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Luna's dungeon is surprisingly comfortable.

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Principal Celestia is haunted by an inner demon. Her solution is in the locked drawer of her desk.

First Published
20th Mar 2017
Last Modified
20th Mar 2017
#1 · 4d, 17h ago · · ·

Huh. That's a twist I wasn't expecting. Rather nice concept, I'll keep watching this for me.

Good job.

#2 · 4d, 16h ago · · ·

>>8036641 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

#3 · 4d, 14h ago · 3 · ·

Ah, another answer for the human Sunset question.  Yeah, that could drive someone to drink.  Back when pony Sunset was raging she-demon in all but form (which came later), it was easy to hate her.  Seeing her all nice and happy now, that's even worse, yeah.  Good story.

#5 · 4d, 1h ago · · ·

Whoa....

That ending though....

#6 · 3d, 23h ago · · ·

Nice fic, but it gave me a sad.:fluttershysad:

#7 · 3d, 15h ago · · ·

Very well-written, with one minor, teensy little break in my suspension of disbelief.

Wine doesn't have enough alcohol to burn in the mouth as described. That's liquor she's drinking, if it's doing that.

Beyond that, I rather enjoyed it. Answers some questions, has a good emotional punch.

Thanks for writing it!

#8 · 3d, 7h ago · · ·

good stuff my dude

#9 · 3d, 2h ago · · ·

>>8040522 ,>>8038562 ,>>8038304  Thanks all! :twilightsheepish:

>>8039808 Ah, not a bad point. Glad you enjoyed it regardless!

#10 · 3d, 2h ago · · ·

>>8041177

Oh, I really enjoyed It! It was just a moment that broke my immersion. If you want to keep the burn, (which I like, for the symbolism,) and the somewhat refined air Celestia has, try brandy or scotch. She'd drink the former out of a sniffer, and the latter from a tumbler. I can help with horse puns for the names, if you'd like.

If you'd rather keep it as-is, only alcoholics like myself will have that "... wait a minute..." moment, so it's no big.

Thanks again!

#11 · 3d, 1h ago · 1 · ·

>>8041212 I'll probably keep it as-is, because I like the imagery of her drinking straight from the bottle, but I do appreciate the input.

#12 · 3d, 1h ago · · ·

>>8041309

Heck, you could keep that imagery as well, since both brandy and scotch would be high enough in alcohol content to clean the mouth of the bottle, and wine really isn't.

But I'm nitpicking. It's good as-is!

#13 · 2d, 19h ago · · ·

Why can’t she let me grieve for my daughter!?

:pinkiegasp: Sweet lord :fluttercry:.

#14 · 2d, 10h ago · · ·

This story deserve more than one upvote. Too bad I can only give a single one. Kudos to the author for making this story. Its been a while since I read a well-written sad story.

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