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mr lovecolt


“Saints have no moderation, nor do poets, only exhuberance.” ~Anne Sexton

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Dusk Shine is tasked with making sure that Princess Bluebelle's Birthday Ball goes well. Bluebelle just wants to be left alone. Fleur De Lis needs to have her chance to remain in the spotlight and within Canterlot's elite. Elusive just wants revenge for his treatment at the Grand Galloping Gala. Will Dusk Shine and Bluebelle learn about new kinds of friendship?

Complete with songs from your favorite Bridleway and Disneigh Musicals!

Chapters (23)
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Comments ( 149 )

Oh no I must have forgotten to include the YouTube link to the Cell. Block Tango from Chicago

3756363 I included a link to it in the authors notes and moved it to the top. I'll work on formatting the link when I get to a computer instead of an iPhone.

I like the premise, but I can do without the musical numbers.:facehoof:
I'll just try to skip those.:ajbemused:

3762647 uh oh... Well yes it will be a good story with interesting villains. I just want to wrap it up in something ridiculous. A departure from my normal writng.

3777099 Why thank you. We've only just begun.

Interesting. Interesting. I would really like to see this as an actual cartoon to boot.

The romance is... Delayed in the air as one side knows friendship and the other does not want companionship. Well this is once romance story worth seeing.

This is getting interesting. Nice job with twisting Elusive's desire of meeting the perfect mare. I can't wait for the next round.

3813249 Thank you. Well now, we have Dusk Shine running through town as well as Bluebelle going to see Luna.

Having fun reading the fic and parody versions of lyrics so far. I sorta like Blueblood (and extending that to his R63 counterpart as well) and I think he could really use more character development in the actual canon itself. With that said, I look forward to reading more of this fic. :) :pinkiehappy:

Man. Fleur as a villain. That is a welcomed change. I'm glad this story got updated.

Sad to see that Dusk was used... Harshly on this occasion. Here's hoping he sees the truth or he would make himself look like an idiot by Bluebelle.

fleur with character?

its about time

Happy to see an update. I like Bluebelle's character development.

Yes. Great chapter. Great Update. I can't wait for the next one. Good job writing in my Dreams. Is this a love story or a Friendship story though? I thought it was going to become a love story later on.

I think I'm addicted to Blueblood. Can't wait for more!

4092571 Bluebelle has to learn about being a friend, first. Don't worry. :twilightsmile:

4093132 Yeah. I love, Love stories. ( I know that sounds wired.) So can you give us a hint at the next song in the musical?

4093193 Well, it would be a bit cheating of me to tell you the song. I wouldn't want you to be prepared for it. I want it to be a surprise.

4093218 Yeah, but will we have to wait till April to know it then?:raritywink:

Eee! Good update. I love Bluebelle, and the auntie-Luna-bonding.. So good! :pinkiehappy:

wait what?
never seen this paring ever......
don't know to like or.....
maybe ill read this.

4152726 Yeah, I was told by others that they had never seen this before with a prior story that I wrote, but Twilight/Blueblood, so I thought to myself, "Huh? Why not make a DuskBelle?"

4152944
do you actually work on her character than making her a bitch the entire time?

4152952 Why yes, I do. She goes through quite a bit of development, as will Dusk Shine.

4093233 Hey, after you read the chapter I just posted, you should totally see the reply I had made to you when you asked for a hint.

Nice!

The banter between Elusive and the other fashion ponies was amusing. It's also a fine example of why I try to avoid getting involved in conversations like that myself, because such one-upping often makes me angry.

Anyhow, good going!

WOW. I did not see Lucy being a villain. So we got two villains a budding romance between royalty, and a bunch of great music. This story has everything. INCLUDING cake.

Welcome to the Dark Side Elusive.

Though in all seriousness I hope we get to see Elusive grow as a character and overcome his anger and resentment.

4158651 It also had this reply to your comment.

Well, it would be a bit cheating of me to tell you the song. I wouldn't want you to be prepared for it. I want it to be a surprise.

Oh gosh, Elusive, not good! :fluttercry: Still, wounded pride can make ponies do foolish things.

Great chapter, as always! :pinkiehappy:

.......Ok well i went into this chapter annoyed by the song in the first one but wow i think i just stumbled on my new favorite story...i already love the cahrchters and such but it would be truly perfect if you could include this theme

Canterlot is sometimes a silly place i wonder what that means?

I found something you may want to edit.

The morning sunlight bled into the hall, and Prince Dusk Shine was bathed in the prismatic light of a rainbow that shoe through the multicolored window. The guards, however, didn’t seem to notice it.

I think that should be "shone", but I could be wrong.

4251181 What? Of course you're wrong... It's a... ummm... "shoe", as in "foe shoe," or, "gurrrl, Prince Dusk Shine was bathed in the prismatic light of a rainbow that shoe through the multicolored window." or...

Lovecolt hangs his head in shame...

I'll... just... go fix it now.

Nice intermission. It made me smile. Best of luck with the next chapter.

“Why?” He replied. “Because you’re Flash Sentry, that’s why! You’re the most beloved background character of the show!”

lol.

This was cool.

Poor Flash. Seems he has a touch of stage fright. Not as bad as Fluttershy, but still...

As I said before... I like it!

Gotta say, LOVE the use of Cellblock Tango. X3

Aw yeah! It just keeps getting better and better. :pinkiehappy:

Plot Twist. Oh boy. The party is going to be a huge Catylist. Fleur and the cake prank, not to mention somepony that we don't know who is the winds father. This is going to get crazy soon.

I really, really want Bluebelle to punch Fluer right in the teeth

This is not going to be a happy Birthday, between: Dusk's crush on Fleur, Bluebelle trying to tell him the truth, Elusive's revenge, and Blue's father's meddling, the ball is going to end in disaster. That is my opinion.

Oh gosh, not good, not good. Duskie, you doofus. :twilightoops:

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