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The whole thing is already done? Woah.
Also, I hope you know that im not an outlier in saying that I love the way the story is written and constructed. Glad you're not budging on this :)
So... future sight isn't just a Celestia thing, it seems. Which raises the question of just what determines whether a pony can have that gift in the first place, and whether it even had anything to do with Celestia's ascension.
If Emerald had the gift too, would she have been able to ascend if she had the guts to read the book?
Also... is the Sun granting ponies these visions? If so, is it deliberately setting Luna up to be loathed and betrayed? We have exactly one line from the Sun ("Unhoof me, you cur!") and it's hard to glean anything about its personality from that, other than it may be self absorbed to some degree.
The possibility I'm imagining is that the Sun couldn't accept having a less popular champion than the Moon, so it sabotaged Luna to make Celestia the sole ruler of Equestria.
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What if Celestia as a young child revealed a vision about what Luna would become to the wrong ponies?
When we do get back to the present, will there be a “Previously On” bit to remind us what was happening?
Emerald sounds as stuck in her ways as a slaveholder not willing to release their 'property' despite threats of incarceration. Oh, wait, a bit too late for that threat, now is it?
Looks like im finally caught up...
Hmmmm...
This bit is redundant. I suggest cutting the first line since Luna asks it anyways.
Also everyone is psychic but luna lol
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But hey! That's just a theory! A gay autistic horse theory! Thanks for reading
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Thank you! It means a lot to hear that! And yes, the fic has been done for a few weeks now. But I've been taking it easy on the writing to focus on irl stuff.
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The inspiration for Celestia's foresight is the greek god Apollo and his whole thing with oracles.
Take that as you will.
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Oh that would've been something.
Inquisition AU when?
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I don't think it'll be a problem.
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Weird how those who are consistently wrong keep doing that.
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Secrets and lies! Secrets and lies!
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Interesting take with the "Mary Sue".
I want you to remember that as you approach the end.
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It's odd I'll grant you, but it also shows both Luna's inner dialogue and her outer dialogue.
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Thank you!
It all fits together I swear.
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The gay autistic horse is strong in this one.