma splice a lot, there's several tense shifts, and you use some awkward sentence fragments when you get carried away with dramatics -- it's worse than it could be, but it's been consistent throughout the whole story (enough that a good ghostwriter could probably emulate it), nowhere near unreadable, and doesn't detract that much. It just makes Ch. 9 stand out all the more as an oddball, because it wasn't just different in severity, but in the kinds of errors that happened.
Just...try not to publish things written under severe duress without a really good once-over. Real life crises happen. We've all been there. And when it happens, creative juices are like drinking: great to blow off steam, but they have a way of making a mess if you're not careful.