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This story is a sequel to A Chill in the Air
In an effort to learn and use the Rainbooms' own tricks against them, the Dazzlings attend a party at Sunset Shimmer's urging. While they're there, they share tales of their exploits in this world up to and beyond the Battle of the Bands.
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I bet they have some neat stories. Involving seduction. Or being accused of being witches.
That's actually a clever idea. I gotta use that sometimes in real life.
This is glorious!
5730228 Could have also gone a justifiable "Sonata as Rain Man" route. (note, I still haven't read the fic yet - plan to soon though)
So are you implying that 1000 Equstrian years is the equvilant of 30 human years?
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I'm implying the guy who got a wing in the library for time magic might have been good at time magic.
My god, Elizabethan Sirens are hilarious!
MY SIDES!
Shapeksperian Sonata is hilarious!
Hilarious?
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I regret to inform that the ye olde siren-speak doesn't happen a whole lot in any of the stories I use it for.
Still, if they were roaming about at that time, it only makes sense they'd still have the vernacular. I think.
Somehow, I'm not surprised Adagio has no issues with public nudity.
Then again, I tend to think of her with a four-letter word that shares three of its letters with the word 'slug', so yeah.
5734373 Why would call any woman a plug?
May not have been the best question to ask, Pinkie.
Um, no, comment.
When Sonata and Adagio facepalm, you know you've screwed up- wait WHAT?!
Say what?
Oh my.
That was different, removing one layer such as her leather jacket is one thing, but removing everything, nu-uh, this isn't a clopfic.
Riiiight.
5734373 5734696 Slag?
Oh, that was absolutely hilarious, I can't stop laughing
Oh, I have not laughed that well in a long time, thank you so much.
On a more serious note, that was a good chapter, well written and nicely flowing. The Siren's story stole the show by far. Kudos for making it both extremely entertaining and in character. For that matter impressive work with the Elizabethan, it isn't without fault but it is better than most I have seen do anything similar
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Thanks, but writing in my idea of Shakespeare-talk is on par with consistently writing dialogue for Zecora, (try writing every single sentence in rhyme, less fun than it sounds) so I use it pretty sparingly.
5736174 Well, that's a synonym for the word I had in mind, in certain parts of the globe.
is getting interesting
I hope soon to be able to upload the continuation
I'll just leave this here:
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Pattern identified, the rest of the chapter titles probably won't surprise anyone. (Yes, there is a reason.
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Well, I say it's all right. *guitar riff*
I sense shenanigans!
GAH! PUPPY DOG EYES!
Isn't she already blue? Oh wait, that's the joke, isn't it?
How DO they do that anyway? Magic hair? *insert Tangled joke here*
AJ.
How forgiving IS this guy?
Ohhh myy...
TV and Sonata means fun times for all.
Yes, this is glorious. I always enjoy a good Siren backstory.
5740387 Dead?
5922646
I wouldn't say any of my stories are dead yet, I just haven't had time to write much in weeks.
5923675 But yyyyyyyyyyyy?
5925379
Finals, primarily.
5925464 Oh, the struggles
That's television for you Adagio.
Really? Really?
You worry me.
VaGUely. Also, not sure how to react to that.
HAH! Also, Ringo, I get it!
Silly Sunset.
So it will have romance between Adagio and Sunset?
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With the romance tag in there, I figured there wasn't much point in being subtle.
5990988 Oh mer gurd
MITBOY I love your dev bro!!!
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Okay
5993742 K den
Curse Dazzlings and their magical hair! Now I imagine Adagio wearing a bald wig!
This is genius.
Stupid, catchy song won't get out of my head. Argh!
Nice rendition though. And I just realized there's a romance tag. Oh brother, what have I gotten myself into
First, my Beatle-brain sees the chapter titles.
Then, I'm thrown into constant giggling by the excellent comedy.
Then I decide to check your other stories and find that I'm tracking one, have read five and loves your chapters of Sunny, moony, Twily.
And now I wonder wth I'm not following you.
...
I don't have to wonder any more.
She's right.
I see.
Smart guy.
Yeah, whack a mole is awesome.
Interesting.
Oooh...
Yep.
Fair enough.
Nice save.
Where did she come from?
Ouch.
Superior Primate Spheres 2. Hm, Yeah I got nothing.
Donkey Kong?
I see.
Right.
She's got a point.
Sadly, yes.
She's right.
Basically, yes.
Sometimes if you're lucky, both!
Nah, most of it really is.
Dare I ask?
Don't explain the joke.
OOH yeah.
You mean how the Dazzlings' magic can't actually control anyone or make them do anything that they didn't (in some form) already want to do? 'Cause it did seem like you were driving that home pretty hard.
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Different detail, but I'm glad that wasn't remotely ambiguous.
Funnily enough, that fact itself isn't super important to the story as a whole, just the means by which I hoped to establish something else, also unrelated to the unspecified important-much-later detail. I should probably stop giving pseudo-spoilers.
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Oh, well if it's not the explanation of their magic then it seemed to work out okay. Before I got down to the author's note I thought that part felt kinda excessive, but the other little tidbits that you slipped in flowed very nicely and didn't seem out of place at all.
What about this kind of buildup do you not like, exactly? Personally I love slipping morsels of foreshadowing and puzzle pieces into stories so that by the time things finally come together the reveal is all the sweeter,
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I guess there's an art to it, but when I know I won't so much as be hinting toward something again in a way that doesn't feel forced and the payoff isn't until forever away, it's like having to wait until New Years to use your fireworks because it was rainy or something on the 4th of July, if that makes sense.
You're right, though, it'll be a hell of a show when it comes around!
Amusingly enough, I've had a similar theory in regards to the Sirens' powers.
Drat it, I hate not being able to write quickly. Everyone else is using ideas similar to mine before I can!
Huh, this continues to be intriguing and amusing. Is the presence of the Anon-A-Miss incident in the 'canon' of this fic the small detail that comes up later?
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Negatory, but with this chapter, I think I've made up for the lack of focus on it from the first story. That was supposed to be the main theme of their talk on the bench.
6126334 Ah, gotcha.
And favorited.
This has been sitting in my read later list for what feels like an age. Really glad I finally dug in, because this is topping out as my favourite characterization of the Dazzlings. I hope there's more to come soon.
Ringo huh? Fits with the chapter titles.
Of course they'd love games! Gamer rage must be delicious.