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Have a upvote and follow (Can't favorite anymore) that was beautiful 10/10 :D
Yeee
good stuff, daddy-oh!
To perfect i Love it!
This is a very good one-shot.
I tend to love Twilight is (like) Spike's mother stories. Have a fav.
I find the mother/son relationship they have to be more convincing then anything else and i certainly accept it over an actual romance relationship sorta thing that is just too weird to think
Reminds me of that comic I looked at once where he was sad when Twilight was off somewhere.
Nice
I didn't cry, nope not even a little bit
We need more of stuff like this, just shameless Spike and Twilight bonding and fluff.
This was very well done, I caught on to Twilight being gone as soon as the Glimmer scene but it wasnt until Rarity was in Rainbow Dash's house that I realized we were in Spike's nightmare, that, was masterful I must say.
It cannot be understated that in this day and age it is hard to immerse a reader to follow the line you want them to and you did this effortlessly, this was immensely pleasing to read.
Hmm, Luna really needs to visit the young dragon's dreams, and help him have some better ones, as issues like this tend to be chronic. A few applications of dream magic should help him sleep more soundly...if she's able to do so considering he's a dragon. Anyway, good work.
Without any context for why Spike is even having this dream, it's hard to feel anything but confusion.
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Not sure a Nightmare about loading a love one needs more context than he was thinking about mortality before bed.
8248654 But this is an oddly specific dream. Generally, such things are triggered by a trauma, not random musings. Had this been immediately after the Tirek attack, it would have made perfect sense, for example.
HNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGG
that is all
Simply wonderful
This was a very beautiful and heartfelt story, I really enjoyed it.
So good. Thank you for not destroying my feelings.
Bravo!!! Good story!
Nothing beats the feeling of being held by your mother in a conforting embrace.
You know what? I gave this one a shot. The first paragraph put me off, so I left and thought I'd try it again later.
Sorry, Props, I just can't get more than a few paragraphs in. *shrug*
I know you've written other stuff I loved, so don't take it too harshly.
This gave me a not-inconsiderable amount of good emotions.
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I almost gave this a dislike for being 'neagative', then I actually thought about what you said. Thank you for giving this story a chance, and I'm sorry that this story didn't do it for you. And thank you for being civil about it as well.
Momma Twilight is always my favorite version of Twilight. The relationship dynamic between her and Spike is just too precious.
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She hatched him, raised him, and provides for him. Who else is she but his mother?
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Agreed
So perfect and sad rainbow really gave me a feeling of unimaginable dread
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Twimommy is best mommy i love the show but for the life of me I’ll never understand why they didn’t show that relationship more
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