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Crowne Prince

Rogue animator and antagonist. Exactly what you needed.

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This is all my own writing. I've changed the formatting to hopefully clarify that fact.

After this, Cheerilee suddenly moved way up on my list of favorite ponies.

:pinkiehappy: This made my day, it really is hit and miss with allot of these stories, which is why I usually stick to the most popular ones. But I saw the title and I thought to myself, this is going to be good and it was.

This was awesome :rainbowlaugh:
Loved the premise, Cheerilee was portrayed perfectly, and oh dat ending. Have a moustache! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

So meta. I love it.

The granite on Cheerilee’s pencil

Unless I am very much mistaken, pencils contain graphite :rainbowlaugh:

I thouroughly enjoyed this :rainbowlaugh:

Ponies work in mysterious ways :rainbowlaugh:

actually, they use a new mineral dubbed "graniphite" it's a common mistake:rainbowwild:

Okay the ending made it for me. :rainbowlaugh: A fun read all around.

1273739 :rainbowderp: All this new-fangled technology... :rainbowlaugh:

this was quite amusing :pinkiehappy:

Um, who the buck is Trefiori?
Wonderful story, though. :pinkiesmile:

So Outstandingly Meta Even This Acronym :pinkiegasp:
Trollfic writers gonna troll, I suppose. Great twist at the end, and I know we've all felt like that reading some badfic around here from time to time. Difference is that we usually don't HAVE to suffer through it like the editors do.
4.5/5 Pinkies, and a massive thumbs-up from me.

:flutterrage: i shall beat your site SENSELESS

Sorry about that, got a little ragey. :twilightblush:

Honestly, I approve of all stories that are about why certain stories need to be burned and/or redone. I like this story.

So did it count more as a trollfic? Lol.

7:21 - 7:22



Oh my gosh.
I'm almost tempted to leave it there because it's such a stupid mistake.

That was hilarious.


Presumably, Cheerilee does her editing under a pen name to avoid precisely this kind of embarrassment.

This was awesome. I loved the detail you put into Cheerilee's thought processes, and the ending was a very amusing twist. Well done!

Trefiori, Tre Fiori, Three Flowers, like Cheerilee's cutie mark. I'm guessing that, the only language outside of English I know is Spanish, which is vaguely close to Italian.


As far as I know, it's a Soccer/Football club in San Marino.

Poor Cheerilee :fluttershyouch:
Aside from that, great story. I bet anyone who edits, is lifting a glass to you right now.

Oh okay, damn. Thought I might have been intuitive :ajbemused:

Couldn't stop reading, excellent work!

I don't even know what to say.

This just made my day. :pinkiehappy:

I forgot why I came over here. Then I read the story. I still forget. BTW: Good story.

HEY. you're boring!


Note to self... should have read this before asking you to beta....:twilightblush:

.... Mine wasn't that bad was it... :raritycry::raritydespair:

Lol, very enjoyable and its great that give some basic reminders that people tend to skip over. Oh, and Dash is a pretty awesome Prankster.:rainbowlaugh:

This is a fanfic for all the Grammar Nazis, the editors, the self-editors, and otherwise involved pre-production people we all owe so much to.
We all thank you for putting up with such horrible conditions to make our lives a little easier. :heart:

Omg so many lulz I DIED!!! Pinkie came and jumped on my chest to bring me back!!! LOL :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

In truth, she felt a little bit of a stabbing pain every time she read this sort of story because she knew the librarian quite well. It was hard to fathom her wonderful friend was the type to sleep with so many ponies so recklessly,

How I feel whenever I accidentally stumble across a fic like that. :twilightsheepish:

Bad. There really wasn’t any other way to describe it.

I've always been partial to "Hate crime against language" but that's me. :twilightsmile:

Fun story overall.

Cheers my friend. I lost count of how often my face hit my desk.

On a side note, you might like WD: The HiE Experiment by Wanderer D.

Not a sentence in this fic is wasted. Your prose and humor are delightfully witty. A well done and hilarious one-shot!

I'm saving this. It will serve as a great reminder of things to keep in mind while writing. Thank you!

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