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Foals Errand

Guess whose back?!


After being purged of the darkness at the Fall Formal Sunset was hurt, and badly. She needed a home, and a place in someone's heart.

Luckily for her, Celestia has room for her in both.

Lovingly edited by RK

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seen a few variations of celestia taking her in after the fall formal. buut... with this one being written by you specifically? i'll give it a shot :)

I didn't notice the Crossover tag.

Then I read it.

Then I rushed back and saw the tag.

You have my undivided attention.

I'm sorry you feel that way. Thank you for not down voting and have a nice day!

Okay, this has my attention as an editor and reader. :D Good twist/swerve at the end, there.

*giggles taking a bow*

You honor me. I hope you enjoy.

*grin* I think you'll like what I have planned then!

you're welcome. have you read 'new sun rises'? sunset isn't given a choice in that one

I am going to be keeping an eye on this one. It sounds like it will be a very interesting story. :twilightsmile:

Yeah I've been on a Celestia adopts Sunset kick. That's prob where this came from!

Thank you! I hope I do not disappoint!

I'm just picturing ether Tony looking into the explosion since they'll say it was a gas main or something like that and you know Tony doesn't trust S.H.E.I.L.D. since even their secrets have secrets

Shield hides "Everything..."

Soon I hope to update this one every week or every other week!

I am sure this will turn into a wonderfully well written story. So far the first chapter has me hooked and wanting to see more I look forward to the next chapter keep up the really awesome work. :twilightsmile:

:trixieshiftright: Fascinating.

Let's see where this goes.

please, fury never tells even close to 40% of the secrets he knows.

Marvel Crossover? You have my attention.

Really refreshing take on the follow up from the Fall Formal. When Celestia called Coulson, as much as I know it wouldn't make sense, I'm really hoping for Doctor Strange to show up and treat Sunset. Maybe he'll show up later?

This is Celestia Everfree?

This should have a period because it makes it look as if she is not sure of who she is.

Interesting beginning...

You have my upvote and favorite! :pinkiehappy:

Damn, was hoping for Sunlestia, but that is equally good too.

very very interesting start you better update ASAP i love stories like this as this is where the source of sunsets darkness was its cleary she just wants a family

My eyes lit up with the twist at the end. I am excited to see where this goes.

Hmmm interesting. Nothing unique yet but well executed so far. I shall keep an eye on this

Is this really supposed to be saying that Sunset did hard manual labor for upwards of four hours while the dance ran its course, while under Luna's supervision, while bleeding from life-threatening wounds, and no one, including her, noticed such telltale signs as extreme pain or blood dripping everywhere?

Partially because of adrenaline and partially because leather really absorbs blood. Also no not four hours. It was at most one hour as the coronation was likely roughly at 10:30 and the portal closed at 12-12:30. Say the battle lasted likely thirty minutes. So give or take one hour. Also Luna knew she'd be showing pain. She did crawl out of a giant crater. She just had no idea how badly she was hurt.

I didn't see that twist near the end, but I am loving the idea. You have gained yourself a reader

Okay. What is this crossed over with?

If you get the feeling that you are being followed, don't worry. It's just me. :pinkiehappy:

front page... nice.

Well now. Let's see where this takes us.

Celestia adopts Sunset + Marvelverse crossover? Color me very interested.

I am intrigued to see where you are taking this! :twilightsmile:

Marvel's Agents of SHIELD looks like.

Agents of SHIELD and Avengers exactly!

I hope you continue to find it fascinating!

Take a seat and enjoy the show!

Doctor Strange will show up later. He wouldn't be able to help Sunset right now.

Momlestia and Sciset romance work okay then I hope. Plus Luna being Best Aunt. ^^

The next chapter may have been finished last night and with an editor...

I hope you enjoy what I have planned then!

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