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Everybody agrees that Sunset Shimmer is the best Smirker in Canterlot High. Well, almost everybody. There are some people who think they smirk better, and are willing to challenge her during the Smirking Contest. They are definitely not prepared to handle Sunset and her smirk.
*Contains*: A lot of smirks
Many thanks to Monokeras and Foehn for proofreading and editing.
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Bee-yoo-ti-full.
8281760
Isn't it?
8281779
Confirmed. Sunset is best smirker.
Is there a sequel
8281879
Not at the moment, but maybe later. I still don't know if I can extend this while keeping it funny.
This story made me smrik
😏
Uhh..."one or the other"? Trixie's the only one of those two who's self-absorbed.
Burnt toast. That's the lyric. Burnt toast.
Yyyyeah I'm all for a good Sunset Shimmer themed crackfic, but I'm gonna have to give this a no. It just really isn't funny.
Oh no, not another mirror pool!
I swear, I thought they were going to bring in Adagio at the end (I wonder how she'd fare, considering she smirks even more than Sunset does), but the two Sunsets together was WAY better. Good job!
Just ignore 8281965. He seems to have let fame, fortune, and success get to his head a little.
I thought the story was actually pretty funny. Good job!
SEQUEL!
8281965
Well, for someone (not me) who doesn't like Sunset, she could actually look like an over confident and self-absorbed girl.
Guess I should have rechecked the lyrics more carefully. My bad.
Good point. However, I didn't really got the chance to use it before, so that was the first time, and will probably be the last. It's indeed not that funny, in retrospect.
Fair enough, thank you for actually taking the time to not only say you didn't like it but also for explaining why. I'd rather see that than a simple downvote. Hope the next ones will be more appealing to you.
8282007
Don't worry, pony Pinkie would never let human Pinkie play with it. (At least, I hope so)
8282017
I thought about bringing her before the other Sunset, but I felt I wouldn't have anything interesting nor funny to say. And thank you.
8282039
I'm glad you find it funny, but I'm also glad MythrilMoth took the time to explain why he didn't like it. Even if comedy is highly subjective, it's still interesting to have a different perspective on things.
8282077
Fifty bucks and I'll write a five thousand words sequel. Heck, for that price, I'll let you choose the color of the rope
8281959
I wasn't expecting less, knowing you
This is freakin hilarious!
You should totally ask Wubcake to do a reading of it! She's the best Sunset VA around!
And this probably isn't Sunset's final form yet. Yay, she won, without even having to use Smile-ken. Or having to transform into SS (Super Sunset). Fun fic, now she just has to go back to Equestria and take the title there.
8282285
Thank you, but as flattering as it is, I... don't think it's worth the effort. Her time would probably be better spent doing readings for other fics, fics better than this one (look at Majin's work for example).
8281965
I think over 9000 is funny, that's just me though.
Nice to see this one posted! Always happy to review any other stuff you write; just send it my way
Yup Sunset is BEST SMIRKER
I love Sunset's smirks tho. like, it pleases me
Idk why but its one of my favourite facial expressions of Sunset. Anyways, this was really good. I loved it. When I first read the title I was like, "Uh oh, this can't be good"
8282174
Eh, don't let 'em get to ya. It's a pretty good story. He's just a bit of a grump.
You can has review!
loved it! Hilarious. Really makes me feel happy
Well then...RARITY GET THE PAINT.
I came here looking for gold.
But I found a diamond instead.
All jokes aside, this fic is really funny
dang
interesting
see Trixie, Sunset doesn't even need her geode to do the smirks.
face it, Trixie, Sunset is gonna way without a doubt. Your toast.
Wow, I did not see that one coming.
there's a way to make everyone leave for their own safety.
Yeah no thx pinkie,