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After her student, Sunset Shimmer, went through the mirror, Celestia spent the following years imagining what could happen if the unicorn finally returns. She even decided to keep track of them.

In fact, she wrote a whole book about it.

Edit: 11/11/16 WTF?! Feature Box? Thank you, guys!

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22 likes, 0 dislikes, but no comments?
Weird!

Celestia is every fimfic author, and Twilight is every fimfic editor.

7711330 Yes, yes it is.:derpyderp1:
7711338 And this story is every "Sunset returns"-fic

7711423 Did you sneak in a reference to Case Closed?

Hah! I'm just imagining Twilight finding these books and memorizing all of scenarios..just in case.

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I imagine Twilight edited them for grammar.

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Guilty as charged.
It's just one of my most nostalgic animes:rainbowkiss:

7711693 Mine tooo.

Just wish it'd have plot advancement.

Funny story. Celestia just made Plotto.

Yeah, Twilight definitely probably had a hoof in editing these.:derpytongue2::rainbowlaugh:

TransFormation-ObnoxiousAlicorn?

Reading this fic took me back to my Masters thesis where I was reviewing the development of War Plan Orange during the periods between World Wars I and II, all that prep work thinking about how a Pacific war between the U.S. and Japan would occur...

"Now you’ll face the worst punishment for banishing me to the moon!”, Nightmare Moon basically shouted at Celestia.
“Please sister, stop this madness!”, Celestia exclaimed.
“Never! And now I will banish you… to your room, where you will have to read bad vampony-teenage-romance books for the next 1000 years!”
“NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!”, Celestia shouted in an overly-dramatic way.

In which, death is a mercy.

This was absolutely hilarious and definitely made my day. :rainbowlaugh: Celestia and Sunset are a lot more alike than either of them would like to admit and those different scenarios. :pinkiehappy: You know, you should expand on this even further by coming up with additional ones for both hilarity, and to show what Sunset was coming up with. It sounds like either she or Twilight had their own book of scenarios that they've been writing into. Speaking of books, Luna is going to have a field day when she does what she said she would do. :rainbowlaugh:

“I swear, Luna. I did not write a list about possible ‘Sunset returns’-scenarios.”
“Phew, I was really worried about you for a sec–”
“I WROTE A WHOLE BOOK!”, Celestia suddenly blurred out.

Okay... Well, at least we know now who teached Twilight about list-making.


Good story!
I enjoyed your ideas about the possible scenarios with Sunset.
Also your idea where to hide the lists about Nightmare Moon.
Even if I suspected Celestia's worst punishment would be cake-related...



Suggestions:

Why shouldn’t she like

Better: wouldn't

and thrown into a dungeon there.

Remove the last word. (2x)
Also: you forgot to add the cover-source. I recommend adding it. I'm sure the artist would approve.

Why did it had to be Scenario TF-OA#42?

Because twilight: The Flanking oblivious Alicorn Life. Fits your life the best:rainbowlaugh:

(Internet cookies if you get it)

So...... Where's the scenario where they start furiously making out? I would have loved to see Luna's reaction to that!

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First, I'm glad that for once I am the one who made someone's day.
Second, I actually already thought about a kinda-sequel, which only consists of these random shorts, ("Pony Fails" and "Letters from a disgruntled student" are famous examples for what I'd do). Though I'm a bit afraid people might see it just as a copy of "The many destinies of Sunset Shimmer". But maybe I'll do it, if I find enough unique ideas.

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It actually stands for Twilight Funny - Overexcited Alicorn (#42 because Twilight)
Actually the name of every scenario is an acronym. First two letters are either the world it's based on or the general type. Last two are a short summary of what will happen. Only the numbers are mostly random.

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I figured that was the case. But I couldn't stop myself from making a joke around it. Even if the joke is terrible. Lol

Edit: also because I wanted to make the number 42 reference.

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I say go for it if you feel passionate enough about it. This story of yours has ended up being incredibly successful and you should be proud of the achievement.

“...and these beauties–”, Sunset pointed excited at her newly-grown wings. “–were just the reward for messing around with harmony-magic. I mean, why aren’t there more alicorns when it’s so easy to become one?

Heh. It's funny because it's true.

7711423 Fun little read; I especially like the one with the poison pill and pink, alicorn filly. :trollestia:

“I WROTE A WHOLE BOOK!”, Celestia suddenly blurred out.

I think you mean blurted.

Scenario DC-SP#21

I know that scenario! It sounds like Detective Conan!

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No, because she was clearly violently shaking with anxiety.

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Thanks. I fixed it.:twilightsmile:

7715152 apotoxin 4869

Woah, a Detective Conan reference! Neat! :twilightsheepish:

Even I don't know what was going on with my mind when I wrote this. This can't be just the boredom, right?:rainbowderp:

Of course it can!

"This means that we also have to consider her not liking this transformation.”
Oh hey, an author finally considered this.
" Why shouldn’t she like becoming a princess? It means we can delegate even more work off of our shoulders."
Goddamit Luna, this is why I hate you now.

Overall, pretty lolzy. Nice job! :pinkiesmile:

“...and these beauties–”, Sunset pointed excited at her newly-grown wings. “–were just the reward for messing around with harmony-magic. I mean, why aren’t there more alicorns when it’s so easy to become one? And what do you think is my title as a princess? Princess of humans? Princess of schools? Princess of bacon? Uh! How about Co-Princess of friendship. This would make you Co-Princess, too, of course. We can think about this later. But seriously, I don’t care what happens at the castle. Even if Celestia banishes me, returning was worth it just for Sunny and Shimmy.”

I gotta admit, I'd probably feel exactly this way. Awesome. And yeah. Even Princess of Bacon would work if it meant signifying wings on your back :3

Also, Spitfire as Sunset's cousin? Interesting.

7721126 If you haven't encountered it yet: Firebird Dahlia has Spitfire as Sunset's sister, and deals with Sunset trying to make peace with her (and with her family in general).

This was the funniest Sunset returns story I ever read!!!!

Congratulations, this is the funniest thing Germany has ever produced. Admittedly, though, that's not saying much. :trollestia:

Congratulations, this is the funniest thing Germany has ever produced. Admittedly, though, that's not saying much. :trollestia:

And what do you think is my title as a princess? Princess of humans? Princess of schools? Princess of bacon?

ALL HAIL THE PRINCESS OF BACON!!!

Sunset stepped out of the mirror.

Celestia noticed the mysterious cap on her head showing a strange red-and-white ball. Suddenly the unicorn pulled out a ball, that looked exactly like the picture, and threw it at the princess. The ball hit Celestia on her head and a red beam shot out of it. Celestia seemed to disappear in the ball, which then landed on the floor and shook and blinked rapidly until stopping with a *click*.

Sunset picked up the ball and held it up. “Yes! I caught a Celestia!”

“I’m seriously questioning your mental health right now.”

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

And now Twilight's insane need for lists is perfectly understood. Good Job Celestia, you rubbed off on your student.

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What, the movie "Top Secret!" doesn't count?

Especially that scene with the......hmm.....actually, I don't think that scene was declassified yet.

:rainbowlaugh:

“I’m seriously questioning your mental health right now.”

Aren't we all, Luna. Aren't we all.:pinkiecrazy:

Wow, just..... Wow.-LOL

“Yes, Luna, you’re right. Ha Ha. I’d never do something dumb like this. Hehehe.” Celestia tried to fake a laugh. But failed. Miserably.

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“And how did I never saw them?”

Either change 'did' to 'come'.
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This is a pretty cute little fic. Definitely upvote worthy.

Scenario DC-SP#21:

What’s this poisonous pill scenario from? Is it a reference to something in the DC universe?

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It's a reference to Detective Conan (also known as Case Closed in English).

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