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mr lovecolt


“Saints have no moderation, nor do poets, only exhuberance.” ~Anne Sexton

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After Pinkie's new cake test run goes awry, the Cakes are left with a hole in the wall. Mister Cake goes to the hardware store to pick up supplies to fix it, with the help of his kids.

Too bad he forgot just how much a cart full of building supplies weighs.

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Comments ( 30 )

Your description says hold when I think you meant hole.

5553140 Thanks. Obviously, there must be a rule that no matter how many times you look something over, there will always be a typo.

Okay, very sweet ending. Heck, the entire story was very nice. A cute little slice-of-life. Sometimes, there's nothing better. :D

A very sweet story with a couple we don't see enough of. =3

5556367 Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

That ending is just made of cute.

:duck: " Mrs. Cake how is it you can have your stallion do all the male thingies , My precious scales just burps and sleeps , When we're lost he never asks for directions".

:moustache: "Wasup?"

:raritywink: See what I'm saying".

5558351 Hooray for dad jokes and lulz.

But Mr. Cake is a strong stallion

My father was a strong stallion

5561509 Oh some fun looking stories.

5561527 Don't be fooled, the guy's a hack
I'm quoting a freakout he had about his father when he died. He was basically bitching at his dad for parenting him, and telling him that he didn't miss him at all. The hallmarks of the post were that he used ponified speech, the most cringeworthy of being "My father was a strong stallion" and "he would take away my gamecolt"

5561594 But... but... how can somepony with such caring eyes and gentle smirk be bad? And Royal Guard batpony.
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5561645 z-zecora pls
don't tempt me like that

5562387

i spent too long looking for the right clip

“What is it with you two, today.” Pound galloped to the door. “First one to the theatre picks the movie!”

I think the first sentence here was supposed to end with a question mark.

6420487 Thanks. And fixed.

I reviewed this story!

My review can be found here.

6420628 I am certainly glad that a little slice of life fic is put under worth reading. Thank you.

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ow, my heart ;_;

This must be what it's like to read diabetes. I swear.

It was adorable as sin, Lovecolt.

This is (dare I say it) very sweet! A simple life-lesson cheerfully told, just like the show. Only aimed at an older audience. :pinkiehappy:

Nice story with plenty of good feels

D’aww, well this is cute and hits close to home.

He brought it closer to himself and made a beeping sound once more.

“Beep… beep.”

His smile grew larger as he put the stud finder to his chest.

“Beep beep beep be-e-e-e-e-e-ep.”

Significant Other does this as well. Must be a universal thing.
:facehoof:

The ending was quite sweet. It reminds me of a quote from Lazarus Long:
"A man does not insist on physical beauty in a woman who builds up his morale. After a while he realizes that she is beautiful—he just hadn’t noticed it at first. "

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