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honestly i am not a fan of the memories chapters.
I think this chapter is good!
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The memories chapters are usually my favorites because it gives you a lot of insight into Luna's past in this story. I don't like the R1P 4nD t34R cH4pT3rS because they're a little too edgelord for me.
I wish this chapter had more substance to it than just "Hee hee hoo hoo i'm Discord being silly!" It's just word count padding that's not very satisfying on its own. It's like eating raw sugar. You can do that and it'll be sweet, but it's not as good as if you baked it into something. Discord referencing the word count only makes it worse.
That said, I'm looking forward to the next update.
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I am not saying they are bad it’s just that in my opinion it feels like I am reading two different stories and it’s a bit distracting from the main one that’s all.
One thing is assured ... maybe ... posssibly?
And that thing is the fact that after Lucna wakes from her stupor caused by ... destressing ... she might get chuckle out of Discord antics
I sure did
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That is the point though. If the memory chapters served no purpose, then I'd be more inclined to agree with you. But, so far they exist to show Luna's backstory and why things are the way that they are, without leaving it as a giant mystery.
I wonder how you'd feel about them if this story was published all at once as a complete fic than reading it as it updates.
Guess this will end up with his sealed like canon. Great chapter.
Oh damn, you’ve got discord down pat, or rather *fourth wall enforcing voice* discord you’ve got yourself down pat happy to see what you do with thisssss
You know, I think that was the most chaotic version of discord I've read in a while. It just seems as if he was on a stage, and barely noticing the fourth wall, in this case both fourth walls if we go with the stage assumption, in regard to the alicorns and the reader. Neat.
The thousand words thing is just to post the story in the first place. You don’t need to worry about it for individual chapters.
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Sometimes, you'll find that answers can be found both in the future and the past! Colon trollestia colon!
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Let me take you both on a slight backstage tour. The word count being a minimum of one thousand words is more of a... Personal preference of Nephy's. You'd be surprised how often a chapter gets written, and it's only a few hundred words long. Now obviously, a potential reader whose excited for the next chapter will be disappointed if the subject matter of said chapter wraps up in 300 words. If I recall the day we filmed correctly, this last chapter would've been 600 words long? Yes that sounds right. So bippity boppity boop, I got to play around on stage for a bit.
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Oh thank you both so much! Y'know, I wasn't entirely sure my agent could be trusted when he recommended this gig for me. 'Self!' he proclaimed. 'This Equestria needs some shaking up!' I then told him that I wouldn't take it unless there's lunch provided.
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The nerve of those people! Redacting perfectly well behaved reality benders like REDACTED, REDACTED, REDACTED, and their little dog too!
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Oh thank you both so much! It takes effort to be this good of a method actor y'know.
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I paid my alimony and there's nothing you can use to prove otherwise!