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Fenton


Bonjour ma colère, salut ma hargne, et mon courroux... COUCOU!

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Pinkie Pie has the opportunity to taste, for the first time, one of Derpy's muffins. But it is not what she has expected. Indeed, they are more than good and she is quite displeased by that. Will Twilight be able to calm her friend before she goes on an absurd rampage and prevent any incoming disaster?

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A few edits are needed, but a fun read.

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Thanks for the feedback. It was funny to write and I'm glad it was to read it too. :twilightsmile:

For the feedback, I tried to get a proof-reader but I didn't work out yet, so if you have spoted some big mistakes, feel free to point them out (I've spotted some but I'm not a native English speaker).

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