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All I have to say is this: Awesome.
Amazing! Excellente Belissimo! More, more more... please?
Agreed, that was brilliant.
In a way, I actually pity Tyrant Celestia a bit. She's corrupted herself into something that is at best a hideous, darkened reflection of herself and she doesn't even realize. Makes me wonder what would happen if she were to be purified by the Elements of Harmony, though I suspect she'd suffer a combination of pants-on-head-insanity and sobbing hysteria when she realizes what she has done and the consequences of her actions.
Yes.
Trixie's characterisation was amazing!
What they did to Spike.......SO not cool! Somepony needs a serious ass whupping!
wowz, i was wondering what was up with Marcus and the others, i wanted less dark, evil, crazy stuff and more of the original ponies and their niceness, not what they are right now ... bleh.. hopefully Marcus will befriend them and somehow fix everything... though i feel horrible for basically all of them, they all got tainted, and this is all no-bodies fault, maybe if it wouldnt be too much of a hassle you could fit into there the order that the mane 6 fell in? or perhaps what they went through? i hope that Marcus simply hasnt travelled back in time though and tainted Celestia starting it all, that would explain why he's suddenly there, and perhaps why the mane 6 were so easily converted too, Marcus didnt exactly give them a warm welcome, though i kinda hope that all the others get to at least glimpse a little of Marcus's memories, so they dont hold it against him and actually feel bad for the shit hes gone through
Hmm. A rather interesting development here.
But now a wave of conscripts, former humans turned traitor will descend.
How much more insanity and despair can this land take?
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This was surely what you read that made you think of the time travel theory, but it seems that you didn't read this....
This is in chapter 3.
If the mane 6 are brainwashed, I'm not sure Fluttershy would survive having it removed...
My Little Pony meets the Borg... without actual Borg.
So, the Whooves clan actually INVENTED the TARDIS here? Huh, guess Equestria will fall and they will turn into Gallopfrey.
Awesome chapter.
Okay. When are the canon ponies going to come in and KICK SOME FLANK!?
... Powerful.
Trixie having multiple personalities within her. Sweetie Belle turning into a hardcore survivalist. Spike being tortured. All that. Spine tingling in its splendor and horror.
And Queen Celestia... I'm finding it almost impossible to feel bad for her.
And for Princess Celestia, I want her to bring down the Hammer of Dawn on these fake-ponies.
2451403 Indeed.
To set the tone comrades, we are fighting a desperate battle, where defeat will mean the end of Humanity as we know it.
All of you have come far and wide, into the fiery fires of Hell's Chasm, yet still you stand by my side to fight ever onward.
My fellow humans, despite your differences in nationality, belief, and religion, you have all united under a single banner to fight against a common foe.
This, I say, has never been done human history, and for that, I am proud to fight by your side.
But we couldn't have gotten this far without our allies.
For the Equestrian who have fought by our side, even in the face of death you stood true through and through by our side, never flinching against the Solar Tyrant. Not only have you protected us, but also given your lives for our cause. Lyra Heartstrings, a mare of defiance and burning spirit, fought to the very end with a smile on her muzzle, insulting her captors even as she was shattered, her spirit still lives on. We can only be blessed to have those among you still alive, still kicking. By God, when this war ends, I will buy you all a drink by the end, if and when we make it there.
And Lyra Hearstrings, whose tales shall forever be enetched in our history books, isn't the only mare who fought by us.
Spitfire, despite the opposition from your former comrades, you have bucked your superiors in the face, rescuing children from an otherwise horrible fate. The Hooves family, who without their tech, we probably would have lost Boston by now.
And that is only accounting for you pony folks.
Zebras, changelings, buffalo, gryphons, minotaurs, donkeys, all of you have earned your place amongst the proudest and some of the damned finest soldiers I have ever the good fortunate to see. We shall stand forever grateful, proudly by your side.
When this war ends, may peace and prosperity spread throughout the land, giving way to a better future for our children, and our children's children, and beyond.
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2452551 Lyra turn to stone and was shattered by the way....
2452570 Fuck... I will rectify that in a moment.
2452570 when?
2452878 said in chap 1 or 2. Will expand more in future chapter. After chapter 6 maybe....
2325064 That could very well be the longest web address I have ever seen.
2452551 Now that I read it all....
I hope to bring more touching moments like this speech here. Hell, I might even use it....
I know it's a bit cliche, but I am actually hoping we have something like this by the end of the story.
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2454022 I would be most honored.
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Of course it could use a few tweaks here and there, as I am not the most eloquent of speakers when it comes down to making a speech. To be honest, I felt my heart bloom here, and my spirit and bravado told me to use my inspiration here.
I am rather curious of how everyone would react to this speech.
Also, it might be effective to broadcast the images of this terrible war to the masses of the Peaceful Equestria. Drive it in horror. Make them all see what their basterdized versions of themselves have done to the poor and innocent alike, how they turned brother against brother.
Make that a heavy handed point in vengeful retribution with a most fire hearted conviction of steel and anger. Anger at this horrendous abuse of innocence and loyalty.
Also, make it a point to tell the Equestrian counterparts in this chapter on how their alter egos are in the Tyrant Sol Equestria. Their responses would make for an interesting story. Also, would you mind doing Spitfire? She is kinda a favorite of mine...
To be specific, I ship her with Applejack of all ponies....
Am I being too demanding?
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well i got that but she does say that any attempts whether they may be on purpose or not could be exactly what causes the future to become the way it is, i just thought it was possible that the tainting of Celestia came from her innocence being shattered, though she did fight off her alter-ego so i guess thats good. but like the fact that he was sent back by the mane 6 kinda made sense to me if they sent him back to corrupt themselves, mane 6 of the future know he needs to be sent back, Marcus is oblivious of this, arrives, does exactly what he is supposed to do, Celestia and the corrupted mane 6 win, but i guess applebloom and the sisters wouldve heard about Marcus though, considering how he almost killed them, so ill just accept that its an other evil equestria, its better that way, i hope the evil equestria gets redeemed too
The Side Story was TL so I DR, but I could still understand everything that was going on.
we need to kick some ass very soon
Wow, all I can say is wow
My only annoyance was in the homosexual relationship that snuck its way in there. Grr
2456095 you can leave the prejudice at the door thank you...
No one wants to know.
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It's hard to if there is no door to leave said prejudice at.
I guess I'm just against non-OC same-sex romances, partially because they are more numerous than the stars.
Ok, now that's out of my system; I'll leave them at the figurative door.
All I can think of is how screwed the ponies would be if it was cold-war Earth. 20000 tanks... thousands of nukes...
2456095 ... Senor, be reasonable lad.
Wow, I only hope Princess Celestia goes all God-Empress of Ponykind on "Queen Celestia's" ass.
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This chapter was by far, one of the most intense emotional roller coasters you have ever made. I was holding my breath all the way to the end, and what a (partial) relief at the end of this chapter. In particular the scene with Spike hit excessively hard. In cannon he pretty much puts up with every pony's shit and asks for nothing more than respect and adoration from those around him, you COULD NOT have made such a betrayal more disgusting than this.
Of all the split personalities Trixie had to have the TF2's spy in her head.
2474345 Well aren't you going to be devastated when you find out what he went through just to protect Rarity...
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Sorry if this is late, but you are wrong....
Sneak peek: Luna will find out that the TCB6 have NOT been brainwashed
And it will break her anger and show Earth the true might of an angry Alicorn.
2475339 It could be taken that way...or it could be taken another way....
You will find out in the future though....
I forget what happened to the Discord on the evil world?
[youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHoBpRlMsbw]The more I read this the more this song seems to fit with the solar tyrant.
2475772 You will find out in the next chapter.
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2450903 Boy....I haven't even pulled out the insane trick storyline yet...
2451403 Oh...Don't worry... Something like that will happen.
2476055 .... The Protagonists who ends up having sex actually has the pony semen ponify them?
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And now I just had the mental of Radian fighting the Solar Tyrant.
Radian: I was worng about you, your highness. Your not greedy...
Celestia: It's good that you recognize this human. I only want best for both mankind and ponie--
Radian: YOUR BAT SHIT INSANE!
Celestia: What!?
I wonder if the TCB6 that visited Spike were also illusions, because from the way I've seen them in those memories those ponies are exactly the same as they have always been except they don't believe what they're doing is wrong. I wonder if they even seen Spike and if they really did (I still doubt Fluttershy will do that), they'll probably just look at him in disappointment and disgust instead of taking potshots like that.
I'm thinking there will be some sort of awesome and respectful brofist between normal Spike and the TCB Spike about how awesome he's gotten in this world despite how grim everything is in that world right now. I'm also wondering if Mane!Trixie is going to end up finding herself here, that will be an interesting conversation with the Blue Spy.
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I thought they weren't brainwashed in the first place. Just the "evil" versions of the mane cast who think they're doing good but they're really not. Actually they remind of The Spiders from HunterXHunter, a group of murderous thieves who will kill anyone in their way to get what they want, but the creepy part about them is that they have the same personalities and attitudes you'll expect from HEROES.
2483434 I thought long and hard about how to portray the TCB6, but no matter how hard I try, i could never see them doing the things in TCB-verse, especially if it descends into war of survival.
They are too nice, too smart, and too compassionate to do the things they are portrayed in stories. Most of the time, they realize what they have done too late, but I believe they could question a lot of things about what is going on...
And that won't do in the Tyrant's plans.
Brainwashing didn't work out well either, because it would mean that they would be completely different ponies from what they use to be, or something could 'Shock' them out of the brain wash to revert them back to normal...
So I took it up to the next level....
Something so horrifying and cruel that it simply had to be made because that is how the downward spiral of thinking the Tyrant does.
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Are you referring to what they do in the TCB-verse as a whole or what they did in your story compared to other TCB stories? I don't understand what you're trying to say in these parts there.
Are you talking about lobotomy in the end? That's the one of the way's I can think of how they can act the way they did in Marcus's memories but that conclusion doesn't seem to make sense, plausible but makes little sense. The other conclusion I can think up of is the tyrant holding their most precious things hostage. That too makes little sense, since I don't think they would've been too happy about doing all of this if there's something precious to them that will lose if they defy her. But maybe they did ended up developing a twisted sense of fun and obligation as time went on while working for her. Marcus's memory about Fluttershy comes to mind about how she tries to act all motherly and friendly to him when using The Stare, but he can clearly see that Fluttershy sees him as nothing more than another target to be converted there is no love in what she's trying to make him take the potion. There has to be something else besides those two conclusions, not even a third one that I just thought up right now like hallucinations won't make any sense. Whatever she did, I suppose that's what Marcus and the Mane Heroes will have to find out for themselves, right?
2483691 I didn't come off clear enough.
When I started this story, TCB was just like the canon-verse, with only extremely minor differences between them. Basically though, the Mane6 is the same as canon when this started, and will show you want happen to them later on to make them into what they are now.
The main point is, unless Celestia has the silver tongues that makes the gods jealous, i don't see how she could convince an entire country what they are doing wrong.Hell, most politicians can't even do that, and if they know they are in the right, there are still a minority against them.
Most TCB(That involve a Celestia just doing it for shits and giggles in converting humans) i see shows just that! She somehow manages to convince them that the humans are bad people, so instead of leaving them alone, she goes out and puts her ponies at risk to convert them?
What?
For what? It is never really explained why they show up other than 'to save you'. So I made one in my story.
I'm getting offtrack.
The main thing is, Rainbow, Applejack, and Rarity will be least likely to go against humans. Humans have the means to go fast, grow food in harshest of places for people, and have designer clothing to show off the beauty of clothes.
Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are the second least likely. Fluttershy, living close to the Everfree forest, she would understand just how Earth works and why. She would also love the animal groups that help creatures in fear of dying out, so she wouldn't see them as cruel people. Pinkie pie even less so, given all the night clubs, celebrations, and generally happy hours going around the planet.
Twilight may be swayed by Celestia's words, but once she finds a library she would be questioning Celestia a lot. If we were nothing but savages and cruel creatures, what is the point of science and medicine? We create cures and make tech that would better the world. True enough, it can be used for the opposite, but that is the case with all societies, even in Equestria, given Sombra existance.
That is why I despise most TCB stories where there is NO ponies go against what Celestia says. Its unrealistic and cliche.
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So that explains the various amounts of ponies in groups fighting Celestia in the story. It's just kind of sad that there's less of that in most TCB stories should I ever go around searching them. I remember reading one story that showed the main ponies never even left Equestria unless they're part of the mane cast, which is strange in itself.
I don't see how Celestia could convince the mane cast to work for her in the first place. They seem to treat the whole ponification thing like one of their hero missions, what is it that Celestia said that wanted them to work for her like that in the first place? Speaking of that, it's how Celestia normally convinces ponies to work for her in the first place in the TCB stories. Somehow her explanation about the worst humanity has to offer or saying that evil is part of their nature is just enough to convince these ponies that they need to be "saved." Pretty much that explanation ALWAYS work, it's baffling and annoying to see that happened to someone who was against fighting Celestia joined her side because of it. Back on topic, it just seems like the mane cast were convinced to join Celestia in her cause and treat the ordeal the way they do because they were convinced in the same manner.
Wait.
What.
WHAT
THEY HAVE ACCESS TO TARDIS TECHNOLOGY.
How is the war not over yet? And no, I'm not going to suggest changing the past- that's against the rules. What I am saying is that in a war of total annihilation, where one side is trying everything- even weaponizing dragons- to win, the solution is obvious.
Use the TARDIS, load it up with nuclear warheads, and put one in every major city in Equestria. Then remote detonate them all at the same time. Suddenly, Celestia is out all of her forces. Look, I admit that this is cold. But then again, we saw Trixie torture a pony in lukewarm blood.
Seriously, no one has thought of Telebombing using the machine that can literally be anywhere on Earth at any given time? That can pierce any barrier, can escape any scan?
I'm sorry, this is a massive plot hole.
2540488 Because not all the cities are not filled with millions of xeno-hating ponies?
Some beings have standards you know...
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Then wage a campaign of more limited destruction- target cities that do have millions of xeno-hating ponies. Use the TARDIS to launch unstopable strikes deep within enemy territory. Drop battalions of troops behind enemy lines to sever rail lines, destroy mines and infrastructure, incite rebellion and revolt. You literally have the power of instant transportation that is virtually unblockable, a power that could alter the very nature of warfare itself. What if they used the TARDIS to plant explosives in the crystal catacombs under Canterlot (try saying that five times fast) and collapse the castle in on itself? Or just to deploy similar operations all over Equestria (bombing barracks, sabotaging potion production plants, etc)