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Welp and Luna is triggered
That is not good news for Unicornia continued structural stability
I just wonder what is exact disinformation that was created by those two bosh'tets ... It must have been quite ... "heroic" story considering their government position
And Heretic? Interesting ... Heretic of what ? Its not like they have religion or something ... Unless someone has gone crazy and there is "god-ruler" behind the walls ...
Translation: "Remember that I'm really the one in charge, and I consider your competence at waging war to have poor implications about your moral character."
I was so focused on Sapphire earlier, I didn't even think of Emerald. Having seen how they behave while together, I think I have an idea of what their deal is. Especially given how much the author likes to have Luna and Celestia's conflict reflected by other characters.
I think that Emerald has been lying to Sapphire to control her for years, maybe since they still lived in Queensford. I think it was probably actually Emerald who killed their cousin, and blamed it on Luna. That's probably why Sapphire is really afraid of Luna; Emerald has convinced her that Luna is some kind of serial killer.
... I'd thought Nebula Glow might've died because Luna distracted her by rushing the hydra. Now I'm wondering if Emerald did something.
Sapphire has changed. How is unknown, only that she fears Lulu. If it's the reasons I suspect, I kinda feel bad for Saphire. I've known people change for the better since I was young... and some change is less good ways.
In any case, Sapphire is afraid of something. What and why is something I'd like to find out, and given her reasons not blind hate or antagonistic, perhaps even offer her a second chance. If Luna can see through that Sapphire has changed that is, it's been many, many years for Luna to stew in the only memories she's ever had of the two.
It is obvious that she does not know what war is, Celestia simply does not understand it, she did not suffer its effects, she only saw the result, let's hope that this experience makes her reconsider.
Also, it seems a little cruel to me that he immediately thought the worst about Luna.
Extranious comma. Extranious preposition.
Extranious apostrophe.
Lose.
When making an 's' plural possessive, you place the apostrophe after the s.
Extranious comma again. I'll stop pointing them out.
Not a correction, but damn if peasants can't go far in unicornia.
And that's all I have. The rest of the chapter reads just fine. I won't be doing this for future chapters. Hell, I don't even know why I did it for this one.
Good story, looking forward to more.
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I know it's not talked about much, but I thought I did say some stuff about Unicornia's religion?
Y'know how Hoarfrost kept blathering about the sun?
Yeah it's that
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Oh you know me too well.
But I think you might be surprised anyway.
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What I will say, is that a big hint has already been dropped, and I'm actually surprised no one caught it.
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I found something the Simpsons didn't do!
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This won't be the first time ive said this, but this Celestia isn't the wise ruler we all know and love.
Also, I don't want to speak for all autistic people, but I feel like this is a very common occurance, being assumed we have the worst intentions.
Or maybe it's just me...
...
Idk
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Either way, thank you for the proofreading.
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We're just going to have to find out.
Also sorry, the time to play with Discord has clo-
You can't hold m- Oof!