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Bonjour ma colère, salut ma hargne, et mon courroux... COUCOU!

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Spike is bewildered. When he visited the rock farm with Twilight on Pinkie's invitation, something had been off around Holder's Boulder, something that looked like magic.

What does it mean for the giant egg shaped rock? Could it be more than just a rock? Or was it only a trick of his mind?

Spike is determined to reveal the truth, and with the help of some friends, they might discover that the answers they are seeking are rather unexpected.


Proofread by the awesome Quill Scratch. Thank you for everything.
Inspired by the Writeoff event Has That Always Been There?.

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Comments ( 17 )

Huh...neat. I rarely see Torch utilized in a character-driven way, so this was really refreshing. I like it.

Interesting concept, I really like the suspense.

I likes, even though I figured it out two lines before you told us. But still, have an upvote.

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:moustache: What do I know about ponies?
:duck: evidently quite a bit ExDragon Lord Torch...
:facehoof: TMI.

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That wasn't really planned but it became quite obvious once I figured out what would be Holder's Boulder's origin story.

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Have you really read it? :twilightsmile:
Let's say you have; thank you.

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I didn't intend the story to be a deep mystery but I'm still curious, do you remember exactly where you've figured it out?

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Nice Drawing

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Around here is where the ideas came from:

Even if he didn't want to have anything to do with ponies, his gift has remained

And the connections were formed in my mind around here, even though this has nothing to do with the ending:

"Absolutely not,” said Torch with a patronizing look. ”I don’t know where you got this idea because this kind of power you are talking about is nonsense."

Luna and Torch, huh?
What the hey, I'll ship it.

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Just according to the keikaku then. They are hints for the 'careful' reader.

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Whatever floats your boat (HAHAHAHA!!!) :facehoof:

This was an interesting little story. I did not expect it to go in that direction at all. Nicely done.

Headcannon ACCEPTED!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

This was really neat!

Torch: "You could have sent at least a postcard."

Luna: "No, I really could not."

Nice story. I also think that Luna may have some embarassing teenage-Torch stories to share.

Ship Spike and Ember like rabbits.

Comment posted by Sonicfury01 deleted Dec 18th, 2017
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