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Stratocaster


Hello! My name is Stratocaster, pegasus, musician, and author extraordinaire! Feel free to browse my work, leave plenty of feedback, and chat with me at any time! :D I hope you enjoy! *waves*

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Bored of his lavish royal lifestyle, and the countless female suitors offered to him, Prince Blueblood takes a vacation from the good life to explore the simple quaintness of a small town. But only in Ponyville does the prince lay eyes on the most beautiful specimen he had ever seen: a brawny mare harvesting apples in the dirt and mud. Little does Blueblood realize how much his encounter with the simple farmer will change his way of life, and hers as well.

(requested by Charzoid)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 92 )

Well... this is an unusual paring, and strange enough one of the ones that I like. If there is a mare that can knock some sense into Blueblood it's Applejack.

I like where this is going. Upvote/track from me.

Here's an excerpt from Applejack's mind:

"Oh hay no, not 'nother one!"

I like it:duck: one: I have only seen this ship two times before. Two: I like it!

This looks awesome, have a like!

This should be interesting. :rainbowderp:

I hate spoiled Blueblood. I'll pass.

Awesome!! Also, A.J. is beautiful inside and out :heart:

Aj needs to channel the Orange side of her family

Blueblood stared at his date savagely eating her meal. "You're...so amazing!"

:rainbowderp: that... was the very last thing I expected... I LOVED IT! another thing I didn't expect was him liking the slide! wow this story is awesome!!!!!

5234402 Why thank you! :twilightsmile: Who hasn't wanted to see Blueblood soaked in mud before?

Daw... I'm really loving this story.

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I give you points for originality and everything, this story was awesome. I hope another chapter comes out soon.

5258708 Thanks I'm glad you like it! :twilightsmile: I'm working on the third chapter as we speak. That's an awful lot of periods ya got there.

Typically, it's a bad idea to point out plot holes and then ignore them.

This was rather.. Sudden.

That was sweet. Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good luck.

If Blueblood wants Applejack as a marefriend and lover, he'll need to fit in with the Apple family.

5283839 Thank you! :ajsmug: Sorry if this chapter took a while to appear.

"Ah, I imagine every night with Applejack will be magical and exciting! Especially since last night when she showed me her mud shoot."
"...Excuse me?" Twilight stared, not sure what that meant.

Didn't think applejack was that kinda mare.:ajsmug:
That or Twilight just has a dirty mind.:moustache:

5285522 I just wanted to see if anypony would catch that! :trollestia:

"Plus, I partly just wanted to have a little fun with ya. Who says a date has to be all dinner n' manners?"

With relief, Blueblood grinned with her. "I said it before, you have an interesting definition of fun."

Then, Applejack leaned in to hug her stallion, nuzzling his chest. "I'm sorry for trickin' you like that. I guess I have a weird way of dealin' with love. You poor thing; you must be achin' all over."

Oh, don't worry. Next time he can swing the ruler. You know, show you how to be a proper Canterlot schoolfilly.

You can make a game of it^^

Oh freaking no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Rarity! You better not be thinking that!!!!!
Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Woah :rainbowderp: So Rarity is going to try to steal blue blood from AJ? this will be interesting.

Comment posted by Anon251P deleted Dec 19th, 2014

Damn. Applejack and Blueblood: Party-Ruiner experts. Made me laugh :rainbowlaugh:

Rarity! No! You can't have Blueblood!

Anyway, great chapter!

"Oh they're just judgmental snobs I'm expected to be seen with, especially Fancy Pants." Blueblood said, sincerely. "That's who I used to be. But none of them compare to my devotion to you, Applejack. I love you. And I'll defend you no matter what situation."

I really, really want for them to be happy—but I'm also frustrated with how the Canterlot crowd is always trotted out as somehow morally inferior to country folk. It's not on that level here yet, and the fact that the princesses are not amused at his behaviour is promising. I really hope it won't turn into a simple 'country-good, high-brow-bad' juxtaposition. Especially since Applejack is quite frankly pretty close-minded and stubborn herself.

I love the Applejack in this fic.

Hello. Sorry for not updating the story recently. I make it a point to formally apologize for not publishing a new chapter within a month. Rest assured, I have the fifth chapter underway. So just hold on to your pretty little flanks! And thank you for your views! :twilightsheepish:

Will the next chapter come soon?

5655444 Quite soon. Sorry for the wait. This is the longest I've gone between chapters for any story. I've just been trying to focus more on schoolwork and what-have-you. If the next chapter doesn't come by the first day of March, I'll eat my own tail. :rainbowderp:

Real life must come first. :) I'm not a nagger. It'll be great fun to read the new chapter, with Blueblood of all ponies in love with Applejack. LOL if he ended up bucking apples with her.

And it's finally here! :pinkiehappy: But there comes a sour turn in this chapter. :pinkiesad2: But I got up to 20,000 words! :pinkiehappy:

Biology doesn't work like that. :rainbowhuh:

Nice chapter. I think it was interesting that AppleJack may be carrying the royal heir now. The Prince better move quick or he is going to have a shot gun wedding.

It's great that this fic is still alive.

5825589 Pony biology does! :ajsmug: I studied it in Cloudsdale University! That degree got me nowhere. :applejackunsure:

5826835 Thank you! Sorry for the long waits. I've been busy with college stuff. :applejackunsure: Plus, a python wouldn't get off my keyboard for a few days.

5826548 Ah yeah! Wedlock pregnancy FTW! :derpytongue2:

5829177 That may just happen. I guess we will learn in the next few chapters.

While this is a good fic, not sure how to feel about Fancy Pants being kind of a jerk. I mean, he seemed like a delightful fellow and one of the few actually nice rich folks I've seen in any animated media. So, yeah not a choice I'm actually for.

Otherwise it's good. {The romance did feel a little...rushed in the beginning but it's slowed down.}

Yeah, I kind of cringed at Applejack's joke too. I've never been a fan of crude humor.

Great chapter. I'm glad that AppleJack's friends are supporting her. I do wonder how Granny and Mac are going to react to the news. I guess we will find out soon.

This was a rather enjoyable story. Good use of the title: My Fair Mare, as opposed to My Fair Lady.
All in all, a thoroughly good read.

Sweet. Story. I think you did a great job. Good luck with future stories. I'll be P.Ming you one.

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If you mean... that... at the end: BOWCHICKAWOWOW!
If you don't: OMG SO CUUUUUTE xD :pinkiehappy:

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