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I wonder what Luna will do next.
I do love how you're taking every opportunity to put down nazis.
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Sees new chapter title.
"Oh God damn it, LUNA!"
Edit after reading:
OK, fine. It was nazi fucks.
On the one hand, the only good nazi is a dead nazi. On the other, the law, unfortunately, rarely agrees.
Good chapter
Well on one hoof its going to be much harder for people to be converted to her side when they are running and screaming from eldritch horrors.
On the other hoof those horrors just munched some nazis soooo nothing of value was lost for quite powerful message
A little shame that there was no meaningful banter
I was silently counting on one of those hicks to scream about how God will save them and Lucna to say that Morgan Freeman is on her side ... Or something , I am rather bad with fast quips
Welp now is as good occasion as any to find some journalist for short Interview that will give said journalist a bonus for working under pressure ... Even if interviewing a might goddess with army of eldritch beasts is kinda new definition of "under pressure".
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Yeah some really good missed banter opportunities. Still a good chapter getting rid of scum.
This has more sass than any of the abridged series and I love it. Still, the police has a kind of tenacity that is usuall reserved for named, helmetless characters, it's just spread across an entire group.
YES MY QUEEN!!! RID THIS WORLD OF THAT SCUM!!!
Ave Dominus Nox
Mmm, I'm a little disappointed that this indeed was a shot at the low hanging fruit, though it was a fun read.
I don't feel this is an accurate representation of what would occur if such an event were to transpire for real, however.
For one, actual Nazi sympathizers wouldn't be at the front of the crowd displaying their symbols prominently unless they wanted to get drawn and quartered. It would be a very quick way to also attract every single journalist within the neighboring 5 states to all rush in and paint the event in the most unflatering way possible.
There also would actually be way more "just ignorantly idiotic" folks up front whose only crime indeed was being there.
But hey, this is way more comedic than it should be and that makes it fun.
Suck out the humanity, and all that's left is monsters to be slain!
But, yeah. This Luna is beyond damaged and definitely walking on "I may as well be killed for my own crimes at this point."
Bit of a shame, but I still look forward to where this is going.
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I saw the oppurtunity and I took it.
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Thank you! I'll admit this was the chapter I was most worried about...
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That journalist would probably win a Pulitzer...
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On the banter front, facsists strangely never consider outside perspectives whenever they're on their bullshit... So they don't really... HAVE an answer when one crops up.
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Lol, when I was first writing about that spell, I couldn't decide on what to call it. Thankfully Dnd had an answer!
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If a literal demon who's confident in her power can't be sassy, who can really?
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Deeplore time! The Nightmare doesn't like them either
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Oh, he's just getting warmed up.
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"Beyond damaged" is... One way to put it I suppose...
Also blaze itKeeping in mind your request to, quote, "fuck right off", I respectfully disagree. Not that nazis are bad, that's just objectively true.
What I disagree with is your portrayal. Real, honest "nazis" are few and far between, and most wouldn't go out to such gatherings dressed up in such symbology, especially en masse. Especially with the way you've written things in this chapter, you seem to be attempting to depict right-wing extremism. There will always be issues presenting any political association in fiction, especially in a negative light, and the best way to do it right is careful research. In my eyes, this reads like someone who assumed anyone who proclaims themselves Christian and carries a gun is an extremist/nazi, which is obviously untrue. A case could be made to say that only those on the furthest extreme were vocal here, but the setup implies otherwise. The whole city was empty, indicating everyone was either at the protest or locked up in their homes.
I don't intend to insult, and I'm sorry if you take it that way, I'm just letting you know that your depictions here seem... squicky, for lack of a better term.
I mean I'm still reading because there's still enjoyment to be had but..... god what a Mary Sue.
The entire story is fueled by angst and the protagonist has never been in any real danger or ACTUALLY challenged in any way.
I was enjoying it a LOT more when she at least thought she could be harmed, or needed food or anything, and was wandering the woods