After a long day of corresponding with the new Dragon Lord, Spike can finally have a well-earned rest. However, a certain mare, freshly reformed and now living in the castle of Friendship, won't let it happen. That may have not be her intention but Spike doesn't care. He will find that pony and give her a piece of his mind.
He isn't prepared for what will follow but he is Twilight Sparkle's Number One Assistant after all, and he will make sure he lives up to this title.
Inspiration taken from chapter 53 of Letters From a Little Princess Monster.
This story has been proofread by the awesome MV. I owe you one Dude.
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Great little story.
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Thanks for the comment and the favourite. I'm glad you liked it.
Pretty good story
hoard sense that's good one
Advice.
"You won," she resumed. "I was hoping to find some advice in it."
Why would RD be proud of him?
droped? You mean dropped.
There were some places where you said stoped instead of stopped. I can't find them though.
Despite the mistakes this was nice.
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Thanks, I appreciate it.
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Your boutique is mine Rarity, I claimed it and now, I can feel every time you move anything when you work. Don't fret, it will be painless.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I still have troubled with double letters in English. I still need and editor and/or a proof-reader.
As the element of Loyalty, Rainbow Dash would be proud to see that Spike didn't let her down, even after all her requests to let her alone. At least, in Starlight's mind.
Pretty good but I suggest finding an editor. Even though this is pretty well done I jab noticed little errors here and there.
Otherwise for the story itself it's nice. Good job.
7719629 Ohhhhhh.
I really, really need more spike and starlight stories in my life. Thank you.
This is a very good one-shot.
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I tried to find one in the pre-reader group when I started my first story but no answer came. I'm still trying. So if anyone is willing to bo the 'chosen one', I'll be more than happy. Moreover, I can be one too. I may not be able to spot grammar mistakes but, without false modesty, I think I can be a good judge on stories with my experience with French litterature (5th years in litterature university). This is what I looked for when I came here, exchange ideas and concepts on stories and litterature in general, related to ponies or not.
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Your welcome. And wait for season7, Starlight will become an alicorn and take Twilight's crown, so she will need an assistant.
Huh? Why would he feel pain?