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    A familiar face moves into the sirens' apartment building.  · Tethered-Angel
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Aria and Sonata attend the Sisterhood Social. They have an unexpected run-in with their old rivals.

First Published
9th Apr 2017
Last Modified
10th Apr 2017
#1 · 7w, 5h ago · · · The Social ·

The Dazzlings are so cool.

Aria and Sonata are my favorite of them.

#2 · 7w, 3h ago · · · The Social ·

>>8085218 They are pretty great, and fun to write!

#3 · 7w, 3h ago · · · The Social ·

Awesome Sirens story. Have a Fave! :yay:

#4 · 7w, 3h ago · · · The Social ·

>>8085516 Thanks, loving your Sunlight stuff by the way!

#5 · 7w, 3h ago · · · The Social ·

Nice start, will there be more?

#6 · 7w, 2h ago · 2 · · The Social ·

>>8085546 I have a short epilogue planned, and if this one does well I am considering a sequel :twilightsheepish:

#7 · 7w, 2h ago · · · The Social ·

>>8085564 Awesome! I look forward to it :twilightsmile:

#8 · 7w, 2h ago · 2 · · The Social ·

Well I hope Dagi just has a cold and is drama queening the hell out of it.

#9 · 6w, 6d ago · · · Epilogue ·

1: Calvin and Hobbies

2: I liked this little Epilogue a lot, it was short and cute. I would actually love to see more of there little mini adventures :twilightsmile:

#10 · 6w, 6d ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>8087034 Got it in one :moustache: Have a mustache!

I hope to have more in the future, so be on the lookout!

>>8085582 Yup, you read her like a book :rainbowlaugh:

#11 · 6w, 4d ago · · · The Social ·

“That’s it!” Rainbow yelled, her fist lashing out and striking the siren across the face, knocking her to the ground.

I really wish it wasn't perfectly in-character for her to lash out and be the first one to resort to violence, but with canon going the way it has...? :applejackunsure:

Finally, Rainbow Dash broke the silence, scratching the back of her head in embarrassment. “Look, um, I’m sorry I hit you. I’ve always been a bit hot-headed, and I had no idea what you’re going through.”

Luckily, doing at least this much suits her too. :pinkiesmile:

#12 · 6w, 4d ago · · · Epilogue ·

This is a cute ending and all, but if they don't know the type or severity of the illness, how did they know what kind of medicine to bring her? :rainbowhuh:

#13 · 6w, 4d ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>8090998 Yeah, I was a little worried I was being unfair to Rainbow Dash there, but honestly it's pretty like her. But she is also usually quick to admit to her mistakes, once she realizes she's made one.

>>8091001 Sonata miiiight have been exaggerating a tiny bit for sympathy. But my take on it is, Adagiobasically had something like a cold or flue, something common that's easily treatable to most people, but since the sirens have never been sick they have no idea how their immune systems can handle it. They've probably never bothered to vaccinate.

Thanks for the interest!

#14 · 5w, 1d ago · 3 · · Epilogue ·

Cute fic! I sort of wish Aria had hit RD back, because that actually annoyed me more than a little. But I suppose they were out numbered by quite a bit, in addition to the whole magic vs no magic state of affairs. Nice work.:yay:

#15 · 5w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

>>8112595 It was tempting, I'll admit :rainbowlaugh:  Thanks

#16 · 4w, 6d ago · · · Epilogue ·

I really enjoyed this story. Loved your portrayal of Aria, and Sonata was just the right level of annoying and whining until she got her way :twilightsmile:

I particularly liked how you handled the conflict, that Aria didn't back down or feel she had to explain herself; I agree with the commenter below that it would have been nice to hit Rainbow back, but then the whole thing would have escalated and probably not ended well. If anything I thought Rainbow's apology made her look even worse, that she thought some pithy one-line explanation could excuse giving someone a black eye. And I agree with a previous comment, that is in keeping with her character. As was that all six of them felt threatened enough to power up their magic, just by someone defying them after having been punched to the floor.

For what it's worth I thought it worked a bit better without the epilogue; I thought the touching sister moment was a more fitting note of optimism to end on, but that's me.

Good job with the story :pinkiehappy:

#17 · 4w, 6d ago · 2 · · Epilogue ·

>>8117475 Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Sonata and Aria is definitely a fun pair to write, and I'm glad I struck a good balance with them.

That's along the same line I was thinking, for sure. I tried not to demonize anyone, but some characters are definitely more prone to conflict than others.

I don't disagree with your opinion on the epilogue, it probably wasn't strictly necessary, but it did tie up some loose ends I wanted taken care of.

Anyway, thanks for the comment :pinkiehappy:

#20 · 1w, 1d ago · · · Epilogue ·

So this story is still super popular, so, any chance of that possible sequel you mentioned? :pinkiehappy:

(edit) "So Silly me, I didnt realize there already WAS a sequel to this!" :rainbowlaugh: *slips off to read it*

#21 · 1w, 1d ago · 1 · · Epilogue ·

>>8177777 Chances are at 100% :raritywink:

Enjoy!

#22 · 1w, 16h ago · · · Epilogue ·

This one was very good:pinkiehappy:! The characters were spot on in my opinion and you wrote it all in a very entertaining way!

Have a fav:raritywink:!

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