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tom117z


A Twilight Sparkle fanboy who also likes to write. The author of the Change series.

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This story is a sequel to Harmony Among The Stars


The ES Harmony has returned home, Princess Twilight has been reunited with those she holds dear and everything has returned to complete normality.

Then there is the mirror portal to Canterlot High, which she and the senior staff of the Harmony had discussed at one point in their journey, filling the Princess' curiosity. It has been closed for around two millenia, so who knows what could be on the other side?

And then there is Discord. He seems to know something, and urges the Princess through.

All this, so the Princess can meet some very enterprising people. Discord has brought the popcorn.

(Featured on 12/12/2017)

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Comments ( 160 )

Good news is I got both my coursework pieces done, so I found the time to finish this up! :pinkiehappy:

This is NOT the sequel to Harmony Among the Stars, that may be a ways off yet. This is more of a mid-quel styled after a two parter TNG episode. Part 2 will be out sometime (hopefully) soon.

Hopefully you enjoy this little meeting of legends, and it will hold you over until Harmony Lost.

Between this and Cosmic Lotus, these are the MLP/Trek crossovers I never knew I wanted. (Though Lotus is only sort of Trek; it's based on a fan 'verse based on Trek.)

(Featured on 12/12/2017)

*sees it’s still the 11th for the next few hours and this isn’t in the featured box yet*

So did they tell it’d be featured ahead of time, or are you a time traveler of some sort?

Also, I have only one response to this story...

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are you a time traveler of some sort?

Time zones. :pinkiehappy:

and this isn’t in the featured box yet

Try turning off the damned clopfics, and you may see it :rainbowlaugh:

EDIT: It's appearing even with the clopfics on now.

Do you have a picture of the ES Harmony?

JMP

Well....huh. Didn't expect the ES Harmony to force its way into the Star Trek universe like that.

“It’s the ES Harmony.”

dun dun DUHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

I had really liked the previous fanfic, but sorry, I have no interest in EqG.

It be cool if a defendant of the girls was on the Enterprise.

Yay ponies in space is always a good thing.

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I know how you feel, but some talented writers lately have given me a reason to give it a change. And this story seems like it will be excellent too!

8605428
Even though the only thing from Equestria Girls is the portal and EVERYTHING else is Star Trek TNG?

Did you even read it before dismissing it out of hand?

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I didn’t dismiss it out of hand. I read that Twilight turns humanized as she crosses the portal. This story is good like your previous one, but it just isn’t my cup of tea.

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But did you read the rest of the story? As in, later in the chapter?

“Through the portal? You’ve been?” Twilight’s eyes widened in surprise.

“But of course, several times. Some of the people there are quite entertaining, when they don’t punch you in the face that is.”

“You got punched?” Twilight suppressed a grin. “How did somepony manage that?”

“Well someone did, it is a rather long story.”

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If memory serves, the hull configuration is similar to the USS Kelvin from the 2009 Star Trek movie.

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Humanized does not always mean EqG. Also, Twilight is no longer a teenager, and there are no humanized counterparts. Discord doesn't count, as he is his own counterpart.

A few notes.

romulan

All instances of "Romulan" should be capitalized.

strange energy reading

*readings

“My scan are unable to detect any anomalous readings.”

*scans

Now I expect you kids to get long, I do know that is you speciality

*your

Otherwise.. rather enjoyable, looking forward to the next one.

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Wouldn't it have made more sense for it to be like the NX-01?

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Ah... I hadn’t looked at the end of the chapter, and I didn’t see Twilight turns back into a pony.
I am sorry.
Pony Twilight having an adventure with the Enterprise and its crew? I am in.

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I have personally no interest in any humanized pony, anthro pony, or pony who turns human.

I imagine her proper response to a hail from the Harmony should be "what the flying buck are you doing here?!?"

That and this kind of Portal in the neutral zone is so much potential chaos that good ol Dissy must be delighted.

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Your profile pic makes me feel like you're biased. XD

And while the design is based off the Kelvin, its not identical. The engineering hull is replaced by a second nacelle for one thing. And why should it have to look like the NX-01? The ESP end up having a similar design aesthetic, but they're not working off the same designs, rather making their own.

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Pony Twilight having an adventure with the Enterprise and its crew? I am in.

Part 2 goes through to the pony side of the portal, though due to the anomaly they all keep their natural bodies, pony and human alike. And griffon, if you're Iynx.

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It should look like the NX-01 because anything as big as the Kelvin should have better shields and a higher warp capability then what the ES Harmony has now

“But of course, several times. Some of the people there are quite entertaining, when they don’t punch you in the face that is.”

Is this him hinting he's Q?

"Hello! I'm Twilight Sparkle!"

"I am Lieutenant Worf, Chief of security for the Enterpr-"

"OH! You must be the guy whose name coined the term for strong protagonists getting their flanks kicked easily!"

Twilight is later found with Worf's Bat'leth sticking out of her skull in place of her horn.

:trollestia:

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He did reveal he was later in the chapter

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...How?

1) Size doesn't mean anything, it just means they made a really big ship.

2) The Kelvin is bigger than the Prime Timeline's Enterprise-A, and the latter is more advanced and powerful. Hell, look at the freaking Defiant. (Remember, the Kelvin is Prime Timeline too).

3) If you think bigger technology is more advanced, take a look at this:
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This is the Enterprise J, a 26th century starship and just under 5 times longer then the Enterprise D and way more advanced. In the star trek franchise (most of the time) bigger=better (including warp nacelles)
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Also the goal of the federation is to build their flagship with the most advanced technology available to them not the biggest size they can so I will settle for a stalemate with this disagreement

i already like it...i want to see how this goes

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If you think bigger technology is more advanced, take a look at this:

Well if this was true nothing would beat this one :
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Well the J is a couple centuries ahead, of course it would be more advanced. I'm sure they have smaller ships that are more advanced too. Hell, a 29th century shuttle almost destroyed the USS Voyager in one episode...

Also the goal of the federation is to build their flagship with the most advanced technology available to them

True, they could build even bigger ships if they so wished (USS Vengeance for example). But also remember the ESP is not Starfleet, and Twilight designed the Harmony personally. It was their first proper exploration vessel, the jewel of the fleet. It was designed to be flashy as well as functional.

Sometimes ships are designed bigger because they want a bigger ship. And post-Harmony Among the Star, the ES Harmony is more closer to the Kelvin itself in terms of power anyway (after some redesigns during refit and some input from Xal). IE, still no match for the NCC-1701-D even if it's relatively the same size, kinda like if the actual USS Kelvin met the Enterprise-D.

The size of the ship ultimately does not necessarily signify advancement. The technology inside the ship does that.

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It still pisses me off that the ship's gravity could have torn the planet in two, and they just LEFT after the Queen died. :rainbowlaugh:

Holy poop! I'm not usually one for crossovers, but this one has my attention! I'll definitely be looking forward to more:twilightsmile:

Wait what? How?? That didn't happen- did it???

palasdhfoasdf;,asdf *flails about excitedly* OH MY GOD! YES!!!! This is gonna be a good one, even if it's only two chapters, it's gonna be good!

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It's styled as a TNG two parter, 10,000 words each chapter.

Great story,

Very well written and in no way spoof-ish. You did a good job of taking both shows seriously. Im looking forward to reading part two,.

Keep up the great work

The Monk.

Minor point Q wouldn't call him Picard. He would call him Jean-Luc. He always does when teasing Picard.

Dammit, Twilight, stop breaking the multiverse!

This looks like it will be quite fun, so far. Interdimensional interstellar shenanigans are a go!

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This is NOT the sequel to Harmony Among the Stars, that may be a ways off yet. This is more of a mid-quel styled after a two parter TNG episode. Part 2 will be out sometime (hopefully) soon.

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Meaning we'll get a sequel afterwards? That will be good!

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Yup.

Harmony Among The Stars: Harmony Lost

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My guess would be "he did not"

But don't worry when you have a story that attracts thousands of readers there are bound to be some that will just dismiss it, but for every one of those there are plenty more of us who absolutely adore what you came up with.

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