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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.

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It's been a while since the last adventure, and Sunset finds Juniper with a film camera during a little walk in the park. With nothing else to do, she decides to help the former gofer.


Written for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest, and therefore isn't canon to either of my established universes as per the rules.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

I ship it, great job!

I read the title as "Changes on Flim" and thought it was a Sunset/Flim ship fic. :applejackconfused:

Huh, well there's a new ship I can add to my battle fleet. Well done!

Nicely done, short fic. You should make more. :ajsmug: The only problem is that it felt just a tad bit rushed, but other than that, great job!

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I do like what you came up with for Juniper's backstory.

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Thanks! Considering that she's interested in movies, it will be only a matter of time before someone realizes I referenced something.

I like how you ship Juniper and Sunset in this fic, well done! BTW, I believe there's a Juniper Montage tag on this site now, you should use it because I can't find this fic on the Juniper Montage tag. And, speaking of which...

With Pinkie Pie taking Fluttershy and Sci-Twi in her Smart Car...

Uh, how? Are you talking about the Smart Fortwo? But that car only seats 2 and there are three persons getting in that car, how the third person can get into that vehicle? I think you should change that text to the specific car model, in this case, you may looking more to this one, the Smart Forfour.

Sunset sets up the alarm and locks the door before leading her honored guest to her motorcycle, this one fitted with a side car for just the occasion.

I think a motorcycle with a side car DON'T fit well for Sunset, because of her image is know to be badass, I prefer seeing her with a badass muscle bike or a sports bike instead, in this case, I like to see her riding the Ducati Monster 1200 S or maybe she could own a sports cruiser like the Ducati XDiavel. No need to change that, this is just my expectation.

Anyway, great job for that fic! You should make more JuniShimmer for someday.

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