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I think Celestia was easily persuaded by nobles and other suckups who didn't want someone who wasn't so easily manipulated gumming things up. So they started turning Celestia against Luna until it culminated with the coup against her.
Oh my goodness this is an extremely well done characterization of Luna. The gentleness, subtlety, and care she has for her subjects is what makes her the best and you've shown that so well here.
>Moon gives filly the Konami Code
>Filly beat the demon king
"It's beacause of you that I beat last boss, lady moon. I would failed without your code."
>Moon shook her head
"No, everything's because of your willpower and determination"
>The filly confused
"B-but you gave me-"
"WILLPOWER AND FRIENDSHIP"
>FIlly eyes go pinpricked as Moon smile gently at her
“Willpower and friendship…”
“Yes, my little filly. It’s willpower and love”
Placeholder pic of moon
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Before I begin reading, little nitpick - if you made the cover art yourself, could you add some brighter outline to the title text? It's barely visible.
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Yeah, there's a few things I want to redo about the cover...
That story was pretty cute. Now back to the scheduled Luna suffering lol.
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Hm yes, quite.
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Heeheeheehee!