Regardless of how it may seem from my response, I am eternally grateful that you would give me enough of your time to make it as far as you have! You would be surprised at quite how happy I am that you like my thing enough to give it criticism. After all, if you didn't think it had potential, you wouldn't have bothered! Sorry I can't acquiesce to your demands. I hope you understand why.

Thanks for the favorite on Road to Twilight. I promise I am still working on this.