Teach Me Beauty, Teach Me Grace

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Rarity helps Cheerilee remember that she is an amazing mare.

2nd Place winner in JakeTheArmyGuy's Horse Words Extravaganza!

Cover art by Slushi3.

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B_25

B_25 #1 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 1 · ·

10/10

DoctorDerpy

DoctorDerpy #2 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 3 · ·

Oh shit, propmaster is entering the contest. I have no chance now

DrEggnog

DrEggnog #3 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 1 · ·

8263631
My thoughts exactly.

Edit: This story could use a blush counter. Sooo much blushing.

XIII

XIII #4 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Good story, and about a couple that I never even considered so props there.
So...I'll give you ten mustached Spikes

OmniFox

OmniFox #5 · Jun 29th, 2017 · 4 · ·

Imagine Sweetie Belle's reaction to this.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #6 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · ·

The relationship feels like it progresses a touch more quickly than one might expect, but overall this was a very sweet story showcasing Rarity at her best. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.

Dafaddah

Dafaddah #7 · Jul 12th, 2017 · · ·

A very sweet story and great characterizations of both Rarity and Cheerilee!

PresentPerfect

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PresentPerfect #8 · Jul 30th, 2017 · 2 · ·

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Posh

Posh #9 · Aug 2nd, 2017 · · ·

8290654 I think it settles on a nice, realistic end point, personally. The story doesn't end with them together, it ends with them expressing an interest in one another, with the possibility of a relationship.

If I had to criticize, I'd say that maybe Cheerilee feels a little... too bold at the end? Which contrasts sharply with how meek she was at he story's beginning.

But that's a minor flaw in an otherwise adorable bit of Cheerishipping.

I also noticed a typo (Did she know what she wants, or did she need a push in the right direction?). That's about all the complaining I mean to do.

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