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That would not have been a quick trip for her... the hell has she been doing?
It'd definitely feel like a spit in the face, for Celestia to have given up everything in Equestria to come all this way for Luna. Celestia fought Luna 'for Equestria's sake', so for her to come all this way and leave her people behind for however long the trip would take... the hell is she doing? Those people are why you did this to your sister, and you have the gall to throw that away and chase after the person you betrayed?
Also, definitely did not see that coming. Good job~
Oh shit
What a twist. Love it.
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Well, it's possible that Celestia didn't take the "long way around" to get here. Could have teleported or used a portal, for instance.
Lmao? Celestia has come to earth and is in the same laboratory as Luna! Not as a much of a coincidence as one would think with magic. Let's see how this goes. I did not see this coming lol.
Huh... I just had a crazy idea: what if Earth is the world behind the Mirror from EqG?
When I said escalate I thought that Luna / Lucas would scare people, make these government spooks fear the night, but it looks like you went for outright slaughter.
After everything that happened here, there isn't a place for Luna on Earth and I don't see there being any place for her in Equestria except maybe as a statue or as a prisoner in Tartarus.
so uh hows she gonna explain the murder spree? I dont even really understand what happened lol. She just started killing everyone, and doesn't question it at all? Its just a switch flipped from "imba good person, im not gonna kill anyone omg did I just kill that guy?" To "yeah its perfectly fine to just murder evertone now."
Just like that, huh? Lmao
Okay, you're right, didn't saw that coming. But I'm still looking it! How will the reunion of the two sister take place? Are they even sister since Luna isn't herself, not who she used to be?
So many questions that can only be answered with another chapter
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luna was a war veteren, nightmare moon is a dream demon and lucas is the one who is inheriting lunas memorys slowly as to remain as stable as possible while getting used to the "new" body and memorys without breaking down. then add to that lucas having tranquiliser in his system in that "new" body with those veteren memorys and a not ok mental state and you get somone who is likely not gonna respond well to being tazed
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We didn't get to see the fight/slaughter only the early aftermath, but chances are the militant paranormal organization responded to fear with "KILL IT! KILL IT! BURN IT WITH FIRE!". Considering what we've seen in this and previous chapters 'his' reaction in this chapter seems to be part of the emotional fall after the adrenaline stops and 'he' gets a chance to consider and reflect on what's been done combined with the stoicism received from having Luna's memories. However 'he' is still the primary persona hence his lack of control in certain aspects.
On a different note the Celestia thing was a surprise but only because of how unlikely I considered it compared to other possibilities. The tags made me wonder (and I still do) if Luna would stay here or if the story would divide the tale into different stories so the tags wouldn't give away major spoilers.
Why do this to me... I am so ready to dropped this thing after 3 times in a row of extreamly dissapointment chapters and friggin Celestia had to shown up in the end...
Okay, what to say about this chapter. So far what we've seen even before the Nightmare has been a factor in Luna's mind was that the nobility weren't treating Luna as on the level of Celestia or anything more than tolerated because Cellypoo said so, waiting for the moment she would turn so they could be rid of her. More troubling, Celestia herself did precious little to curb this behavior.
Furthermore, Celestia seemed to back the nobles in the matters of the Crystal war and sacrificing troops rather than *gasp* take the field herself and get her own hooves dirty.
Methinks the pre-battle Celestia was a bit of a spoiled Princess who NEEDED the shock of Luna turning to teach her she wasn't always right nor was she the perfect Princess.
All of that said, her showing up here, now, is troubling. Why come to where you imprisoned her? Who's moving the Sun? Who's keeping the Moon going?
Third person Lucas reference. Subtle! I like it!
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Did you think the Nightmare was joking?
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Heeheehee! Love it when a plans comes together!
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"The only difference between reality and fiction is that fiction needs to be credible." -Mark Twain
Of course I'm not bringing this twist out of the blue, there are story reasons behind it. Story reasons and lore that hasn't been covered yet.
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If you're not liking the story, no one is keeping you here. There is nothing I nor any other reader can do to make you read. You are free to leave at any time should you wish it.
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Right, will do just that.
It's truly hard to cut loose a human2cannonPony story but well
Thus far the story is great but as of posting this I have found out the author is writing the story as if things are happening between chapter posts making me believe they are either forgetting things, making tv episodes, or they think things are being written down but are not and it is jarring stories are supposed to flow not skip stuff like movies that skip details from books like yeah sure the overall plot is there but this is missing that is missing this other detail is missing.
Here comes the generic "dUmB huMieS geT EasELy SlaUghTerEd bY PoNy cuZ MaGic RuLeZ" thrope. I really hope they get a serious punishment for it. Sick and tired of ponies getting away with murdering humans cliche. At least have humans kill a ton of ponies as a revenge.
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I mean if it's what the Author wants? who are we to judge?