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Foals Errand


Guess whose back?!

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She's got a dick.

7522254 My guess, yes. Anyways, lets see what happens to our favorite purple bookworm and our favorite school teacher.

Dicklight Sparkle idea aside, this is my theory on the matter. Due to her tutelage under Princess Celestia, Twilight has developed a strong sense of affection for teacher/educator types, such as Miss Cheerilee, and she fancies some hot student/teacher roleplay. But revealing such facts may lead Cheerilee to question if Twilight loves her because of who she is, or because of what she is. It might also make Cheerilee feel like Twilight is belittling her career, or even being predatory with regard to her students.

I can't wait too see what happens!:pinkiehappy:

she has a dick a massive dick
or she really male who crossdress and such,

She's a Displaced quadrupedal pony cosplaying as Twilight ...

Sooo the fact that you posted this means you're doing okay, yeah?

(Haven't read yet, but just wanted to pop in and say hope you're feeling better!)

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Bad virus but i'll be fine.:twilightsmile:

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Man, I hope it's something like that, but I'm pretty sure it's a dick. *sigh*

This is a really sweet start to something good, I think. Hope you're feeling better, Foals!

Whose the artist for the coverart?

Finally got around to reading, woo!

Great start! Hopefully it'll be worth the tease, for us AND Cheerilee. :raritywink:

I'm with most everyone, Twi definitely has a dick... but I don't think that's the issue so much as why.

I'm betting this version of Twilight is trans. Something about her interactions just feels that way. I just don't think it's one of the "usual" conceits for why she has a penis.

Or maybe it's just good old FutaTwi. Guess we'll have to wait and see!

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I'm still going with it being something deeper than a dick. Like having the hots for teachers and wanting to be a naughty student in need of disciplining.

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Nah, she wants to discipline the teacher. Revenge is sweet. :twilightblush:

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Some tiny nitpicks

“Don’t worry Spike when you grow up i’m sure

Spike rolled his eyes under his palms with a grunt. “Yeah, but it’ll never be you that i’ll want to see! It’s just gross!”

AnywayS, anyway, anywayS, anyway

Stick to one, preferably to standard "anyway" as "anyways" lead to the dark side truly nasty "a wayS", "a hallways" etc. ;)

cute, so cute and lovey how they support her no matter what,

This was remarkably sweet and tugged at the heartstrings. Excellent characterization of everyone there.

sorry you lost me here.

Better put a triple-reinforced soundproof barrier just in case.

7769680 Doing that One i used to be a boy thing. just no.

7769703 there's nothing wrong with Twilight being trans

Very sexy and erotic work, Foals. Cheerilee has an eager and willing student, here. :D

Now that Twilight's an Alicorn now, would that mean her cock become cocks the next time those two will meet up again?

... I feel personally attacked by this story. I like.

there are nitpicks over style but everyone writes differently.

I'm sorry but you combined horn jobs, teacher play, and spanking which are the three fetishes I find the most hilarious and can't really take seriously. but it was still enjoyable to read (despite the supreme lack of contractions, but again, style). overall a nice piece. there's not enough trans-inclusive fics on here, I feel. I'm not big on clop in general but everything else was handled pretty well. I like.

futa twinlight or dickgirl twinlight ?

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Neither. She is male to female transgender

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