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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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Twilight is dragged to a concert by Pinkie and Rainbow Dash. The only reason she goes is for Sunset. But when she gets in front of Sunset, she makes a complete fool of herself. Can Twilight confess her feelings to Sunset before the night is over?

Based on the Mystery Girl episode of Steven Universe.

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That ending! :rainbowlaugh:

JackRipper
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15% or more on car insurance?

Awww this Wass really sweet, it seemed a bit to rushed though. Maybe you could work a little on that. But that ending was pure gold!

What if Sunset's place was fumigated and needed a place to stay?

Good show, well done.

After that first scene with Shiny tailing them, I just kept thinking that he's probably memorized the family's license plates. Tsk tsk, Twily.

:rainbowlaugh: :facehoof:

"Oh fu-"

HAHAHAHAHA greaat!!! I love itt, es una magnífica historia, you're wrote very nice

Sure did enjoy it, and I laughed a bit over the ending

“Yeah, yeah, I know, hundreds of people die a year from motorcycle accidents. I promise we won't end up like them,” Sunset told her getting on. “Now shut your yap, and live a little!” she kicked the stand off and revved the engine.

LMAO!

Sunset’s lips cut her off, silencing her rambling. The kiss only lasted for a second or two, but to Twilight it lasted a lifetime.

Yay!

“Oh fu—”

Perfect.

“I....I....There’s something...” Twilight started. She didn’t think she could do this. There were so many variables, so many things that could go wrong. One wrong move and their friendship was over. But no moves, and she would never know what could have been. This was the most stressful game of chess she’s ever played in her life.

I believe that you're only supposed to use three ellipses?

Twilight couldn’t contain her excitement. “Of all the variables my mind could come up with, this was one I wasn’t expecting! My math is always precise, so much that I never have to show my work and, and you want me to shut up so you can kiss me again don’t you?”

Yes.

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