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hooo boy... celestia... you dun fucked up....
Looks like Celestia is both being manipulated and being an ass at the same time. In this timeline everything is just worst lol. Hopefully things get better for our Mc.
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No, that followed from where I started talking about the most memorable one. You’re obviously not going with a very sympathetic Nightmare.
Of course, now that I read the chapter, I see this is also one of the more infuriatingly dense Celestias of the multiverse.
Luna’s at least got good reason to have delved so deep into the depths of dark magic… that sun blinded traitor forced her to!
But I still saw those hints of just how bad Nightmare is gonna be.
Celestia is the one collapsing the diarch first? That’s new and interesting indeed!
Look like Sunbutt and her harem used to get always with anything and didn’t expect someone to defied back with violence.
Anyway, it’s ironically a good learning experience for Celestia. As Equestria get bigger, the more expensive this lesson is.
And flinging out floating spears like projectiles... yes!
*makes a note...* you have a point in your notes...
so the sun and moon can talk. i wonder if earths sun and moon will have a talk with their child from beyond the stars once all her memeorys and identity has been reassembeld into something new.
i knew thestral was used IN harry potter but I didn't know it was FROM it ugh never again
Wow. Just wow. Awesome.
You know, this is what I always felt like this was the more realistic way things went down. Rather than a corruption or darkness in Luna, it's just Celestia being a selfish bitch that caused Luna to flip. It would also explain why she's so apologetic after a thousand years. It's a damn war, not a pacifist paradise. You strive for peace, and avoid harming civilians. It wasn't like Luna led a goose stepping march on civilians. These were soldiers that were prepared to die, and probably would have done the same to her own soldiers.
Anyways, I hope you still go the motherly route with Celestia later on as a redemption arch. I actually prefer that version of her rather than the trope of "actually she was a manipulative bitch all along". I'd rather see her learning how to her failures ultimately, and that "Luna" can learn to accept that as well.
Luna / Nightmare Moon also falls into the trap of being unforgiving unless the Macguffin brainwashed her.
Regardless, this is certainly fascinating to see.
I’ll be honest I like this telling of why she fell from grace much more than the others I’ve read.
One she always felt more militant than her sister if not just more aggressive, and the bat ponies being recruited makes sense because they would be seen as weird if not dangerous by the other tribes. But because they joined later, whilst seemingly more peaceful than the others too despite the shitty had they where dealt. And the fact that she had a legion in such short notice for the invasion shows they are very patriotic and love Luna.
Secondly the council seems to have forgotten that the griffins invaded and who knows what treatment the city would have received from them if she hadn’t intervened and stopped it with as the one witness said, “the war of the century” like the Spanish-American war in terms of how one sided it turned out.
And lastly I think that if it wasn’t for the suddenness of Celestia pulling a fast one on her to try and remove her from the princess title and the responsibility of the moon it causes her to basically do this as a crime of passion. If Celestia didn't try to pull this off immediately like she did I could see it going much worse as a civil war. Like the bat ponies would have gone berserk and tried to genicide the other tribes because of oppression Luna being the last straw. Hell that’s what saved her the most I feel, Both being so blindsided by the others response. I’d even bet that whilst she would have been royally mad at the betrayal she would have maybe not cared as much if Celestia hadn’t gone for the moon, something she earned.
So yeah good chapter and good story so far.
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What I will say, is that corruption is indeed a factor, and you will know when it rears it's ugly head.
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celestia was fine using her sister till most of the enemys were dead. Strange that she only does this now is it not? Almost like the fear of equestria has been made to the outside world and enemys will think twice before attacking but celestia doesnt want word to spread that she is like her sister so why not throw her under the bus.
Also i am interested in knowing if celestia and the sun even can sever her from the moon as if so then this has never been a partnership and more one sister having an axe over the others head till she is not of use anymore. Plus if i read it correctly in the last chapter then lunas connection to the moon helps her survive some things that would have killed her. And celestia is doing this to appese the nobles. ponys who would want to have the "annoying" princess out of the picture
All in all im looking forward to any glimpse of equestia in the modern day as from the image so far im guessing its ended up 1 of 3 things.
1) close to the show with slight changes like the bat ponies either being mistreated or having left.
2) Celestia has become a puppet ruler who is blind to the suffering of the common ponies
3) Celestia snaps for some reason and becomes a being close to or is daybreaker. Maby out of hearing for the first time with an open mind about what the nobles think of her sister and that she is gone or maby from suddenly having lunas work put on her also and the bat ponies likely causing issues after finding out their princess's fate (maby without the mare in the moon they think celestia killed her and the elements becoming stone and useless would not help her case of saying she is not).
There is also the fact that if the moon can talk it is defently not happy with celestia and might even be screaming at her every time celestia so much as touches them
The fucked up thing i didnt even know thestral was a term coined by rowling. Which means ill prolly have to reword my story a bunch of times cause i aint using no terf words. Also love the idea of the term thestral being treated like a heinous slur for lore.
Lmao, what citizens? Celestia would rather them slaughtered by Griffin's
LORREEE, now I'm curious as to what lulu's reaction will be when she hears these names.
What, was Lulu actually hiding how powerful she was from Tia or something?
I also miss Austraeoh :(