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I would argue her murderous rage is very in character. She sees injustice, and she stamps it out.
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As good a theory as any.
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Strange how patriotism can be so twisted.
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We're just going to have to find out if that happens or not.
That was amazing~ Well done!
Oh, so that's what's up with the banner. The Moon may actually be a vector for ancient dark magic in this era, and if not, ponies still believe it. Using the Moon as her flag is like saying "I'm the villain" at this point in time.
I don't think she's oblivious to that. But it seems she's made her choice already.
Also, bold move invoking a Heartsong during a stealth mission.
I love that you used the song "Come Little Children". As soon as Luna started singing, I had the song playing in my head while I read the rest of the chapter until the end of Luna's singing.
That'll be one hell of a confidence boost. "Unbeatable fort? Eh, gimme a day."
Scratch that, Luna is not scary... she is death incarnate, in the service of her moon and ponies alone. This binge was absolutely not worth it, because now you've got me hooked again on the cliffhanger
Just a little longer, a little longer and I could've lost interest! I could've come back in a month or two, and then drooled over how much backlogue I had to binge! Now I'm malding over how much I'm loving this fic...
yes/10 - would binge again.
PS: when I saw the Come Little Children video, I half expected the garden of Magic version considering I did not see ponies :3
And I'm just going to add, that I wouldn't be surprised if Luna earned the status as a pony to fear, given her strategic domination of the "Undefeatable Capital of the Earth Ponies," by not only capturing a traitor but bringing forth the annihilation of an enemy camp single hoofedly. But atop her symbolic gesture as she rose her banners upon the capital walls itself at sunrise upon the hanging of a traitor?
Well, that demands an image that demands no less than fear and respect in equal measure. A message that wordlessly says, "Once stood the Earth Breakers against the moon, now stands their shattered and broken bodies below me."
Is it weird I'm on my fourth reread of this chapter? Give me more. I wonder what Clover, Smarty, and Pansy would have to say about this whole ordeal.
Edit: 7th reread. I can’t get enough of this
One thing that seemed a little out of place was Luna feeling "the anchent powers of the alicorns" when she started the heartsong. Yes it was mentioned that heartsongs where some sort of Alicorn gift, but refering to it in those terms at this timd, just reminded me that Luna is not (yet) an Alicorn and seemed off. Perhaps she's going to be elevated sooner rather than later?
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Theme Music Power Ups can be invoked when stealthy. Just ask Solid Snake and Ezio Auditore da Firenze
Welp those earth ponies will be traumatized for all the afterlife
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Thank you!
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Luna has several reasons for it. Similar to how American warplanes in ww2 would be painted with snarling faces, Luna is using the Moon banner as a terror tactic.
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It's a strong rebuttal to the Dwarvish song.
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Confidence is nice, but cockiness is not.
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Interesting that you'd say this. Keep this in mind as we go forward, because it's going to be more important than you realize.
Also if it ever comes to it, I'm using this review to draw in more readers
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Actually no, but if I ever complete Terraria I'd be willing to retcon that into a yes.
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The PR is real.
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If you're that excited for new chapters, I would recommend restarting the fic over. Because you might notice something you missed on the first pass.
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Everypony can feel and start a heartsong. The only limiting factor is if you feel it.
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Give it a bit, then they won't be alone.
How dare you twist the song the way you did but on the other side of that coin this was a hauntingly accurate way to do it