Your weird, german Nerd || Something, Something, Dragonmaids
Human Twilight Sparkle is about to move into her new student dorm. While reflecting on her old life and friends, she decides to do something she pushed back far too long:
Writing a letter to Sunset Shimmer.
Now with a reading by Wubcake! I can't even...
And another reading, this time by Jacob M. Keene. Still processing it...
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Well, people did wonder where the human world's Sunset Shimmer was and, let's face it, fate does love her jests at mortals' expense! Just as Sunset helped this world's Twilight Sparkle (as her world's Twilight Sparkle had helped her), now it is Sci-Twi's destiny to help her own world's Sunset Shimmer in turn.
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I couldn't have said it better
This was a great little fic, I would love to see a more from this idea. The only uncertain part I saw of it was why did Sunset leave? A quick line during Twi's reflection stating 'Sunset has things to take care of in Equestria, but she will be back one day' would help, it doesn't need to be elaborated, but just having a goodbye feels rushed.
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Thanks for the critic
To be honest, I intentionally made this part rather vague so that people could insert their own headcanon about this moment, because this has already been done so often on this site. I just wanted to focus on the other parts more.
Not gonna say I called it...
...but I totally called it at the "I'm sorry for you"
Poor Human Sunset though, with all the mane six going to that school! At least Sci-Twi had a magical catastrophe to break the ice!
Nice little piece. Like how you write Sci-Twi.
I would totally read a full story in which Pony Sunset goes back to Equestria, and the humane 6 meet another Sunset.
I wish I could go through and point out the errors for you—as there are many—but I really don't have the time.
That aside, this was a nice piece. I know the 'alt-Sunset and alt-Twilight meeting each other' trope has been used many times, but you pulled this one off nicely. Upvote earned! 
Heyo! Did a reading of your story, I hope you like! ^_^
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After spending nearly an hour just walking in a circle and screaming internally (I wish I was joking) I just watched it and I love it
Thank you
Thank you for this early christmas present! I'm not even sure I deserve it...
OH MY GOD IT'S SUNSET SHIMMER'S HUMAN COUNTERPART!!!!!
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Sure thing!! :D I'm so glad you like it! I loved this story it was very good! ^_^
AHHHHHH... I NEED A SEQUEL, BUT THIS IS THE KIND OF STORY THAT LETS YOU IMAGINE A SEQUEL, BUT I WANT IT SO BADLY!!! *Flails*
Well written, Marwille. I heard this story read by Wubcake. Maybe you’d like to read my stories. Two of which is “Sunset’s Yoga Time” and the follow up, “Namaste, Rainbooms”.
Hello, I'm Jacob M. Keene, a voice actor and narrator. I just wanted to let you know that I did a dramatic reading of this fanfic on my YouTube channel with music and sound effects included, I narrate the story and voiced the person who tripped over Sci-Twis luggage, MuseScript voices Sci-Twi, and SpinelStar voices Sunset Shimmer. I hope you enjoy: https://youtu.be/ARpnNtAgx2g
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Thank you so much!
I can't even express how happy (and mind blown) I am. And I really liked, too, of course.
Thank you!
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Nice👍
Fantastic stuff. A lovely little emotional journey and a great way to open the door to rich possibilities down the road. Thank you for it.
Despite this story was short I liked it, not to mention the ending surprised me but I liked the ending very very much