The Real Reason

Long ago, Sunset Shimmer ran through the portal into the human. What is not known is why.

And here comes a fic that's telling you it was all because of donuts. Yep, Sunset Shimmer went through that portal because of donuts, or more accurately a lack of them.

Sorry for the confusion, but this is just a one-shot. I will not be continuing this.

Chapters (1)

Comments ( 10 )

Viewing 1 - 50 of 10
- Newest First
- Oldest First

NightDancer

NightDancer #1 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

Lol how can you not like this story? XD It's a little choppy but it'll be polished and perfect for what happens next. XD

Soufriere

Soufriere #2 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

Derpy showed up toward the end, knocking away Luna's toothbrush. Cookie now?

Okay. This was a pretty fun read. You've earned an upvote. Now for the criticisms. First off…

looking way to pleased with himself

This should be "too". I've seen too many people make this elementary mistake to let it slide.

Second, why is Luna in this story? At this point in time, she should still be trapped on the moon.

For what it's worth, I would not have been as patient with that a$$hole guard. I'd have reacted like how Sunset did in her official backstory comic and just blasted him. Because doughnuts.

Meep the Changeling

Meep the Changeling #3 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

Yes, yes I would. That seems like a very pony thing to do.

Half Dime

Half Dime #4 · Feb 10th, 2015 · · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

Head canon accepted!

North

North #5 · Feb 10th, 2015 · 3 · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

5609573 Okay...cookies! (wow, donuts then cookies...junk food galore!)

upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/b/b9/Chocolate_Chip_Cookies_-_kimberlykv.jpg
cookingclassy.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/lofthouse+sugar+cookies12.jpg
itsafabulouslife.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/01/different-cookies.jpg
2.bp.blogspot.com/_1XduIDdzI7o/TQEUW_r_UgI/AAAAAAAAATU/3VYHpE24PXs/s1600/DSCN5704%2B-%2Bsnickerdoodle.jpg inkatrinaskitchen.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Cookie-Monster-Cookies.jpg

Melody Silverpaw

Melody Silverpaw #6 · Feb 11th, 2015 · · · I DON'T CARE HOW, I WANT THEM NOW ·

...Omgosh, what did I just read? XD Agreeing with Soufriere (now that they've pointed out the problem), Luna doesn't belong here. But I didn't notice at the time and thought it was funny. XD What a chaotic and interesting idea; bent on obtaining donuts.

EchoWing