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Ordinarily, I wouldn't keep reading a story that spends this long examining a character's traumatic past. I'm still reading because there's a light at the end of the tunnel; every word is one more thing I hope I get to see Celestia answer for.
In this case; just before the betrayal, Celestia seemed to think Luna was some kind of warmonger. If she knew what Luna went through at Pegasopolis, there's no way she could think that. If she learns the details of what happened, the shame will cut as deeply in her soul as Daybreak (the spear) did in Luna's side.
And that's just one of Celestia's many sins against Luna she'll have to face to get her sister back.
i feel like its time luna made contact with the entire city. maby letters or have her flying units sneak in or barge in to deliver the message to the massess that their commanders would rather starve them and eat them then admit surrender
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I had the exact same thought. I like the story, and the backstory is excellently written, but I am a bit inpatient because of where we left off in the present.
I am staying until the end of this story, no doubt, but the backstory is now 2/3 of the whole story, which is a bit funny when you think about it.
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With due respect to the author of what is now by far my favorite story on Fimfic, the two ponies above have a valid point. WIth everything Luna's had to push through to Ensure sunbutt's throne, she has a lot to answer for.
I finally did it!
I caught up with the story
Don't get me wrong, I love that you post often, but now I can ask the question I've been waiting for so long.
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Are you on the side of Chaos or are you loyal to the empire?
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And also, when we return to the present, will there be a long continuation or will it be something like 5 to 10 chapters and the fic ends?
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Fimfic doesn't have a decent rolled up newspaper emote. So just pretend I'm hitting you with one as you're reading this.
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When I first started writing this flashback, I'll admit that was my concern, that it'd be too long. However; I legitimately don't know what I could cut considering the payoff I'm going for.
That said; in the interest of not intending to string you all along, I will say that this fic will end before we see those payoffs. But don't fret, have a teaser instead.
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Glad you caught up!
As for Chaos or the Imperium...
Praise be unto the Omnissiah.
I just haven't had the oppertunity to get a new decent profile pic.
As for the ending, I will confirm this fic will end shortly after the memory sequence ends, but see the picture above for the sequel's teaser.
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How else is Discord supposed to troll those beyond the fourth wall?